SwaRon FF: Meant to be... Or Maybe Not... [Chapter 6 is UP] - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept.. 😃
waiting eagerly for d update...
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concept is simple amazing and cs are good...
do continue soon and pm me
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Nice concept
waiting waiting
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awesome concept..
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Wow, another FF. Good job :)
Just loved the concept absolutely <3
The characters also look quite interesting.
Post the first chapter soon.
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It seems a good concept and going by your history if works I really hope it turns out to be as amazing as always. Continue soon.
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Chapter 1


[Before you'll start reading let me tell you'll that this story will be more from Sharon's POV.. Swayam ka POV bhi milega but not as much as Sharon's]

Sharon: Mom I'm going.. Bye.. Bye dad

Sharon said while walking to the door checking her texts..

Shweta: Subha hui nahi ki iss ladki ko bahar jaana hota hai.. Ghar hai koi lodge nahi jahan sirf raat main sone aaye

Her mom Shweta shouted from the kitchen..

Sharon: Come on yaa mom you know na abhi events lined up hai to companies main dance sikhane jana padhta hai!

Sharon stood at the door with an irritated look..

Shweta: Aare but breakfast toh kar le!

Her mom said while walking out of the kitchen..

Sharon: Mom I'm goin.. Kriya is waiting.. Abhi wahan jana hai as Kriya mujhe koi important news dena chahti hai..

Shweta: Kitni baar kahan hai tujhse usse Kriya nahi Bhabhi bola kar.. Woh teri bhabhi hai..

Sharon (irritated): Aare but Meri "Bhabhi" ne hi kahan hai ke main unhe Kriya bulayu.. Toh problem kya hai?

Shwet: Agar raat main late ho jaye toh Swayam ko call kar dena woh pick karne aa jayega..

Sharon: Yes Mom! Ab main jaau?!

Shweta: Haan! Jaa but time pe khaana khaa lena..

Sharon (leaving the house): Yes Mom!!

Sharon left the house in an irritated mood as it was her mom's daily duty to stop her and let her go only after a list of the same instructions.. She was walking to her cousin Rey's house which was just a lane away..

Sharon (to herself): Yaar yeh Mom ki problem kya hai?? Roj roj same cheez bol bol ke bore nahi ho jaati? Aur upar se Kriya.. Sorry Meri Pyaari Bhabhi bhi kal raat se mujhe 1000 baar message kar chuki hai ke late mat hona aur news kya hai woh usse face-to-face batana hai.. Gosh!!! Roj roj ke iss natak se I'm tired.. Just need a break!

While Sharon was walking somebody jumped right next to her and tapped her shoulder scaring her for a moment.. When she saw the lean guy standing next to her she got all the more irritated and started walking with a red swollen face that would burst any moment.. Yes it was her best friend and the only guy who had the nerves to irritate her at the wrong time.. Swayam Shekhawat..

[Swayam Shekhawat! Unfortunately My Best Buddy and neighbour from almost 5 years now.. Irritated me like hell but when needed always stands by me.. We have been together through all ups and downs of life.. Our friendship is really very precious to me and I don't know what would I do without him around me to irritate the hell out me at every given point in life]

They talked while walking to Rey and Kriya's house..

Swayam: Do you have this sickness of not wishing me a Good Morning' and instead showering me with your death glares??

Sharon: Shut up! Swayam! I'm already irritated aur dimag kharab mat kar..

Swayam: Aare yaar now every morning tera aur aunty ka yeh argument hota hai and I thought you were use to it by now..

Sharon: Oh please! I just hate it when I'm questioned early in the morning.. Why can't I just start my day smiling and laughing..

Swayam: You can but the thing is you don't want to..

Sharon: Swayam please not now! By the way why are you walking with me?

Swayam: Because I want to!

This guys was surely crazy to get on to her nerves in such a situation.. Sharon just passed him a death glare to which he chuckled..

Swayam: Oh hello! I'm taking you'll to town at 10 today for your rehearsals that's why I'm coming with you..

Sharon: Toh we have to leave at 10 and its 8.. Why the hell are you coming now??

Swayam: Aare.. It's my wish!

Sharon: Will you ever learn to give Rey, Kriya and Me some privacy??

Swayam: Nope!

He said while popping the p'

Sharon: Argh!!!! Just go to hell!

Swayam: Mind to send me the address? Would love to visit you there!

Sharon: Swayam Shekhawat! You are so dead!

And that was it Sharon ran behind Swayam for his life.. Swayam ran in the direction to their destination and literally banged on the door which made Kriya run and receive the person who was so impatient.. Kriya moved aside as she saw Swayam at the door and rolled her eyes as Swayam ran into the house.. Sharon followed him but huffed and puffed after entering the house.. She banged her feet on the floor and stormed to the kitchen to drink so water.. Swayam laughed looking at her reaction and laid down on the sofa as even he was exhausted..

Kriya: Ho gaya tum dono ka?! Tum roj ek dusre ke saath jhagadke thak nahi jaate..

Swayam (trying to catching his breath): Don't look at me! Uss Siren ko bolo subh subh bajna chalu ho jaati hai..

Sharon: Haan kyunki tujh jaisa Bandar roj subh mere sarr pe nachne aa jaata hai..

Kriya: Ok! Cut it both of you! Swayam upar jaa.. Rey upar study main hai.. mujhe Sharon se kuch baat karni hai..

Swayam: Fine! Continue! Ab tum hi sambhalo apni uss jungle billi ko!

Sharon put out her tongue and glared at him.. Kriya looked at both of them and smiled looking at their childish behaviour but this is something that made their friendship so special.. She walked to Sharon who was now sitting on the kitchen counter waiting for the water to boil for her coffee..

Sharon (pouting cutely): What's for breakfast?

Kriya: Your favourite.. Cheese and Ham sandwiches!!

Sharon's face immediately lit up and she looked a Kriya with glittering eyes.. Kriya chuckled at her sudden change in reaction and handed her a plate of the sandwiches..

Sharon (relishing the sandwich): YYUUUMMM.. I just love the food you make.. I'm telling you I'll shift here permanently..

Kriya (pouring a cup of coffee for both): Anytime.. Ab peth-puja ho gayi ho toh baat kare? I have something important to tell you..

Sharon had a serious expression while eating and was attentively listening to Kriya..

Here Swayam had gone to Rey who was sitting in his study watching news and sipping his coffee.. Swayam entered while wishing him..

Swayam: Hey Good Morning!

Rey: Morning! Morning! Aaja baith.. Phirse Sharon ne bhagaya lagta hai..

Swayam chuckled and Rey joined him..

Swayam: haan usse toh maza aata hai.. But ek baat aaj tak mujhe samjh nahi aayi..

Rey: Kya?

Swayam: Yeh Sharon aur Kriya ka chakkar kya hai? I mean kehene ko they know each other from the past 3 years and by relation they are nanand-bhabhi.. Aur harr roj they need these few hours exclusively for each other.. Yeh kya chakkar hai?

Rey (giggling): Chakkar yeh hai that they are like each others heartbeat.. They can't live without talking to each other.. Kabhi kabhi toh if I don't know where Kriya is toh I just call Sharon and ask her.. Kriya calls Sharon her shadow.. That's why they just need these few hours to say whatever they want.. I mean the inner most secret and all..

Swayam (amazed): Quite Amazing! I mean surprised you not jealous (giggles)

Rey: Nah! They both are the two important pillars in my life.. In fact I'm glad about their relation nahi toh you know those typical Nanand-Bhabhi relations.. This is completely opposite..

Swayam: Yeah! True!

Rey and Swayam continued chatting on random things as usual.. Here Kriya had built up hell lot of suspense for Sharon.. She had started getting nervous and had even stopped eating..

Kriya: You know na Shar aaj kal Studio main kitna crowd badh gaya hai.. And 4 instructors seem a bit less to handle all the batches and also the other commitments..

Sharon (confused): Yeah.. So??

Kriya: I'm planning to appoint a new choreographer who will be my assistant..

Sharon sighed in relief and sipped her coffee as her throat had gone all dry due to stress..

Sharon (causally): Toh who is it? Anyone I know??

Kriya (grinning): Yeah!

Sharon (taking another sip): Who?

Kriya: You..

Sharon spat out all the coffee in her mouth and started coughing uncontrollably.. Kriya chuckled and rubbed her back giving her a glass of water to drink.. After Sharon's cough's settled a bit she looked at Kriya with a shocked expression..

Sharon: You can't be serious!

Kriya (smiling): I'm hell serious about it.. iss liye Swayam is taking us to town so that we can official get you registered as a choreographer..

Sharon (shocked): WHAT!! You mean that jerk knew?!

Kriya: Yeah but now don't blast out at him.. I told him not to tell you otherwise I would have missed out of this million dollar reaction of yours..

Sharon (a bit unsure): But are you sure about your decision? Because..

Kriya: Shhh.. No if's no buts.. Keep them for dance and yes you are joining me from today itself.. Am I clear?

Sharon (grinning): Yes! (hugging Kriya) Thank you so much for this!

Kriya: Shut up! No Thank you's and Welcome's between us..

Sharon and Kriya continued with their chat when Kriya suddenly blasted another question at Sharon that held her off guard..

Kriya: Are you sure Swayam and You are just best friends??

Sharon was shocked listening to that question but then somehow managed to put up a straight face and answered..

Sharon: What sort of a question is that?? Of course we are Best friends!!

She said so but sounded a bit unsure about her own answer and only Kriya could manage to do that to her..

Kriya (looking straight at her): Really!! Why are you so unsure?

Sharon: Aare but you asked such a question out of the blue..

Kriya: Haan so?? Friend hi hai na.. Toh shocked kyun thi and why are you fumbling??

Sharon (fumbling): Aare.. But.. You.. One minute! What? When did I fumble?

Kriya: What was that right now?

Sharon chose not to answer and jumped down and stood straight.. Took her coffee and started walking out of the kitchen..

Sharon (calling out Rey): Bhai! Your wife has gone mad!

Kriya: Face it Shar!

Sharon (turning to her): Oh please ya! You are just putting crappy things in my mind..

Kriya: Its not "crappy" but the truth..

Sharon (ignoring): Whatever!

Kriya (in mind): Inn dono ka kuch nahi hoga.. (to Sharon) By the way I'm making biryani tonight..

Sharon (fiddling with her mobile): Cool I'm here for dinner then.. And dare you invite that jerk!

Swayam (walking down the stairs): Tumne bulaya aur main chala aaya!

Sharon (under her breath): Aa gaya! Sarr pe naachne.. Bandar..

Swayam immediately turned to her and smirked..

Swayam (with a raised eyebrow): I heard that!

Sharon (attitude): I meant that!

Swayam (while looking at Sharon): Kriya I'm here for dinner too..

Sharon: Such a jerk na!

Swayam: You asked for it, Sweetheart!

Sharon just made a disgusted face and sat on the chair reading through a few texts hoping she could kill this jerk some day.. But Kriya's question had left an impression in her mind.. She was thinking over it again and again.. But got to no conclusion.. She chose to concentrate on her first day of work instead of wasting her time on such "crappy" thoughts..


NEXT

Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola,
A Big Big Thank You to all of You'll for all the comments and like..

As promised I have updated the 1st Chapter.. And woh bhi within 24 hours..

I hope you'll enjoyed reading it..

Please do leave in your comments and hit the like button

Will update next part soon too


Love

Tanvish
Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved the way u penned all the bonding between Krisha, Swaron n Reyam
Sharon in doubt for her friendship with Swayam
Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres
meih amazingg update nahi kahungi
becoz it was much much more
srly kaisey kartey ho yeh sab i dont know
tis update was a pure visual treat for me
i luv the way you use crisp, clear,
short words that communicate the message.
the thought behind each scene was very well executed
There are two kinds of writer
: those that make you think, and those that make you wonder
.n i think you fall in the second category
ur piece is a perfect blend of
concise writing and simplified wording
which are essential to
effective communication of complex ideas.
i was completely shocked whn i saw ki update khatam ho gaya 😲
coming to ur ff
i loved the small section of sharon n her mother
the scene preciding after tat was my fav
it was swayam's enrty
who cruely gave sharon a mini heart attack 😆
i loved how you showed an invisible thread
b/w swayam n sharon thru thr pyaar wale jhagrey 😳
kriya n sharon's bond was shown more on a diff level
sister not by relation but by feelings
i also saw a cute sa bond b/w swayam n kriya n swayam n rey
which was very beautifully penned
i dunno why but ur every update reminds me of a quote
so here it is
''Style has always been in my mind the author's Self,
the creative expression of that Self.''
do update soon 😃

regards-rosy


Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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