SwaRon FF: Meant to be... Or Maybe Not... [Chapter 6 is UP] - Page 15

It was a fantastic update

An awesome update

I really liked the beginning portion, it was very smooth

This is called creative writing because when I say creative writing, it should be what connects to you

Regarding connection, the bond that you showed between Kriya & Sharon was beautiful, mind blowing in one sense because Kriya just knows that Sharon is gonna say it and she is trying so hard

Practicing in front of the mirror just to say these words to Swayam, which was very very nice

Coming to the portion where Swayam reacts like that he is ghussa and kahin na kahin he wants to know what is going on in her mind but he can't

And when she left him without an answer that was very confusing for him

That portion was fantastically penned because usko kharab lag raha tha kahin na kahin and then she found him right on the terrace waiting for her as usual and then they had that small sa, chota sa sweet sa fight which was very very beautifully penned

I have to say this ki that section was the best where she goes to him and talks to him about them being as normal as there were, the friendship quotient will never change and that relationship is all about maturity

So it was very nice, the update had it all from romance to them keeping their friendship alive

I really liked it

Second I need to say this that this update showed a very nice variety, variety in the sense as a writer I don't know what to say, I mean you have grown and the growth was fantastic, because ek hi update main kahin friendship ki bond ka discussion ho raha hai jahan Kriya and Sharon hai aur ek hi chapter main wahan Swayam aur Sharon ka, dono hi kitne alag friendship ke bonds hai and yet you tried to justify so beautifully and then there was another aspect that was Swayam and Sharon's relationship and woh aspect tumne itni beautifully cover kiya hai

I think all the aspects, I was just waiting jahan Rey and Swayam ka ek conversation ho and kahin na kahin Kriya and Rey ka ek conversation ho jahan you know they have this heart to heart, finally Swayam and Sharon, they are together, aisa ek chahiye tha mujhe, iss chapter main somewhere, but apart from that you justified the whole chapter

I mean that was my only complaint, but apart from that I really really really loved this chapter you can understand that and I don't have words to form right now, how to say this, how to convey it to you, that you're writing it improved a lot, I mean tremendous growth hua hai, tremendous and most of all I wanna say this that growth ke sang sang harr jagah ek emotion hota hai, ek jagah ek pause hota hai, required pause, ek jagah ek apt, ek paraphrase rehta hai, harr cheez main ek language pe command rehta hai yeh sab itne beautifully tumne add kiya hai poore chapter main ki I was like ek nahi baar do nahi, iss poor ff ka yeh mera best chapter rahega in context to your English, in context to your emotion, in context to the required pauses that you have given

I think very very innovative bol sakte hai, bahut jyada creative bol sakte hai and sabse jyada agar yeh chapter koi ek emotion touch kiya hai toh woh hai expressive

This chapter was actually talking about each characters feelings, kaun kis way se jaa raha hai, kaun kis notion main baitha hai, kaun kya feel kar raha hai and this chapter is all about how much they felt so expressive is the right word

I'm really happy you've given me this update

Hope to read many more updates in this coming week