SwaRon FF: Meant to be... Or Maybe Not... [Chapter 6 is UP]

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Chapter 5?? :O :O
Oh cool! :D
i'll unres both the comments now...reading :P

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I love you for this..🤗
Reading your update after a 6 hour exam was like..heaven..
Beautiful update.
Sharon trying to play a prank with Swayam using Kamya 🤢 she lost her brains at that instant i guess.
her plan backfired..but well did something else too 😛
Swayam finally confessed!
and they kissed too. 😳
and after that Sharon says 'i think so' =_=
that girl has gone bonkers :P
am really eager for the next chap.
thanks for the surprise and PM 😆

Cheers'
nishi

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Amazing updates!! Nice surprise though..!:D

Loved the way Swayam and Sharon are realising their feelings, especially Sharon. She is ubber cute. When she is drunk, when she is confused, when she blushes... Ahh!! Super adorable!!

Swayam as usual teasing her and eternally loving her!☺️

Kriya is shown so mature and I love that about her.

The confession part was... .

So excited to see how Sharon will confess!

Update Soon!! And we don't mind such kind of surprises!!:P

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

wow👏

wat an update😃

so this was the surprise 😃

my god i just loved it❤️

they r just meant to be😊

update soon😊

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Awesome , amazing, mind blowing chapters.loved both the chapters.

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sonii

@sonii

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

i cant stop going all aaawww over this chapter!!

started out rough and scary.. but aw the ending!!!!

please please please to god continue this fastt :D :D

that was beautifully written.. sharon's stupidity amazing portrayed :P

and swayam as always.. unpredictable ;)

please continue soon :)

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Hey Tanvish,

Such a new n lovable concept u have,I got so much interest after reading ur updates constanlty since yesterday night,Actually i am one of the inactive reader here,I felt bad after seeing my reserved spot here like no tomorrow,I think its very long time since i had comment on ur works..But literally u are one of the Amazing writer here,The concept is just amazing with a duo of interesting characterization..On the begining part,glad to read the way u penned Krisha,Reyam,Kriyam,Kriyaansh n SwaRon bond,Its like all in one availablity in single store..Their relationships were beautifully narrated as well as described..I just loved all the updates so i am just writing u a short synopsis including the parts,i loved most..I like ur way to penned sharon feelings overall,She is way too confused but damm concerned towards swayam after that dinner part,I also like ur writing at dialouge delivery,,Such a funny n enjoyable dialouges of SwaRon like tom n jerry..Terrece sequence was serious one where u showed ur beautiful writing to penned sharon confusion at higher extent..I also loved kriya as a catalyst here,Her bond with sharon is way too adorable..Now in bike ride sequence,jealous n irritated sharon is like treat to read,She is so adorable character,The all sequences u showed in chapter 4 n 5 is wonderful read for me..I got surprised to read an epic confession from swayam side,It was sudden yet awestruck moment for sharon..I am glad that she also finally confessed her feelings for swayam in front of kriya..So all i can say is i just loved it..Ur story is progressing great..So please update soon as ur comfort,i will be waiting..

Thanx for ur all PM's

And really sorry for this late,but u continue to send me PM's

Prateek

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

edited ma comment on page 19

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bhumika gaur

@minimini66

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

oh my god 😳... i read the 5 chapters all together and they were really fabulous 👍🏼
you write beautifully 👏
everything is amazing about this ff... i am really in love with it 😳
the last confession by swayam was beautiful 😳
upadate soon plsss 😉
MINI