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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

i think swayan found out... the diary is about to reveal it...
and the reaction will be worth to see it... do continue soon and pm me


lets see if you're right😉
will continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: zulfinazi

amzng
taani's father killed jivan he is so evil
reyam prt was nic
rey reading diary nw want knw wat hpnd nxt
updt sn


Glad you liked it
will update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: navk

res/ unres
sanyu😡 tune meri 1st positon le li
wonderful update
when that old man told the story
that part was so good
& diary part was superb


Thnk u behena😃
sanyu ko dekh 1st position to le li comment abhi tak unrev nahi kiya😭
glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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  • Normal text means present situation
  • Italic black means things written in diary
  • Italic violet means flashback


PART 4


Uss ek raat ne humari zindagi ko ek naya mod de diya. Baba ki kahi hui har baat humare kaano mein goonj rahi thi. Chah ke bhi hum ye nahi bhool paa rahe the ki humare baba khud ke liye ek masoom ki zindagi barbaad kar rahe hai. Kya karte hum? Nahi jaante the..ki humari zindagi humein kaha leke jaa rahi hai..bas itna jaante the ki humein Reyaan ko iss sab se bachana hoga. Aur iske liye humein sirf ek hi raasta dikha. Humein Reyaan ke paas jaake unhe vo tasveer banane se rokna hoga. Uss raat..baba ki nazar se bachke..hum bhaag gaye.

Reyaan scooped her in his arms taking him inside his house. He laid her down on the bed making her comfortable. Finally taking breathe, his gaze falls on her face. She was angelic. Just like in his dreams. Soon he realised that she was unconscious and all wet. He ran to his living room and took his umbrella to go out and call the doctor. Before he could step out of the house he felt an urge to see her again. He went back to the room finding her lying unconscious on the bed like the way before. He smiled and ran away to catch the doctor.

"Reyaan, ye ladki kaun hai." Dr. Tripathi asked as he examined the girl in front of him.

"Pata nahi Dr. darwaze ke saamne behosh mili." Reyaan said.

"Hmm..zyada ghabrane ki baat nahi hai. Bas thakaan ke kaaran chakkar aa gaye aur gir gayi. Thodi der mein hosh aa jayega. Tab tak tum mere saath bahar chalo, nurse inke kapde badal degi." Reyaan looked at the nurse who assured him with a smile. He moved out of the room letting nurse do her work.

"Reyaan, mein ab chalta ho. Vo ladki bilkul theek hai. Par agar kuch gadbad ho to mujhe bula lena. Dhyan rakhna." Dr. Tripathi patted his shoulder before moving out of the house. Reyaan was about to close the door when Dr. Tripathi turned back and called him.

"Aur ek baat, kaafi bhari toofan lagta hai." He said looking at the sky. "Darwaza dhang se band kar lo!! Lagta hai ye toofan aasani se nahi jayega." He smiled and closed the door behind him tightly. Just after he made sure that the door was closed , he heard a sound of something falling in the same room.

Rey became startled as swayam flipped the side of the bed and in the process his hand fall on the glass kept on the side table. As a reflex the glass fall and break into pieces. He kept the diary aside bookmarking its page and started collecting the broken glass pieces. Suddenly a piece prick his finger and soon it started to bleed. To stop the bleeding he kept his finger inside another glass filled with water. The blood oozing out of the finger started coloring the water. Suddenly he realised something as he concentrated on the red water in the glass. He became stunned as the blood started taking unusual shapes forming different figures. The water inside the glass was all clear with the blood concentrated in the middle forming just one word- HELP.

He stumbled and took back steps quickly. Soon the word disappeared and the blood too was gone. He looked at his injured finger. The wound healed on its own. Already shocked on the happenings, his gaze fall on the diary again. He wanted answers and as of now only this diary could give him that.

"Aap uthiye mat. Aapko aaram ki zaroorat hai." Reyaan said as he kept the pillow behind her back to give her relief.

"Aap?" She asked him.

"Mein Reyaan Shastri ho. Aap mujhe mere ghar ke bahar behosh mili." She smiled at his gesture.

"Aap aaram kijiye. Kuch bhi chahiye to mein bahar hi ho. Bula lijiyega." He made sure she was comfortable and move out of the room letting her rest. The effect of medicine soon made her drift into sleep.

The drizzling weather and sounds of lightening disturbed her sleep. She opened her eyes and found herself in the completely dark room all alone. Her hands moved to the jar kept at the side table looking for water. It was empty. Her thirst suddenly became unbearable. She quickly get out of the covers and went outside to look for the water. As soon as she kept her feet on the ground, she felt a little dizzy. But before she could hold anything for support, she felt a pair of hands wrapping slowly around her ankles. She became startled and slowly moved her eyes downwards. A pair of creepy hands appearing out of her bed were pulling her inside. She stumbled and the strong grip made her fall on the ground with a fierce force. Before she could actually realize what was happening, the grip around her feet tightened and the unknown force started pulling her beneath the bed. She started screaming and looking for a support. Her hands grasped a leg of nearby tightly clutching it tightly. The force was increasing every second making her lose her grip. She hold all her courage together for once and screamed 'Reyaan!!' for help.

He was sitting beside the painting while trying to figure out what was missing. He became startled as he heard her voice coming from the room. He ran in haste to the room leaving everything. As soon as he opened the door, he found her lying unconscious on the ground. He quickly made her lie on the bed and covered her with quilt. His hands start to caress her forehead which was sweating badly. She suddenly started to fumble in sleep. He tried to understand what she was trying to say.

"Mujhe bachalo! Vo mujhe maar denge!!" She kept on fumbling and started shivering. He felt an urgency to calm her down. He quickly hold one of her hand tightly.

"I am here. Don't worry!" He said and as if she actually listened and understood her words, she tightened her grip on his hand and slept with a peace visible on her face.

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Uss raat Reyaan hamare saath hi rahe. Bahot dare hue the hum. Puri raat dhang se so nahi paaye. Har waqt bas yahi darr ki kab kaha se humpe hamla ho jaaye. Par jab tak Reyaan waha the humein kuch nahi ho sakta tha. Vo puri raat humara haath pakad ke bethe rahe. Kaash sab waisa hi rehta. Kaash hum hamesha saath reh paate...

Dil sunta hai Teri sada

A rubaru Ab toh zara

Bechain si Meri zinda..gi

Sun kar teri Yeh dastaan...

Rey was feeling all the words in the diary. Unknowingly he could feel her pain, Her fear . As he read further his heart sinks more thinking of her condition. He wanted to soothe her pain, relief her of all the tensions but how? His eyes suddenly shifted to the window. It looked like a hailstorm was about to strike the place. He looked at the painting beside him and slowly caressed it with his hand as if trying to feel her.

Jeena mera... Asan kar..

Tu milke yeh..Ehsaan kar

Kahin kho gaya Chehanu se kuhun

Tere dard ko Ab jaan kar...

Reyaan realised that Tanushree was shivering from fever. He started changing the wet cloth on her forhead to give her some relief. The whole night, a small lantern flickered as he kept on changing the cloth only until he realised that she was fine now. He finally relaxed but suddenly his gaze moved to her left hand. In her wrist, he found a very weird mark.


He hold her wrist and merely touched the mark by caressing it with his thumb.

Jaaniya.. O.. jaaniya...

Bas roye dil mera

Ansoo palkon pe

Nahin hai bewaja...a..

Dil hai gum sada jaaniya

Suddenly the window panes starts to strike with full force indicating the storm had picked up pace. He quickly went to close them and as soon as he turned after assuring that everything was closed he came to her. Her eyelids were glittering indicating some tears. She was crying in sleep. He quickly wipe them off resting his hand on her cheek and spend the rest of the night beside her.

Rey felt the same presence around him as he kept on reading every word of diary. It was like she was narrating it all in front of him. His eyes moved to the portrait. Her smile. So pure..so innocent..still hiding so many secrets. Now he could realise what those secrets were. The pace of storm increased as more snow starts to gather on the hills.

Tujhe paa liya Ya kho diya

Iss baat par Dil ro diya

Ke chaah kar Tu na aa.. sake

Tu waqt hai Guzra hua...a...a..

Tanushree was touring Reyaan's house when she found her incomplete portrait lying at the centre of his big painting hall. She touched it and remembered her motive to come there. She looked at the door where he was standing with a little smile on his face. Anticipating that she might be confused, he wanted to give her answers but to his shock she just came to her and looked at him with a blank expression- something he just couldn't understand.

Tujhe rakh liya In yaadon ne

Ek phool sa Kitabon me

Iss dil me tu Rahega sada ha...

Aur mehkega In sanson mein..

"Mein ye tasveer puri karna chahta hu. Tum madad karogi meri?" Reyaan asked her with a hope.

"Aap iss tasveer ka khayal apne dimag se nikal dijiye. Bhool jaiye isse!" Tanushree said making him utterly shocked.

"Mein ab apne iss adhoore sapne ko nahi chod sakta. Mujhe isse poora karna hi hai." Reyaan said with adamant visible in his eyes.

He left the room leaving her all alone to glare at the painting and identify whether the painting had more of evil powers or his LOVE.

Raaton mein tu jal jata hai

Chehre mein tu dhal jata hai

Tara hai tu mujh mein toota sa...a..

Neendon se jaga deta hai

Palkho ko bhigo deta hai

Dariya hai tu mujh me dooba sa...a...

Har waqt khwabon ki tarah...

Tu aata raha...

Reyaan was busy in looking intensely at his incomplete painting. He was fuming in anger and frustration. No matter how hard he try to complete this, he just can't. In frustration he started throwing other paintings and ooze his anger on them until he found her grip on his arm stopping him. He looked at her with the same anger but she was least affected. She kept her grip intact and came closer to her. He kept looking at her but soon the anger vanished as he found another feeling empowering him as her body came closer to his. It was their burning LOVE. Love, which was keeping them strong even after so many evil powers working against them.

Jaaniya.. O... jaaniya...

Din kya raat kya

Ahat ho koi Lagta hai sada...a..

Ke tu hai wahan jaaniya

Jaaniya.. O.. Jaaniya...a...

Bas roye dil mera

Ansoo palkon pe Nahin hai bewaja...a..

Dil hai gum sada jaaniya

She brought her lips close to his while closing her eyes while his face which was showing just anger a few minutes became more soft. His tears starts to trickle down his face, as he felt like a thirsty man getting a oasis after ages. He hold her face and kissed her like his life depend on it. She let him take out his anger, frustration, pain and most importantly love for her.

He laid her on the bed looking at her innocent yet determined face. His desires and feelings started to ooze as she herself invited him to make her HIS for ever- The only way at last she could find of to make him come out of spell of the portrait. Under the quilt, their bodies meet followed by the unison of the two souls. Forgetting every bit of EVIL outside those four walls, they lived the moment as they got lost in each other's touch.

Uss raat hum hamesha hamesha ke liye Reyaan ke ho gaye. Humne apna pyaar pa liya tha par darr lag raha tha ki kya ab bhi vo uss tasveer ko poora karna chahenge. Humein kisi bhi tarah unhe iss sab se door bhejna tha. Aur humare saamne sirf ek hi raasta tha...

Rey turned to the next page to read further but to his shock, there was nothing. He turned some more pages, but still...empty. He looked through the whole diary and found nothing.

"Iske aage to kuch nahi hai..aage kya hua tha?" He murmured to himself. He became frustrated and threw the diary much to swayam's annoyance whose pretty sleep got disturbed by the sudden noise.

"Kya kar raha hai rey?! So jaa!" He said in half sleep and slept again.

Sleep was not even closer to Rey. He couldn't even think of getting on bed. There were still the questions left unanswered and time was running like hell. He looked at the clock. 4:00 am. Just a few hours more and they'll be leaving the city. All hopes seem to drain and the hope which ignited with the diary seem to have lost somewhere as he found himself helpless once again. His mind was clueless and everything in his life went blur. Now only one thing was important. The truth. The truth of what actually had happened. The truth of Tanushree and Reyaan. And the most important fact..the truth of what was his role in this story?

P.S.-- I am about to end this SS. I'll take one or utmost two more parts. 😊 Ending is about to be here😃 Tell me hows it. Tomorrow is my exam Pray for me😕

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
res/unres
wonderful update behena
so finally tanushree reached
to reyaan
wow taani giri b to reyaan k ghar k aage
full on setting k saath😆😆
flashback scene was so amazing
u potray all the emotions , all the
things so well
it was like am watching & feels all those things
i love tanushree 's concern 4 reyan
but poor reyan his all hopes was ended
when tanu deny.
i have a doubt

But before she could hold anything for support, she felt a pair of hands wrapping slowly around her ankles. She became startled and slowly moved her eyes downwards. A pair of creepy hands appearing out of her bed were pulling her inside. She stumbled and the strong grip made her fall on the ground with a fierce force. Before she could actually realize what was happening, the grip around her feet tightened and the unknown force started pulling her beneath the bed. She started screaming and looking for a support. Her hands grasped a leg of nearby tightly clutching it tightly. The force was increasing every second making her lose her grip. She hold all her courage together for once and screamed 'Reyaan!!' for help.
ye part kya sach mai hua tha ya
phir it was a dream
song was fab & appro
with the situation
that mark was weird bit it seems too much intersting
so finally they became 1
that part was amazing
& the way u show written part of diary
it was so touchy
am confused that wats the role of rey 😕😕
& taanya & tanushree both r some how
similar names😕😕
update soon dear
Edited by navk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Urghhh why d diary was blank furthur????

U portrayed tanushree's feelngs soo wonderfully...

Lovelt...

N tgen ye wala scene :
s. He kept the diary aside bookmarking its page and started collecting the broken glass pieces. Suddenly a piece prick his finger and soon it started to bleed. To stop the bleeding he kept his finger inside another glass filled with water. The blood oozing out of the finger started coloring the water. Suddenly he realised somethconcentrated on the red water in the glass. He became stunned as the blood started taking unusual shapes forming different figures. The water inside the glass was all clear with the blood concentrated in the middle forming just one word- HELP. He stumbled and took back steps quickly. Soon the word disappeared and the blood too was gone. He looked at his injured finger. The wound healed on its own. Already shocked on the happenings, his gaze fall on the diary again. He wanted answers and as of now only this diary could give him that.

It was so scary...i mean unique thought yaar ...

Hope rey apne sawaalon ke jawaab paaye bina na jaaye...

Update soon...
n plzzz updqte ur other stries ASAP...
I LVE them aall
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Awesome + intresting update...👏

Tanushree and reyan story is amazing...👍🏼

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...😊

All the best for ur exam...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awesome update.
Just marvellous mind blowing.👏
But r u trying to kill me wid the suspense
how can the diary end at such a crucial point and she did to stop him?
So many que i feel like i in rey position oh god koi toh answer do.

Flashback part was superb
the part where taani wakes up and some creepy holds her leg was scary.

Loved the technique taani used to ooze out rehaan anger (kya dimag paaya hai aur boys ka mind divert karne ke liye isse achi koi cheez hogi nahi😉😉)
kafi WEIRD sa tatoo hai kaha search kiya ise

The part where rey finger get injured and the blood form into help and the wound get recover was it was nice.
Taani ne kiya kya doctor hai lagta hai. I think socha hoga agar wound hoga toh evil se fight nahi kar paya toh. Waise bhi tum max 2 chap mein end kar dogi toh wound heal hone ka time bhi toh nahi hai na.😆😆😆

Anyways jokes part bahot acha solid update tha.
Ya its sad ki ss khatam ho raha hai.
But there is saying na EVERY GOOD THING HAS TO END.

So update soon
is pehle ke bit my own nails in the thinking about the suspense update plz

good luck for the test waise toh acha hi hoga.
Edited by dasv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
wow amazing update..
all ur words had de required effect..
I cud feel the story visible.. 2 me..
all credit goes 2 ur writing skills..
eager 2 kno the mystery continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
superb update..
i can also feel every word in diary..
with rey my curiosity is also increasing..
ur writing skill is fab..

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