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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola People!I'm back with an update. Thanks everyone for appreciating my work.

Now enough of bak- bak enjoy reading.

Taarey SS ~No one can let us apart~

Taani's hand moved and Rey became hyper

Rey-Taani!Tum thik to ho na.

Doctor! Doctor!Someone please call the doctor.

Doctor came.

Doctor- Aap thodi der ke liye bahar jaiye.

Rey-Thike main jata hoon.

After a while,

Doctor came out.

ReYam-Doctor taani thik to hain na.

Doctor-Dekhiye abhi to unhe hosh aa gaya hai lekin vo phirse behosh ho sakti hain.

ReYam-Kya hum usse mil sakte hain.

Doctor nodded and went.

The gang entered the room they all have been crying but they had to be strong atleast in front of taani.

They saw taani laying on the bed giving them a small smile.

Taani-Aap log yahan kaise?

Swayam-To tumhe kya laga ki tumhara saath itna sab kuch ho jayega aur hum aayege bhi nahi.

Taani-nahi bhai aisa nahi hai.

Sharon-Just chuck it taani abhi ye important hai kit um thik ho ki nahi.

Taani-Haan main bilkul thik hoon.

The gang looked at all the bandages she had.

Gang-haan vo to dikh raha hai ki tum kitni thik ho.

All of them started talking to taani.

All this while rey had been standing there wathing his angel smile and talk.

After their talks were over

Sharon-Taani abhi tum rest karo hum tumse baad mein aakar milenge.

Taani-Thike bha- I mean Sharon.

Sharon-Its ok you can call me bhabhi.

Taani-ok bhabhi.

They all went out and swayam also went to show them his house and promised taani to return soon.

Now only rey and taani were left.

Rey-Hi taani.

Taani-Hey!Kaise hain aap

Rey-Tumhe is haalat mein dekh kar main kaisa ho sakta hoon taani.

Rey-Vaise tumhara vishesh nahi aaya tumhe dekhne.

He said with pain visible in his eyes.

Taani-Vo vishesh aur meri engagement toot gayi.

Rey-What! Kaise

Taani suddenly felt the past coming back and her vision blurred in no time she felt unconscious.

Rey-Taani taani are u ok.

He ran to call the doctor.

Doctor came and checked taani and said.

Doctor-I think she was very stressed ab hame nahi pata ki unhe hosh kab aayega.

Rey felt weak on his knees.

He went out and saw swayam talking on the phone.

He told him what had happened.

Tauji-Ye kya kar diya tumne rey.

Rey-Unki engagement kyun tooti sir.

Tauji-Vishesh ko taani se nahi uske paison se pyaar tha use sirf shekhawat property ka half chahiye tha jo taani ke naam thi aur taani jo jab ye baat pata chali to usne ye engagement tod di.

Everyone was on the verge of crying the poor soul had gone through so much.

They all sat in different corners and remembered the times spent with her.

Apne roothein, paraaye roothein
Yaar roothe naa
Khwaab tootein, waade tootein
Dil ye toote naa (x2)

(They all remembered the times.)

Ruthe to, khuda bhi roothe..
Sath chhoote na..(x2)

(they remembered the times they were rude to her)

Ho Allah waariyaan..
O main to haariyaan..
O tooti yaariyan, mila de oye..(x2)

(they remembered the fun times)

Udte patangon mein..
Holi wale dangon mein..
Jhoomenge phir se donon yaar..(x2)

(they remembered the holi)

Wapas to aaja yaar
Seene se laga ja yaar
Dil to hue hain zar-zar.

(they remembered the farewall party)

Hoo Apne ruthe, paraye ruthe..
Yaar ruthe na..
Khwaab tute, waade tute..
Dil yeh toote na..

Ruthe to, khuda bhi roothe..
Sath chhoote na..(x2)

Ho Allah waariyaan..
O main to haariyaan..
O tooti yaariyan, mila de oye..(x2)

They all slept in her thoughts.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
awsm update
it was very emotional
feel bad for taani
she has been through so much
song choice was super
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
emotional update
atleast finally taani woke up😊
the gang and taani convo was sweet 😛
y taani has to bear the all the hardship in life😔
koi khushi nahi de sakta kya use

vishesh ka toh murder kar dena chahye😡
anyways atleast now everyone know the truth
and rey and gang will try to make her happy again Hope soo soon

update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Emotional update.luvd it.egarly waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Humairaa

awsm update

it was very emotional
feel bad for taani
she has been through so much
song choice was super
continue soon

Thanks and ya will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: dasv

emotional update
atleast finally taani woke up😊
the gang and taani convo was sweet 😛
y taani has to bear the all the hardship in life😔
koi khushi nahi de sakta kya use

vishesh ka toh murder kar dena chahye😡
anyways atleast now everyone know the truth
and rey and gang will try to make her happy again Hope soo soon

update soon

Thanks and yes everyone will try to make her happy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Mon_tr

Emotional update.luvd it.egarly waiting 4 nxt part

Will update after my exam.
and thanks for all the appreciation
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

awesome update

vishesh 😡

song selection was perfect

update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
superb update
luv taani n gang talk
taarey part was really emotional
luv the song selection
update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
nice update
taarey part nice
vishesh😡
song awesome
update soon
pm me

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