~No one can let us apart~A TaaRey SS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola people! Hi I am Abhinandita(abhi) and yesterday i had a dream and i thought to change it into a ss on a all time favourite couple TaaRey.So i hope u all will lyk it.
Note-Taarey haters plz refrain from any activity here.

~No one can let us apart~
A TaaRey SS


The whole D3 team was in the RH rehearsing their routine.Everybody became tired.

Nil-Yaar bahut thak gaye hain.
Vicky- Ya nil is right lets have a short break.
Simmi-I think they r right.

They agreed and sat down to have a break.Everybody was talking about the dance when suddenly swayam's phone rang.
Swayam-guys excuse me dad ka phone aa raha hai.

He went to the corner to answer the call.
Everyone continued chatting.When suddenly they heard a sound of falling of something.
They turned around to find swayam's phone lying on the floor in pieces and he was standing with a blank face not understanding what to do.

Rey ran to him after seeing his condition.
Rey-Swayam kya hua?Uncle ne kya kaha?sab thik to hain na.
Swayam looked at him and tears came out of his eyes.
Rey-(in a worried tone)-Swayam bata na Kya hua?Speak up damnit!
Swayam-(while crying)R...Rey t..aani
Rey-(alert)Kya hua hai taani ko?
Sharon-Haan swayam kya hua?
All-Haan!Haan! kya hua?
Swayam-T..aani k.a accident ho gaya hai and she is very critical.
For Rey it seemed that the world had stopped the flashbacks of taani and him came to his mind.In all these months he tried to move on but his heart only belonges to taani.
Sharon-What!Tum ye kya keh rahe ho swayam.
Swayam-Main sach keh raha hoon sharon.
All the girls broke down except kria.
Rey wanted to cry and let his heart out but he knew that he had to be strong for his friend,for her brother Swayam.
Kria-guys i think hume is moment pe swayam ko bar bar same question puchne ki jagah uska saath dena chahiye.
Rey-haan swayam taani ko kuch nahi hoga main-I mean hum use kuch hone nahi denge.Kahan hai taani.
Swayam-jodhpur mein.
Vicky-Hume abhi jodhpur chalna chahiye taani needs us.
rey-Right lets go guys.

Precap-Gang at jodhpur.

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So guys how was it? i know its lame but coudnt help writing it down.If u want me to continue leave comments(big ones😛😉).






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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
Taani ka accident😲😭
Hope woh theek ho
pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesome concept n chapter too.egarly waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SunShine

Awesome start
Taani ka accident😲😭
Hope woh theek ho
pls continue soon

Thanks.will continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm start
Loved it
Taani had a accident
Oh no
Continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept
superb start
update it soon n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept!!
Rey ko actually yaad hain ke uski life mein ek ladki jiska naam taani hain, uske life mein thi!!
Hope taani teek hojaygi!!
Can't wait to see what happens!!
Please continue soon and pm me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
taani accident
hope she alright
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing concept and chapter too
taani ko kya hua dear?

rey still love taani awee
and kriya bhi
amazing storyline

waiting for next chapter
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys i'm back with an update I hope you will like it okay now enough of my bak-bak.Enjoy Reading.

Taarey SS

II~No one can let us apart~II

Rey opened his eyes and tried to turn as if he was in his bed but what he got was a fall.He opened his eyes to see that he was in the bus going to jodhpur.He got up straightened himself and sat on his seat.He tried to remember that how he ended up here.

Rey-(to himself)OMG! Ab maine kya kar diya.(then he suddenly remembered the RH scene)

Rey-Are haan taani ka accident.Oh god taani thik ho.

He was lost in taani dreamland when swayam shook him.

Swayam-Rey tu thik to hain lost lag raha hai.

Rey-I'm fine Swayam bas Taani ki thodi si chinta hai.

Swayam-Tu chinta mat kar kuch nahi hoga.

Rey-Haan

Swayam-chal ab sab ko jaga dete hai hum pahunch ne hi vale hai.

They woke up everyone and went out of the bus.

Sharon-Jodhpur to pahunch gaye where to head next?

Swayam-Are haan guys come with me I'll take u to my house.

Vicky-Nahi Swayam hum sabse pehle taani se milenge.

All-Ya he's right.

Swayam-thike then lets go.

They hired a car and went to the hospital.

At the hospital,

Rey-(to the receptionist)Excuse me can u tell us where Taani Shekhawat's room is.

Receptionist-Sure First room to the left.

They went there to find a worried Taujee there.

Swayam-Papa sab thik to hain na Taani kaise hai?

Taujee-Are tum aa gaye taani ki haalat critical hai.

Swayam-kya main usse mil sakta hoon.

Taujee-lekin use hosh nahi aaya hai.

Swayam-Koi baat nahi.

He went inside and first in his whole life he felt that his world had stopped to see taani like this covered with bandages.The lips that always had a smile playing on, were now dry by the medicine's effects.

He went to her and sat on the chair beside her bed.He held her hands.

Swayam-(crying)Taani main jaanta hoon ki I'm a very bad brother mujhe tumhara saath dena chahiye tha jab tum mere saath thi lekin us galti ki tum mujhe itni badi saza mat do. I can't afford to lose u taani plz mujhe chodke mat jao.(he was sobbing badly)

Swayam-(wiping hi tears)main tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga taani it's my promise to u my sis.

He went out of the room.

After he came out Rey went inside.

Rey's heart was aching baly after seeing his love of life in this state.

He went to her and held his hands.And finally let his emotions come out.

Rey-Taani, look sweetheart bahut mazak kar liya tumne ab mujhe darao mat taani.

He said all this with a smile but his smile faded as soon as he saw her not opening her eyes.

Rey(now crying)Taani open ur eyes sweetheart plz I beg of u. Taani I know that I've been an awful boyfriend but plz don't give me such a big punishment for that.I love u Taani and I promise that I will not let anything happen to u.

With this a tear fell on taani's hand and her hand moved.

Precap-TaaRey talk and vishesh's truth is out.

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So guys I hope u liked I was disappointed with the number of comments I got so I will not update until I get atleast 3 pages full of comments.

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