Virman Os: Flash Mob..!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Swagat nahi karoge hamara" ?? 😆😆

ok chalo ...agreed i have other FF's to continue ..but pakka promish ki i will continue them soon...first have a glance at this Os...!!

to say about this Os ...ideas were running in my mind ...like from ages back..!! and i finally penned it down ..👏 kyunki EXAMS khatam naaa 🥳 and im going crazzzyyy 🤪 so this Os is craziness ka NATEEJA ...!! 😆 Bare with it...!! 🤢 😭

this Os is a Mix of reality and my own imagination a bit...so hope you enjoy this 😳

Here i go ...


Virman Os: Flash Mob..!!


(9:00 am)

Infinity Mall, here a terrorist attack had happened a year back and today in the account of remembering the same a Flash Mob was gonna take place at 10:00 am. The people around were unknown of this Flash Mob going to take place, except the management, and the crowd was busy with their own jobs. There was a hustle-bustle of a huge crowd in the mall shopping for some or the other random stuff ...or you know just window shopping...!!Family shopping around, teenagers roaming around, the caf's being crowded and so on ...but here there existed a pair of unique childhood best friends in this crowd...who were time passing and waiting for the time to become 10:00 am

V: maanvi I swear I'm gonna kill you if you have ice-cream again ...!! Remember the last time you had it ...you were ill for almost 12 days...

M: so what uhhh??? Do you have any problem..??

V: yes ...you are my problem!! M: then buzz off somewhere, not around me..!!

V: whatever..!! You're not going to have that ice-cream and he pulls her away from the ice-cream shop...! They walk a bit front and virat sees a cool girl passing near-by. He slides his shades a bit down and follows his gaze on her and as soon as maanvi saw him gazing at that girl she pulled him and started walking at an abnormally high speed...she was pulling virat with her...

V: hey flathead..!! What's wrong with you?? Ohhh slowly...idiot...I ws almost hit by that pillar ...woaaahhh ...dumbo look behind even I'm walking ...you can't pull me like that...!! But maanvi was not listening to him at all and she pulled him near a caf and they sat at the table...

V: you're crazy..!! M: didn't you know that from so many years??

V: oh yeahhh I knew that (ordering two cups of coffee)

M: and even you're crazy if you don't know that..!! V: chillax I know that..!! (Giggling)

After 10 minutes...
Virat sipping his coffee was looking at maanvi and she was gazing here and there. Virat today was determined that he would tell all that he feels for her. He ws lovingly looking at maanvi sipping his coffee. Maanvi was gazing here and there, but in her mind she was very much thinking that how to tell virat that he is very special to her...she was avoiding looking at him and trying to hide the truth in her eyes. He was looking at her and a smile appeared on his face...maanvi glanced at virat and saw him smiling...

M: whattt?? Why are you acting like ALICE in WONDERLAND?? (Making a face)

V: (sighing + giggling) uhhh just thinking something...

M: you even think ..??!! That's really like EUREKA ...!! V: I'm serious ...

M: I thought you were virat..!! (Smiling like an idiot)

V: (wide smile) that's what I like about you...!!

M: hmmm I know...(looking here and there) Can I ask you something ??

V: you asking that to your childhood buddy??

M: (smile) uhmm ...why do you care for me so much??? matlab from childhood whenever I fall ill you never use to sleep ...one scratch on me and you would panic like I just got some 8-9 stitches...you always like to do ...out of the way things or is it some special case with me ?? (Raising her eye-brow)

V: (smile) I would answer this by asking one more question...why do you get irked + jealous + cruel + idiotic etc etc whenever I checkout some girl passing by my side?? matlab from the childhood why don't you like me getting along with other girls?? Why do you behave so protective?? He ended his lines by smirking...and maanvi listening these questions or you can say answers started seeing here and there and blushing a bit and finding no other option to escape from him she sipped her coffee and tried to avoid him blushing hard.
(9:58 am)

V: dim-wit answer me...!! M: what..?? I don't have an answer... (Smiling + blushing)

V: oh really??

M: what should I tell?? Don't you know from all these years?? (Looking at him)

V: ok may be I know it ...maybe I know it from all those years (looking at his coffee cup)

M: fair-enough ...but what about you?? Say it ...

V: I will but ...then even you gotta say it ... Deal..?? (Forwarding his hand with a kind of blush or embarrassment you can say)

M: Deal is Sealed..!! (blushing + shaking hand with him) and at the exact moment there was loud music played and virat started swaying to the tunes of it and took maanvi to the center of the mall from the caf and she went with him...the whole crowd in the mall started wondering why the song was played and then they see a pair coming and swaying to it (virat and maanvi) and the crowd gathers up there...

aaja pyaar ki ho deal (virat and maanvi move towards the center of the mall)
deal bole toh ?? heart heart - sauda sauda
dono deal karey seal - tight tight very tight
aankhon se ho agreement
chale uspe permanent
aur hasraton ki court mai yeh
dil ka judge kahe - order order
(they reach the center of the mall)
khali peeli khali peeli rokne ka nai
tera picha karu tokne ka nai (x2)
(virat starts dancing to the tunes and expressing his feelings and some boys join him)
hai tujhpe right mera
(the girls were simply standing there with maanvi)
tu hai delight mera
(pointing at maanvi)
tera rasta jo roku chowkne ka nahi
tere doggy ko mujhpe bhowkne ka nai
tera picha karu rokne ka nai
(moving around maanvi )
khali peeli khali peeli rokne ka nai
tera picha karu tokne ka nai (x2)
tu mere agal bagal hai
(and the Flash Mob starts all the members involved in it come together and start swaying to the tunes of it)
mai tere agal bagal hun (x4)

And you all guessed it right Virat and Maanvi were part of this Flash Mob..!! and this ws indeed an expressing of feelings for both of them more than an flash mob...they were together from the childhood and somewhere down the lane adored each other and this added more to it ...they knowing each other from a long time + being best friends helped the cupid strike them..!! And when their friendship was turned to love god knows...they both knew that they both like each other but somewhere that confession was missing ..so today that was happening ...ok let's go back to the mall .. (Lolzzz)

Ghar se nikalne ka time toh bata (all were dancing to the tunes of it)
taaki rahu mai mod pe khada
rehta hu mai aaj-kal busy
wait karna hai mushkil bada
mai road-romeo dil-chod romeo
(but one pair in the group were actually expressing their feelings to each other)
rastey mai mujhko choddne ka nai
saccha aashiq hu mujhe thokne ka nahi
(looking at maanvi and mimicking the line)
tere doggy ko mujhpe bhowkne ka nai
khali peeli khali peeli rokne ka nai
tera picha karu tokne ka nai
tu mere agal bagal hai
(all for the signature step of the song)
mai tere agal bagal hun (x4)
The song comes to an end and maanvi was blushing hard by now...and all the members bow down to the crowd who were watching them and the whole dancing crowd disperses after their performance and there is an announcement made by the manager

"This was the flash-mob held in the remembrance of the last year incident. Thanks to the St. Peter's college students who came up with this brilliant idea...cheers to them. Hope you liked it. Enjoy your time in Infinity ...in full-on infinity ishhtyle"

And here virat and maanvi were moving out of the mall

V: you gotta say it at least now...!!

M: did you say it?? No ryt then why should I say?? (Showing attitude)

V: oh come onnn...!! I said it in front of whole crowd...! (Irritated)

M: with the means of that song?? Tht was a song ok..!! You didn't say it..!

V: song...toh song hi sahi..!! I at least said...!! You didn't do that also...

M: oh plss...you say it then I will..!! V: maanvi I said...

M: nooo you didn't..!! V: yaar this is full-on cheating ok..!! it was a deal...

M: ok listen... You know it ...I know it ...so why do we need to tell it??? Isn't that enough for us to know it??...matlab understood what the heck I'm blabbering??

V: yeahhh actually (smiling)

M: exactly... (Looking into his eyes) virat and maanvi had a cute eye-lock here, both their cheeks had gone hard red due to embarrassment or you can say blush and then virat spoke...

V : Exactly...I know it ...you know it...then why do we need say that... Maanvi smiles and virat continues...

"That you're an Mental hospital patient" laughing loudly he runs away to save his life...and maanvi runs behind him saying...

"Viraaat ...You're dead...!"

So this was the sweetest love story of two childhood best friends where they fell in love for sure, but never confessed...as they both knew what the truth was ...and there was no need to tell it...they understood everything with each others silence...!!! And the truth is

"True Love doesn't need any confessions"

ok do tell me how was it ??? BAD or WORSE cz i already said craziness ka NATEEJA ..!! 😉😆 waiting for your response... 😳 chappals...eggs jo phenka hai phenko ...mere tak toh kuch pahunchega bhi nahi 😆
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itsfate thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res

unres
it was super dupar awesome os
manvi kitne jayad possasive the😛
becara virat pole se mar kha leta😆...its is the most sweetest os😃
yup true love never need confession but tume confession karnvana tha na😕
iska plzzz 2nd part likho na😃
thanks for the pm
Edited by virman.lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res!!
unres!!!!
yayy im second
whooo
new os
yayy
party time
awsm
loved it
love the way u write
tc!!!
thnx!!
Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yay im third
res
un res
superb OS
you have soo much talent to write
continue making OS's like this
thanks for the pm
Edited by Duggukede - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update they both are childhood friend
and they didn't confess because they both
know they have feeling each other update soon
u r other 2 story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS!!!!
Cute n sweet..thanks 4 d PM!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it..
The song was really good...
Howww sweet the love eachother but didnt confess...
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Frst of all welcome back dear...
Love ur entry...its ..dhmakedaat...
Abt os its outstanding...
Its simple and sweet love story...love it...
Love the way u express two childhood frnds love story...
The way virat express himself ...loved it..
Yeah its right ...true love dose' nt need confession...
Really its sweetest love story...
Keep rocking dea...
Thanks alot for pm...
Waiting for ur other' s wrk...
Try to update soon dea...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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os is nice one dear...
awesome concept you said...
thanks for pm...
take care😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it
Seriously v no need 2 always express everything in words

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