OS Finding Us - Updated March 4th

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

oh, how i have missed this Arnav and Khushi...

this was lovely

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Lovely OS Nids. It was great reading FL all over again... It brought back such sweet memories :) The fun times we had on the CC demanding different kinds of scenes from you, esp. for their Boston trip 😉

This was a realistic OS on all fronts. No matter how much you are in love, there are ups & downs in one's married life... I am so glad that Aradhana was able to set Khushi on the right path. She was truly right when she said that the most important relationship needs to be nurtured & cared for everything just falls into place.

And in this OS, Khushi had lost sight of that... In her zeal to be the perfect mother & daughter-in-law she had taken her relationship with Arnav for granted & put it on the back burner & that's when trouble started in paradise... Though I was very disappointed in her, thank God for Aradhana, she made Khushi see sense finally & all is well that ends well... 😃 Lovely saree :))

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

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Nidhi, first of all, I am so happy that this comes as a sequel to "Finding Love" Finding love was a fairy tale. Finding Us is a reality. Having been married for ten years and having given up my career for the sake of my son, I finally felt at peace after reading your story.

Not talking about problems, only complicates it further, how true.

But ultimately love has its unique way of helping lost people to find each other, isn't it?

I am in love with this particular piece, Nidhi. Well done 👏

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Superb OS. I felt I am reading the next part of finding love. As I have told you few times earlier... how much I love that FF. You have nicely written how they are not able to spend time with each other. Finally both realize they still love each other and the ending was very good.

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sheanuzz

@sheanuzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Nidhi dear... thanks for mail. Loved the OS and especially the story line. 😊

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Hey Nidhi,
I remember bookmarking 'FINDING LOVE'
and I realize what a lazy bum I've turned into. Anyways bakwas apart!

I loved this OS. A perfect blend of married life and ArHi.
I think my signature would do justice to this OS.
So beautifully written.
🤗

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

This is perfect.

Are you married ? See, the confusion in relationship, the feeling of loneliness even if we are surrounded by loved ones, the small fights, unintentional invisible distance are part of marriage. And you have narrated the story beautifully.

Loved it.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

That was way too beautiful.. Life does get hectic once u get married and its not always a happily ever after and I loved how u portrayed it here.. But midst all ArHi are together at the end of the day.. Way too beautiful..

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

A very lovely OS Nidhi... a beautiful follow-up to finding love. This story was so realistic, the harsh realities of life that generally do break marriages. But love that remains strong and forever, is the only saving grace through such tough times. Just like Arnav and Khushi's love that could distance them mentally... but their hearts always beat for the other.

Loved how you have shown a slice of life, where a child and domestic responsibilities, make the woman busy in them, ignoring the husband unintentionally. But conversation and love are the only things that keep your relationship strong. Loved how both of them had been craving for the other, wanting to break the silences, to reach out and get back the warmth in their relationship.

I am glad that finally they too meet mid-way and the pent up emotions,a dn love bursts to consume both of their bodies and souls. This was a perfect dedication to the birthday girl Sami!! Happy birthday once again... and Nidhi... we are as usual waiting for updates on your wonderful stories... THT being my favorite!!

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Hi nidhi...wonderful os...and fantastic addo on to your wonder ff...in marriage after some time theses kinds of problems do come...it is the real art to overcome this...and find the love all over again which was not lost in first place but just buried under the day to day commitments ...I hope that in near future you can add some thing extra to this wonderful ff...loved it