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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posting again

Okay first of all kiddoo!!!!!!!! Sorry haa agar tune iss gaane pe sequence likha ho ya os likha ho toh!!!

But thanks ye gaana sunane keliye I can't tell how much I loved this

So here goes my style of OS

Don't worry concept bohut bakwaas ka hai

Just wanna share my thought..

So here goes an OS for u all..

*dnt ask me abt updates*

Story line: Rey gets a mail from Kriya after 6 months of her sudden exithe still is single .he is very happy .but the thing to be noticed is he is very happy for his friends

He got a mail one day saying him the truth and also saying she wanted to at least tell this before leaving India forever and after reading the truth he was like hit by a big rock he was sinking each second so the gang decided to take him on an outing and reached goa.

The song sequence starts here.. it will be a dance based OS.

PRESENT:

He walked front remembering how difficult it would be for her to say those wordshow much have she crushed her heart to say those words.

bhulaun kaise

He walked front head hanged down

Wo pal jo mere bin hai tu bita chukka

He clutched his hair thinking the blushes of hers when he spoke to her

Loutaun kaise

He kicked the sand hard

Jo aansu meri yaad mei baha chukka

He looked at the ocean which reminded him of the tears she shed for him

Mar mai jaun..

Caught his head and swinged his upper body in from left to ri8

Fanaa ho jaun

Stretched his hand as he saw her image in water but turned it into a fist in next second as she disappeared..

Kahi mei jaake doob jaun

He walked front into water when swayam placed hand on his shoulder and he shoved of..

Nazar milaun toh ye chahun ke teri aankhon se

He looked up slowly tears ready to make its way out

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

He looked helplessly as if asking her why she did this much for him why she is suffering to that extent.. why he is that helpless now !!!

Bhujaun kaise

Jumped and kicked the air with left leg

Ye aag tere dil mei jo laga chukka

Pulled her twirled and lifted by waist ..

Sunaun kaise

He bought her down

Bas isiki aas jo dil mai hun daba chukka

Caressed her face and wiped her tears.

Mar mai jaun..

Stretched his hands *as in dil se re*

Fanaa ho jaun

Bet hard on his heart.

Kahi mei jaake doob jaun

Took quick steps and cupped her face

Nazar milaun toh ye chahun ke teri aankhon se

Smiled wide and soon the smile vanished as her image disappeared

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

Bought his fists down from above head falling on his knees and crying hard

The gang were broken to see him like this .

"Reyaansh Singhania ek weakling Kria Ghai ke pyaar mei pad gaye"

"maine sirf aapko use kiya"

"Aapme aur swayam mei kisiko chun na ho toh mai swayam ko chunungi aapko nai"

"rey!!!"

She sat up sweating. The same dream again.its haunting her as always from last 6 months it's the only dream she got!!! She got up and looked at the sea in front.. Slowly she saw his face a naughty smile playing on his lips and as she smiled he winked.

She ran as fast as she can but as she reached the shore the image vanished with the waves

She stood helpless and again disappointment taken over her.

Mitaun kaise

Took a small knife from her shorts pocket

haaton ke lakeeron par hai jo likha

scratched the lines on her ri8 hand with frustration

bataun kaise

fell on her knees throwing the knife

mujhko hai toh bas tera hi aasra

cluthed the wet sand giving more pain herself

Raat kaali

Covered her face with hands

baat baaki

bet the water ..

Ashq bheege dil sawali

Layed back as water flowed over her

Man mei mere tu hi tu hai

Got up hands stretched as if trying to catch him

Toh aaja saathiya

Ran into the water searching for his image

Teri poothe Bandhagi hai

Did a pyramid Went down into a split.

Tu hi meri zindagi hai

. Got up with a smile

Lamhe tune jo diye hai

Did a jump along with stretch and stood

Wahi meri daastan

And smiled wide as she saw him standing on the rock with hands in his pocket and smiling at her as usual

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

She ran to him and caressed his face as tears rolled down and a wide smile spread on her face..

But horror took place as his image vanished and appeared

And again smiled as she found the image in water.

Paas aa mere sanam

Bhool ja saare gham

He started struggling with eyes closed as all were tensed and confused as what is happening to him

He saw her making herself crush between thorns and blowing flowers on him which in turn are pricking like thorns with the thought of losing her

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

"kriya !!!!!!!" her friend called as kriya closed her eyes and fell back into the sea hoping to find him in or loosing herself forever..

He snap opened his eyes as soon as he heard the screamand far on the ri8 saw a girl falling into the sea with her back closing her eyes and a girl running to save her

All the boys ran as fast as they can and jumped in to search her.

After searching swayam along with rest came up dissapointed just to see rey coming up with her in hands ..

Rey simply got on the rock pulled her closed and tapped her cheek after couching twice she opened her eyes

"jhootitumhe toh swimming aati hai..jaan pooch ke kiya haina ye sab??"rey asked crying and always a smile playing on his lips

She made "O " shape with her mouth and pouted as tears rolled .

He smiled and hugged her tight as she in returned gripped more tight!!!

So here in the OS

Hope u all like it

Like and comment please

Ufff..its difficult to explain dance yaarmast mast steps ko change karna pada

Chalo kuch bhi ..hope u liked it

Love ya!!!

Enjoy!!!

Deetha.😳



Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago

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