Arshi TS: Raabta *Updated* Last part Pg:12(09/03/14)

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

As you said update filmy hain...lekin cute hain 😊

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

aashi u know how much I love

the kind of love u write about is rare to find

I loved it aashi

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Hey devimayyah 🤣 😳

FANTASTIC End 👏 👏 👏

That's how i wanted khushi's entry in Arnav life totally a filmy style and that too like of a Salman khan movie, straight into his arms, bewitching him so such an extend that he almost forgot his grief.

WOW Khushi's character was of many impressive layers. She was so cute and pagal but her liveliness and chirpy nature brought light in the dark life of Arnav.

I love her sentence if you feel lonely, stay around those who love you, their love won't ever let you stray . This is so true, having love ones and family around gives a sense of relief and happiness, their support and presence means a lot.

Khushi was the answers of all Arnav's questions, its like she was made just for Arnav, to sort out the mess of his life.She patiently clears away Arnav's depression and even didn't let him taking drugs, that's what i wanted. If a woman was responsible for his all grieve then another woman brought light, comfort and peace, most importantly a smile in his life again. He didn't deserve to cry over his betrayal in love. Life is the name of accidents. He wasn't a coward but seeing his family broken and miserable his spirit got loose for sometime.

Khushi was a smart girl. She was an obedient daughter, true devotee of DM, awesome friend and dedicated student and honest employee. Love the way you show her switching from serious to cute, adorable and funny side. They were soul mates.

I like a lot Arnav flirting with khushi in the end and i laugh out loud on his last comment to khushi

Love the ending it was awesome.

this story is brilliant. One part was so sad and gloomy, brought tears for Arnav and in the next part smile didn't leave my face.

I love this TS, i wish you could continue it.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

awesome

loved it😊

khushi came as a hope in his life

really wished it to continue

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

hope this has another part

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

It was too awesome... do not end this... do continue with the story..

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

wow excellent update and ending loved it thank you for pm.

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

loved d update
it was awesome...
if possible plz convert this TS into SS/FF...
would love 2 read more
will w8 4 ur rpy

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Awsommmiiieee it was damn gud...jhalli khushi!!! Kitna bolti hai...shuru karti hai toh bas rukti hi nahi...oh arnav-khushi convo was so cute...hehehe i wud luv an epilouge or OS or somthing whr she works as his secrtry...i wndr waha kya karegee...it wud so fun 2 c hr in AR..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

oh ho so she stopped him from taking the drug
thank god she came in time naa
yeh bhagwan she is one piece
ajeeb jhalli ladki hai
but then thats what makes her so unique right
gosh she sure made him see things clearly
that he need not drown his sorrows with drugs
but take charge of his life again
man she fainted on him twice
huge fan she seems to be
mixture of fun and maturity
just what he needed to move on in his life
wow that was just wonderful ending
just what he needed naa
her in his life
really man she was too funny to be true
cheers for pm