Arshi TS: Raabta *Updated* Last part Pg:12(09/03/14)

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Nice, Khushi was just too cute.

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

🤣 This Khushi was just Hilarious.

I liked her and was one Arnav needed.

But Tom don't we get to see their romance? 😕

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

edited my comment on page 12:)

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Wow, I loved this two shot to the core❤️

The first part was really emotional, and while reading it I really believed that Arnav was going to get married to Khushi. But you left me with shock as I continued to read the second half. And as usual I was left giggling with laughter reading Khushi's non stop banter in front of her idol; ASR. How can someone not fall in love with a girl like her? I'm so glad that Arnav didn't have to marry that woman, and instead found a better person who could keep him happy 24x7. And indeed life turned out to be good after the rendezvous between Arnav Singh Raizada and Khushi Kumari Gupta😳

Loved this concept a lot. Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful piece of work with us🤗

Thanks for the pm as well😊

Please do write more amazing OSs, TSs, SSs and FFs in the future😃

Good luck!!!!!!

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Wonderful end to the TS Anu!

I liked it a lot!

The conversation between Khushi and Arnav was really nice!

Great job!

Thank you for the pm!

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

While last part disturbed me , made me feel the pain of Arnav and my heart wept for that man ,this last part entertained me thoroughly.

And let me tell you this story belongs to Khushi only. Arnav long forgotten.

With her usual chirpiness, innocence, loving nature this girl took my heart and walked out flaunting it proudly. I really liked how you drew her character carefully . Gal you owe this 👏👏

And the end was perfect. Leaving bud of hope and happiness in reader's mind to blossom.

Loved it.😛

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atheenz95

@atheenz95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Oh... that was cute...😳😳

Khushi came as an angel in arnav's life...

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Such a beautiful story only if you would have wrote more anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Firstly sorry for being so late.
Second thing A Big Thank you for dedicating it to me.. 😳
Now coming to the update I was wondering if the girl can be Khushi. But realised it can't be her. There was no other similarity between that girl & Khushi except beauty and hard-working. Khushi is much more than all this.😛 By the end I was a little relieved that he wasn't taking sleeping pills at least but at the same time worried for the drugs overdose.
thank God Khushi came at the right time. I'm sure she spilled his drink knowingly not wanting to see her idol wasting his life over such things. She is a perfect combination of heart and brain. A caring heart and a non-stop chattering tongue.
Arnav too wasn't untouched from her charm. Her innocence shined through in her conversation. I loved the dialogues you used from the movies, it shows your filmy keeda well. 😆
Finally Anjali is fine and Arnav has met his Khushi too. This is awesome.
I hope you'll write more about them in some sort of OS some day.😃