SanDhir FF || The Aberration *On hold*

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anysia

@Anysia

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Sunshine_Ami

All parts were good... But that part was special... your FF, how can i dislike it!! 😲

If its bad; you will dislike ... who the writer is, doesn't make any differences 🤣

Wait a second ... again same question ... wat do you mean ??? you liked it just coz i wrote it ??? If someone else had written it you won't like ??? 😲 😲 😲 that means moi writing is not good ? 😲 😭
lol ... jk gal! 🤣 🤣

Quote

Poulami

@Sunshine_Ami

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Anysia

If its bad; you will dislike ... who the writer is, doesn't make any differences 🤣

Wait a second ... again same question ... wat do you mean ??? you liked it just coz i wrote it ??? If someone else had written it you won't like ??? 😲 😲 😲 that means moi writing is not good ? 😲 😭
lol ... jk gal! 🤣 🤣

AWWW 😲 😡 when did i say that i didn't like it... 😵

huh huh... jhooti jhooti... 🤣 🤓

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Anysia

@Anysia

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Sunshine_Ami

AWWW 😲 😡 when did i say that i didn't like it... 😵

huh huh... jhooti jhooti... 🤣 🤓

Hawww moi jhuti 😲 😲 😲 😭

Ok! aaj ke liye maaf kiya :P 🤣 🤣

Quote

Poulami

@Sunshine_Ami

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Anysia

Hawww moi jhuti 😭

Ok! aaj ke liye maaf kiya :P 🤣 🤣

HA HA.. tumhara jaane ka time ho gaya ne isliye... 🤣 🤣

Quote

Anysia

@Anysia

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Sunshine_Ami

HA HA.. tumhara jaane ka time ho gaya ne isliye... 🤣 🤣

🤣 my Ami knows me so well 🤣 🤣

Quote

Poulami

@Sunshine_Ami

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Anysia

🤣 my Ami knows me so well 🤣 🤣

HA TRUE TRUE!! GOOD NIGHT & THE WHOLE FF WAS JUST TOO GOOD, NOT BECAUSE YOU WROTE IT BUT GENUINELY AM SAYING IT... ❤️ 😛

Quote

vahi_singh

@vahi_singh

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

amazing awesome mind blowing...

can't find words to describe ur writing skills

Quote

-Cascade-

@-Cascade-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

OMG!! Di what is this??? A horror fic!!!!
I'm really not into horror fics but mustered the courage to read it nevertheless. It really had chills running down my spine this entire time while reading the three updates.😕
The story so far is just amazing and mind-blowing. 👏👏

The first two updates were really beautiful and fantastic showing the cozy relationship shared by SanDhir. The make out sessions were magnificently described and the song was perfectly incorporated. The descriptions had me blushing all the while. You are just brilliant with romantic scenes.😊👏👏👏
The third chapter took away all my coherent thoughts. It was mind-numbing reading this part of the story. The beginning showing clear glint of the horror filled ride that the story is about to take me to. I was scared out of my wits to read the beginning only.
Both the twins carved for the same person!!! I guess Randhir is also gonna suffer a lot.

I never had the slightest idea that you are such a genius writer of this genre.
I enjoyed reading it a lot but I guess I'm gonna face drastic consequences. How am I gonna sleep tonight????
Do update it soon di...!!!😊

Quote

Sanjana

@SweetSassy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#199

*Sorry for late commenting*

Read the 2nd and 3rd part😊😊😊...

Raat ka nasha utara nahi tha dono ka😆😆😆...

I just so wished ki tum unka bathroom scene thoda aur likti...*sorry* woh mein kuch jyada hi shameless hoon par kya karoon, I can't resist to read hot updates on my Sandhir😳😳😳...

Sanyukta going to Camelot, near Queenies Palace...*interesting...very interesting*😕😕😕...

SanDhir's marriage after 45 days😊damn happy...

But I know inn 45 days mein bahut kuch hone wala hai...

3rd chapter is damn interesting and shocking😲😲😲...

A boy standing infront of a grave...

One thing which I noticed is that you started the Flashback but didn't end it...

I am getting suspicious...

Flashback was horrifying and especially the end...

In short I wanna say you are best...I mean yes...I love everyone's story but one thing which lacks in everyone's story is the professional way of writing chapter...you have that professional essence...I am big fan of Chetan Bhagat...I do have a very different taste...I usually got impressed by those who have either the love essence too much or if they have the professional way of writing...

Your story literally have the professional essence...Just keep going on like this...

Update soon😊😊😊.....