SanDhir FF || The Aberration *On hold* - Page 21

Originally posted by: vahi_singh

amazing awesome mind blowing...

can't find words to describe ur writing skills

Originally posted by: KAJU10

OMG!! Di what is this??? A horror fic!!!!
I'm really not into horror fics but mustered the courage to read it nevertheless. It really had chills running down my spine this entire time while reading the three updates.😕
The story so far is just amazing and mind-blowing. 👏👏

The first two updates were really beautiful and fantastic showing the cozy relationship shared by SanDhir. The make out sessions were magnificently described and the song was perfectly incorporated. The descriptions had me blushing all the while. You are just brilliant with romantic scenes.👏
The third chapter took away all my coherent thoughts. It was mind-numbing reading this part of the story. The beginning showing clear glint of the horror filled ride that the story is about to take me to. I was scared out of my wits to read the beginning only.
Both the twins carved for the same person!!! I guess Randhir is also gonna suffer a lot.

I never had the slightest idea that you are such a genius writer of this genre.
I enjoyed reading it a lot but I guess I'm gonna face drastic consequences. How am I gonna sleep tonight????
Do update it soon di...!!!😊

Originally posted by: krisrock

*Sorry for late commenting*

Its ok!!! take your time :)

Read the 2nd and 3rd part😊😊😊...

Raat ka nasha utara nahi tha dono ka😆😆😆...

I just so wished ki tum unka bathroom scene thoda aur likti...*sorry* woh mein kuch jyada hi shameless hoon par kya karoon, I can't resist to read hot updates on my Sandhir😳😳😳...

Hayo rabba ... aur likhu 😲
nahi baba nahi ...
Aapke Mummy Pappa ... in fact sab log jo ye pad rahe hai ... unke Mummy Pappa will scold moi

Sanyukta going to Camelot, near Queenies Palace...*interesting...very interesting*😕😕😕...

SanDhir's marriage after 45 days😊damn happy...

But I know inn 45 days mein bahut kuch hone wala hai...

Hahaha *evil laugh* bahut kuch hone wala hai
Be read for the roller coaster ride ... hahahaha *again evil laugh* 🤣

3rd chapter is damn interesting and shocking😲😲😲...

A boy standing infront of a grave...

One thing which I noticed is that you started the Flashback but didn't end it...

I am getting suspicious...

Flashback was horrifying and especially the end...

Flashback toh bas start huva hai ... picture abhi baki hai 😉

In short I wanna say you are best...I mean yes...I love everyone's story but one thing which lacks in everyone's story is the professional way of writing chapter...you have that professional essence...I am big fan of Chetan Bhagat...I do have a very different taste...I usually got impressed by those who have either the love essence too much or if they have the professional way of writing...

Your story literally have the professional essence...Just keep going on like this...

Update soon😊😊😊.....

OMG ... that was a great compliment ...
Thank you so very much Sanju 🤗
Keep reading :) Moi will try my best to keep up the compliment ...

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.

awesome update di...

ranyukta's spirit do this...even to her mom...

finally sanyukta saw ranyukta's spirit...

it will be interesting now.

Originally posted by: -Saba-

aweee...feeling bad the lovely couple got someone between them.

now i am curious to know more about Ranyukta.story getting interesting !!

thanks for ur scrap.

keep it up Sonia.Its lovely to read.👏

Originally posted by: srividhya68

Wow
Super
Awesome update
Cont soon

Originally posted by: katieb65..

this is the the story of GEETHANJALI in Malayalam and CHARLATHA in Tamil...😲