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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww I loved this chapter Deeth its awesome the concern for Rey that Kriya is showing and Rey is helping them Ahhh I want them together fast but right now I am loving the way story is proceeding:* Update soon and Do pm :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part -5

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" I think hume ab rukhna chahiye " Rey said looking at swayam who is sneezing continuously. The water he took bath with is taking a toll on him. So Rey finally decided they should stop in that a bit open area which would be perfect for them to stay for a night. Rey gathered a bunch of sticks and was about to clean the are when Kriya took it from him and asked to arrange for fire to make something warm for swayam. He walked away looking at his Gudiya, ooppsss that girl whom he called gudiya do work. It was quite clear that she is not used to even do the slightest work. Nodding his head he walked away to grab some water and sticks if available.

As he came back he saw Swayam already sitting tired. It was already night. So after having a quick dinner they decided to take rest.

"Swayam tum andar sojao aaj, I don't think iss cold weather mei tumhara bahar sona theek rahega " Kriya spoke concerned.

" arey nahi Kriya !! tum yaha bahar kaise , I will manage " he tried to convince her.

" Nahi Swayam!! Please !! tum andar sojao !! "

" I think Kriya is right Swayam!! tu andar soja!! " Rey supported her

"par Kriya bahar kaise ?? " Rey interrupted.

" Mai hun na !! I will take care... tu rest kar jaake abhi kal nikalna hai hume , you have to get fine by then , so take rest. " Swayam finally agreed and slept inside the tent.

It's been an hour. Kriya after so much struggle finding him sitting a bit away awake drifted to sleep. She feared of insects but she had to adjust . Turning from one side to other she opened her sleepy eyes just to not find him in the place he was earlier. A sudden panic of her sleeping outside in the open all alone scared her. She sprang up in panic. She was about to call when his voice from back startled her.

"Tum uth kyun gayi???? kya hua? " he called her and she looked back to see him sitting near the slope .

"I thought tum yaha nahi ho " she stood and walked to him. Her sleep flew miles away from her right now.

" aur kaha jaunga!! yaha pe hawa ache se aarahi thi so aagaya " he smiled at her and looked front.

As she stood beside him he raised eyebrows at her asking her what.

" mai yaha baitun?? " she asked innocently.

"ofcourse!! apna blanket leke aajao " she nodded and brought her blanket and settled beside him. They sat silent for 15-20 mins when finally when the warm wind started hitting his face in that cold night he pulled the guitar close and touched the strings once letting the surroundings sink into him.

"tum guitar bajate ho?? " she asked grinning and excited .

" nahi haath mei acha lagta hai isiliye leke ghoomta hun " he mocked turning her grin into pout.

" Acha sorry!! mai toh bas taaang keech raha tha ...haan maine thoda seekha toh hai . I like it " he caressed his guitar.

"Dad ne ye specially mere birthday pe gift kiya tha mujhe " he said looking at it lovingly.

" Tum apne dad se bohut pyaar karte ho? " she asked cutely .

"Haan bohut!! "

"Kya karte hai wo ?? "

" ab kuch nahi karte!! Marne se pehle border force mei the " he looked at her when she went pale for a second.

"Sorry "

"No!! Why are you sorry?? I am proud of my dad and mai unhe kabhi bhoolta nahi hun, because pyaar karne se jaan deke ladne tak har cheez mei wo meri inspiration hai . "

" tum apne ghar kyun nahi jaate ?? aunty bhi "

"nahi, mom hai.. but wo bhai ke saath rehti hai aur mai bhai ke ghar normally jaata nahi hun " he said with a smile.

"kyun? "

"bhabhi ko pasand nahi, I mean mujhse koi dushmani nahi hai just that bhai ke bache jab bhi mujhse milte the wo log bolte the ki mere jaise aur dad ke jaise banenge, aur wo bhai aur bhabhi donon ko nahi pasand . Dar lagta hai unhe , dad ki jaise death hui war karte waqt waise unki na ho. "

"tumhare bhai army mei nahi hai?? "

" nah... bhai toh lecturer hai , unhe peaceful zindagi pasand hai aur mujhe apni dad ke jaise banna tha !! toh mai bangaya , bas ye guitar ki aadat hai common mere aur mere bhai mei "she looked at him carefully he is not like what he looks on the outside. She thought him to be a careless and egoistic man but he in actual is a mature and caring person.

" kya tum ek gaana gaoge?? please ?? " she made a cute face as he looked at her smiling and looked away sighing. This total peace his heart felt right now from the time she came and sat by his side , something is wrong with it. He had been struggling from years now to keep his this heart calm , and it's not that she was the first he shared his story. Infact he even vented out his pain in front of some others but the stupid heart never felt at that peace and that started to bug him now.

But whateve may be he will sing for her.



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Chotu hai I know but sahi hai 😆

Open the first page for the theme song 😃

Love Deetha😳
Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
resss
unress
awsmm
loved itttkr convo was amazinggg
finally rey kria frnds ban rahe haiii
hayeee rey ki dad is dead poor him aur rey akele rehthe hai kyunke unke bhabhi ko pasand nhnnn
awww poor himmm
hayee rey ko gutar bajana aata hai awieee
and usne gaana gaaya kria ke liye
i think rey stated falling fr kriya😳
update next part super soonnn
waitinggg
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..

loved it..

kr convo was amazing..

continue soon .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unress
Its beautifulll Deeth

Beautifully cutely writed
Kriyansh convo was so amezing
Rey & his dad's bonding was
Lovely yr
Keep it up loved it
Edited by Sanchita_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aawww... this was reallyyy... aawww mann...cute sa ekdum...

Ekdum Kriyaanshlicious types... 😃

i loved that little bond which they have started sharing with each other...

his heart in peace...ahem...already kuch kuch jhol hona chalu ho chuka hai haan... 😆

but nevertheless.. Rey playing guitar for Kriya... haaye *drools*

Loving it!!! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum update...
Update mein sirf kr...I'm happy...
Rey vents out his pain...bonding start hua...
Luved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super awesome update
Loved it very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww,,,this was seriously very much beautiful...

loved it deethu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally both rey and kriya and shared what was there in their life till now...
the chapter was fabulous loved it... do continue soon

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