ArHi TS:'You're the first,the last,my everything|Ch 3, pg33

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@saima4744

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

simply amazing dear.

ice and hot start.

tf pm.

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Kinu22

@Kinu22

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Khushi should respect Arna's feeling...He love her.& Love that Arjun for that silly reason...
huh...
waiting for next...

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DaisyHoney

@DaisyHoney

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

This is beautiful update ASAP

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

What to say ... I have no words..totally a different and unique concept

It was fabulous man...

Arnav was in love with khushi but she was in love with

Arjun ..that's what she thinks

they seriously did IT...

Arnav knew after this he would be gone...and he was ..when khushi started tell what arjun did to her..that's was additng fuel to fire in his heart which was killing him...

He was helpless he can't tell her because that will cause him their friendship which was more dear to him than his one side love...

But everyone has it's own patience level and his was up...

Poor guy has to spill the beans...it was killing him from inside ...

But now he is on the verge lose their friendship...

But i guess khushi too will understand and might be she too loves him..but was just confused

Well done.

Do continue

If possible.. Do pm me the next time you update

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Soujanya

@SSK27997

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Beautifully written...waitin for the next update...pls pm me the next time u update!!!

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Edited my comment on page 1:)

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

awesome update
amazing start
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

This was amazing.
I can't wait to see what Khushi thinks...
I know she is hurt that he kept it away from her...
But she'll come through.

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Awesome

It's so different.. Waiting for next chapter.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

That was something different.. Feeling bad for both of them.. Khushi's request was unusual but Arnav gave in to it and when he confessed his feelings she told him to leave..🥺