ArHi TS:'You're the first,the last,my everything|Ch 3, pg33

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome and very unique story line.

Looking forward to read the whole story.

I hope Khushi accept the unknown love she harbors for Arnav since they become friends.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Amazing and superb start,

I'm very excited to read this further,

The update was brilliant and the concept is indeed very different yet intriguing.

Written exceptionally well and a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM xx

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

she loves him too is it..

that was dam hot...

is that the reason she wanted him to be his first...

he loves her so much...

he finally let his feelings out...

superb one 👏 👏 👏 👏👏

waiting for the next one 😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

wow that was interesting
didnt she get why she wanted her to be his first
and why she felt disgusted with arjun touch
oh dear that was hard
but i wonder why she reacted like that
she too feels for him
oh my that must be hard for arnie
the one he loves asking him to make love to her
but also for khushi now
gosh this is confusing
but am sure that will clear with next part

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

mindblowing part

loved it

plz continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

loved it

that was awesome

arnav loves khushi

and khushi loves him too. but she is yet to realize it

hope she realizes it soon

khushi has a boyfriend too. and i really don't like him

will be waiting for the next part