Arshi OS: Consummation night

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DreamDesignz

@DreamDesignz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

that was excellent...

seriously loved it... I have expected to happen something like that in show when Arshi got close due to payash marriage but it didn't happen...

you made it possible...
thanks...

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janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

oh god i m blushing blushing blushing...

oh no ghostyyou are naughty nowadays..
my ghost after reading this i am flying in my dreamland
Butterfly Greetings

pls write many os like this then only Devil will always stay in her dreamland
wow mindblowing update it stole my heart...

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

awesome update..

khushi tying to make arnav confess..

arnav being all jealous..

shyam is so ergg!!

their marriage was lovely..

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

fabulous and passionate os.
s different story from the show and very well and beautifully written
thanks for pm
and do write more os like this

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

So Sweet nice os.

Thanks for pm.

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Just lovely.
Shyam brought them closer...
Glad they got married.

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome update
Wouldve loved to see something similar to this on show less MU n more Arnav trusting khushi n beating the sh*t outta Shyam for trying to molest his khushi
Their becomin one was so hot but loving
Loved the fact that he married her straight away but infront of their family
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin my way