And we are made to be one AR.FF Part 26 1.Oct.2015 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
awesome part aayu and anamika...
riddhima is sweet...
hate that sid...
wont say to bring AR together soon as it would ruin the pace & momentum of the story...
wonderfully written.
first to comment
congratulate me...haha...
cont soon...
tc...
Adir :):)
Edited by sybarite1989 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Amazing part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
bhag gai res kar kr ladki
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
nyc part dear.. love it :)
keep it up u bohth
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Nice start to the story :)
I feel bad for Riddhima and Armaan
I don't really like Sid :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome update thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Awesome one...cont soon...thnks for the PM...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
nice part..
Riddhima is so stupid...why can't she see Sid's truth..
feeling bad for Armaan...
cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awsm update.
Luvd it.
Superb one.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

PART 2


After meeting with Sid ...Riddhima reached hostel all drenched from head to toe because of rain ... muskan was waiting for ridhima in room n busy in reading a romantic a novel from "Hold my hand" Durjoy Datta ...musakan heard footsteps n said

"agayi tu ...aaj itna late kyun ho gaya tujhe... aur vo chuha aaj bhi time pey nahi aya hoga mein ne pehle hi bola tha chal abh jaldi sey meri bet ki dairy milk nikal bag sey"

muskan turned around n while going near her

"ye kya halat bana rahki hain riddhima ...tum barish mey puri bheeg gayi ho"

Riddhima silently walked inside n muskan took the hand bag from her hands n asked

"tu toh puri ki puri bheeg gayi hain jaa change karley ...thand lagajyegi ...aur tu itni bheeg kaise gayi ...vo chuha atleast aaj toh tujhey drop kar sakta tha"

muskan while keeping ridhima hand bag in a rack said "lalat hai aise boyfriend pe... jo aapni intni pyaari si girlfrndz ko itni taklif deta hain ...mera rahul toh har bar meko hostel safe drop karke jata hai but ye sid arggg... arrey itni late hogayi aur uper sey barish atlest aaj toh drop kar sakta tha vo tujhe ridhzz"

No reply from riddhima ...muskan noticed that she is all silent since she came in the room and was upset n having tears beaming in her eyes ...ridhima ws trying to control her tears ...muskan caught ridhima from shoulder made her sit on bed n got a dry towel from wardrobe for her and starting rubbing ridhima's head drying her hairs and while drying her wet hair asked

"sid ney phir sey shadi ki baat taldi na...!!!!!"

Ridhima broke into tears hearing the words from muskan which she wanted to forget and hugged muskan by her waist n said

"sid mujhsey pyar nahi karta muskan ...usey sirf pasion sey pyar hai.. jab bhi hum milte hian har baar paise ko beech mein ke aata hain... "

Muskan:consoling)maine toh pehle din se hi tujhey bata rahi hun vo tujhsey pyar nahi karta... sirf money minded hai vo chuha...Har samya paise ke pich bhagta rahta hain ..

Ridhima:but mai usey bohot pyar karti hun muskan... usey mai 3 saalon sey badal ney ki khosish kar rahi hun par vo kabhi nahi paiso ke piche bhagna choda... har baar paise paise... mein koi relation todhna nahi chahati muskan.. bachpaan se aaj tak mujhe relation mile hi kitne hain... ek tum aur ek Sid.. tum do hi toh meri life mein...

Muskan - dekh Ridhima mein samjhti hun tujhe ... par ridhima tujhe pata hain na kuttey ki duum(tail) kabhi sidhi nahi hosakti chahe kitni khosis kar le vo teydi hi raheygi ...sid ko har taraf sirf money dekhta hai ...in teen saalon sey vo tujhse har month kuch na kuch bol kar kabhi isliye pasie chahiye kabhi usliye pasie cahiye karkey teri adhi salary ley jata hai ...as a boyfrnd aaj tak usney ek rose tak kharid key nahi diya hain tujhey aur ulta jabhi tum dono bahar jatey ho bill tum pay karti ho ...he is a totally looser riddhima... vo sirf tujhey use kar raha hai... aur kuch nahi ... ridhima ek sache admi ki pehli pechan ye hi hoti hain ki vo kabhi bhi aapni Girlfrndz ya aapni biwi se kabhi bhi koi bhi bill pay nahi karwata aapne saath hote hua bhi par ye sid...

But Ridhima did not say anything and was quietly listening to muskan's words... then muskan looked at her and seeing ridhima not responding to her any of the talks.

muskan moved while holding her head infrnt of baba ji (guru nanak ji) pic complained

"baba ji mai bhi aapna kyun apna khoon jala rahi hun kuch bhi bol kar is ridhima ke samne ...ye riddhima toh sid key pyaar mey pagal ho gai ahin puri ki puri ...har bar rotey rotey aati hai aur main isse samjhati hun aur ye hamesha chup chap sunti rahti hai aur jasie hi subha uss chuhey ka call aata hai bass ussi samay meri sari mehnat pani mey chali jaati hain ... meri saari batein bhul kar phir se usse pyaar se baat karne beth jati ahin ye ...vo chuha ek jhuta sa i luv u boleyga aur ye pighal jayegi ..."

while folding her hands muskan asked "

Plz baba ji aab aap hi kuch kar sakte ho ... baba ji koi toh chamatkar karo... riddhima bohot hi achi ladki bahut bhooli hain.. uskey liye sid right person nahi hai ... riddhima ki life mey kisi aise insan ko bhejo jo uskey layak ho aur usey sacha pyar karey.. jo uski kadar kare jo usse koi bhi duhk na pahuchaye... usey apney palkon pey bhitha ke rakhne wala koi acha premi uski life mey bhejo aur iss chuhe ko kick markey nikalo pehko plz baba ji.. vo chuha itni aachi ladki deserve nahi karta plz baba ji meri dost ko life mein jaldi koi aur le aao..."

At malik mansion

there was a silence in shashank's room ...doctor ws checking his case sheet all of sudden shashank got up Screaming "Riaaa"

Firstly doctortor who were reading the Case File got scared fr a sec n soon recovered frm th shock n goes near shashank ...and putting there hand on his shoulder doctortor asked shashank to relax

doctor - "Sir aap plz relax ki jiya..."

Shashank didn't paid any attention to the doctortors word and was looking here and there and again and agani

shashan : ria ...ria ...

doctortor:relax ...calm down ... nurse jaldi sey armaan ko inform kar dijiye ki Shashank sir ko hosh aa gaya hain...

Shashank:ria ...ria kaha hai doctortor ...

doctortor:vo abhi abhi bahar gayi hai ...thodi der mey ajayegi ...plzz aap relax ki jiya...

Shashank:ria ria ...ria ... while calling ria ...ria he closed his eyes ...

After few mins

doctor:its a miracle armaan ... humein laga tha ki aab tumhare papa ko hosh kabhi nahi ayega but see god is great armaan ...abh tumhare papa bilkul thik hojayengey bt ek problem hai armaan

Armaan:kya problem hain doctortor .

doctor:ye subha sey ria key liye puch rahey hai ...

Armaan closed his eyes ... and while trying hard controling his tears n while taking deep breathe said

"samjhmey nahi araha kya karun mein doctortor ... mein nahi jaanta papa ye sach seh bhi payengey ya nahi ...daar lagraha hai kahin phir ke na kuch ho jaye papa ko..."

doctor:nahi armaan galti sey bhi sach math kehna vo jst nw coma sey bahar aye hai ..unka dimag bohot kamjor hai ...ria key baare mein pata chala toh vo kaise react karengey hum soch bhi nahi saktey ...tumhari saalon ki mehnat meeti mey miljayegi ...

Armaan:abh kya karen doctor...

doctortor:dnt knw armaan ...hum unhoney sach bata nahi saktey aur chupa bhi nahi saktey vo ria ke baare mien tab tak puchenga jab tak ek baar usse dekh na le... and phir aapka baby bhi ... anywys i hve sme othr work ...jarurat padey toh call karna ...

Armaan:ji doctor ...

In armaan's room

Armaan:atul ek aur drink banao mere liye ...

Atul:sir apney bohot pi chuke hain aaj ...abh aram kar lijiye

Armaan:do wat i say atul...

Atul:sir plzzz ...apkey papa aaj hi thik huye hai aur vo kab sey apko puch rahey hai aur aap ho ki yeha drnk kar rahey ho ...

Armaan:drnk nahi toh aur kya karun atul ... papa key samney jaunga toh ria key barey mey pcuhengey mai kya jawab dunga unhoney ...

Atul:i knw sir bt kab tak aap iss tarha chupengey unsey ...ek nah ek din milna hi hoga aur iss tarha aap dur rahogey toh unki halat bigad bhi sakti hai

Armaan: mai kya karun atul ...kaise papa key samney jaun ...papa sey sachayi mai nahi kehsakta ...

shattred on floor n while crying his heart out shouted loudly

"y ria y damn it kyun aise kiya tumnhey abh mai kya karunnn kya jawab do mein papa ko ... kaya kahun unse mein .. ki kahan ho tum... kyun nahi milne aa rahi tum papa se... tum unki itni ladli thi tab bhi aabhi tak kyun nahi aai aapne papa se milne... jawanb do mujhe ria ..jawab dooo... kya bolo mein papa se..."

he got up n snatched wine bottle frm atul's hand and settle down on floor itself and starting emptying the fully fill wine bottle drinking... ...

Atul felt pity on armaan's miserable condition ... he quietly left armaan alone... and moving infront of god while folding his hands prayed

"bhagwan ji plzz help armaan sir ... vo bohot hi achey insan hai ...mujhsey unki taklif dekhi nahi jati ...koi chamat karo bhagwan ji plzz... koi aise ladki sir ki jindagi mein le aaiye bhagwan ji jo sir ko aapne pyaar se sambhal sake... jo sir ke bikhre dil ko samnet ke aapne daman mein rakhe aur jiske saaye se armaan sir aapni saari taklifein bhul jaye... ya dukho ko daba kar aage bhad sake... plzz bhagwan ji ko toh aisa le aao sir ke liya... koi chamatkar karo bhagwani gi ... armaan sir itne aache hain ki vo ye sab deserve nahi karte pzz bhawgan ji ..."

shanky - doctor... ria aabhi tak nahi aai...

doctor - sir aap rest kariye vo aabhi aa jayengi...

shanky nooded...

shanky - doctor kya mein aapne beta se mil sakta hun... plz armaan ko bulaiye.. vo bhi nahi aaya mera se milne...

doctor - aap rest kijiya hum aabhi armaan ko bulate hain...

doctor move out of the cabin and called armaan and asked armaan to meet shashank...

while in room shashank

" kya armaan aapne papa se itna naraj hain ki milne bhi nahi aaya... ria bhi nahi aai milne aur na hi armaan aaya hain ... jaane mujhse itni baadi galti kaise ho gai... kaise hogi meri ria aur armaan and ria ka baby vo ... mujhe maaf kar dena Smriti ... mujhe maaf kar dena ... jaab tum mujhe meri goodh(laps) mein 2 saal ki ria ko chod kar gain thi toh mein ne tum se wadda kiya tha ki mein tumhari aamanat ka bahut aache se khayal rakhunga par... pata nahi kaisa hain meri bachi aur ... mera beta kaise hain ... aur un dono ka bacha...ye sab kya ho raha hain smriti kya ho raha hain ... kis ki nazar lag gai mera haste khele pariwar ko ... mujhe maaf karna...aab armaan hi mujhe kuch bata sakta hain ... kahan ho beta tum aapne papa se bhi nahi milne aaye "

Where on other side

here armaan was all shattered on the floor and drinking wine but more then drinking he was crying...

and atul seeing him from the door where he was standing while praying to ganesha idol...

And on other side

Here ridhima was crying dugging her face in her pillow lying on flat on her stomach and crying on her fate.. and on her loss that she is not able to change sid any inch in his momey mindded thing...and muskan was felling all sad when ever she looked at her freind cum sister soo broken after every meet with that Rascla.. and praying to god side by side...

and the part is over with the screen in 2 half...

ridhima and armaan broken and being prayed for their loved fill future from their loved ones...

wiz lots n lots of luv
Aayushi & Anamika
Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 11 years ago

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