Arhi OS Series : Shaadi ke side-effects [ Part 6 : Pg80 : 5/12 ]

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BSDsarun

@BSDsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

aww such a cute one...
awesome nd passionte
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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Fantastic update Mint 👏

I was laughing out loud on reading Khushi and Payal routine in the parties, adding salt and spices to make food eatable. LOLZ🤣 The cooperates are really tasteless and boring.

I too thought that ASR and Tanya was talking about Khushi but it was all a misunderstanding. You caught us all.👏

Khushi is very possessive for her husband and that's why she jumped to conclusion. Wasn't Arnav the same before, jumping to conclusion without analyzing the misunderstandings.

Khushi Kumari Gutpa is truly the most important deal of Arnav's life.

Khushi is so cute and sweet. Each moment with her increase Arnav love for her exponentially.😳

Akash and Payal went to short vacation😳. Akash is very romantic and jooro ka ghulaam. Do write something about them too.

WOW they still follow the tradition of Arnav unbuckling khushi's seat, that is so cute.

The best I like in these shots is that you never forget to mention their past and it's effect on their present. That's why I love your stories.

The end is as usual hot and superb.☺️

Update next part soon.

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

That was excellent update...

Arnav is immense love on Kushi and he is ready to loose his deal for his Kushi...

Loved the possessiveness Kushi showing towards Arnv when Arnav talking with Tanya...

Poor Tanya, she is the victim for Kushi's outburst, ha ha ha😆

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

I couldn't stop grinning like an idiot throughout the update. It was so simple yet so beautifully written. It gave a deeper glimpse into their family life, portraying the ease in their domesticity.

Though Arnav never demanded of her, Khushi felt it was her responsibility to reform her ways and match up to her husband's status and I really appreciate her efforts. Arnav could have nearly lost the deal due to his wife's misunderstanding and misconduct, but yet all he did was pacify her and get that 100 watt smile back on her face. He chose to enjoy her possesiveness and strengthen their bond a little more.

And the end certainly did mess up a big time with my imagination.

Waiting for the next side-effect.

Update soon. 😊

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Throne

@Throne

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

You had me there!!
😆

If Khushi wouldn't have threatened to teach the witch a lesson, I would have!!
But this was most certainly fun to read!
And the poor girl made a fool out of herself...somethings never change!

Looking forward to the next !
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PSharada

@PSharada

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+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Only Khushi can jump to these kind of conclusions. Without even hearing what her Arnavji is talking about, Khushi jumped to the conclusion that both Arnav and Tanya were talking about her and blasted off Tanya. Hai Re Nandkishore - when will this girl grow up. Loved the way you have written this one shot. Beautiful and true to Arnav and Khushi's characteristics.

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Superb OS..and awesome title..very refreshing and entertaining.maza a gaya..

I think little bit jealousy keeps the love fresh in any relationship..lol..

arnav kitna romantic hai ... hayee.. i just love jealous, possessive & sanki khushi..

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SPraba

@SPraba

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

OMG OMG minty what an update. Loved it. Gosh u are truly an amazing writer. Loved everything that I dont know how to put in my words. Aww a jealous khushi is always a treat to watch and wow she called tanya a chudail Cant wait for the next one. Thanks for the pm