Arhi OS Series : Shaadi ke side-effects [ Part 6 : Pg80 : 5/12 ]

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Posted: 11 years ago

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mints 🤗 Thanks you so much for dedicating this to me on my birthday and for being such a great friend. You are a gem of a person and I really enjoy reading your stories. Now on to the story.

This was such a wonderful treat mints! You know it reminded me of just how Arnav has changed so much after marriage.

Of course Khushi jumped to the wrong conclusion, but that conversation was surely misleading. However, instead of ASR getting furious at her, I love how he calmly handles the situation and relays to her how she is the biggest deal of his life ❤️ The old ASR would have been furious at her. Of course Khushi realizes her fault, and apologizes to Tanya, which I'm sure will lead to them sealing the deal.

I was just confused about one part. At the end, Arnav said he was going to make her scream. Could you pleas elaborate for naive folks like me what exactly that entails,,step by step 😉

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ZAIDI

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ahhh ...such a lovely OS mints ...

Teri os ny phir ly lya dill .. 😆

i so so liked every bit of it . . 😳

ok starting from her dress n earings yu gave an image of a beautiful fairy like khushi ..oh ..n how often yu used that ..he made her feel beautiful thingy . ... I was grinning reading that part .. Fantastic ..

The business parties ..o ya thy r always boring ..issi lye i hvnt attended even a single till date ahaha...

And .. The ASR here ... Was like a decent caring . Handsome ..lovey dovey ideal pati ..hayee yar ... Diwali episode ka shrt hair cut arnav lg ra tha bilkul ..shReef shareef yu see ..all lost in wifey ;-) :-D

aur kya han ..party n khushi s admiring her arnav jee .. Aha mazza ayaan .. Yo yo mintu rox

aagy ka tanya arnav scene ...tanya ki baat sun k even i felt same as khushi did ... But jab arnav did not slapped ber not even verbally ..i felt it thenn there k ye kuch ar baat hai .. Scrolled up n read again .. N ... Smwhere guessed k fashio.n y modeling ki baat hai ...n whn i reAd the part she was little ms oberi .. I was sure its related to modlng .. N . Nothng else ..

Aha ..arnav ji cn nvr cheat on our khushi ...

N the churail k baal nooch lu gi ..n ...tum meri zndagi ki sb sy bari deal ho ..part . I was thnking of these two lines ..n ..to my surprise yu had written thm also ... :-D .

Loved the OS ..

Had such a caring asr . Muah .

N ..the mess of business n clothes loved thm both

happy brthday ssyshoo

p.s mints i was born on november 6 ..but os likhwany k lye i celeb rate one brthday a month .. :-D :-P

P.p.s . Mera cmnt pura parhna plz ... No scrolling doown

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mintsie for a change I am not too late this time! Again I hope that you are feeling a tad better now, thank you for giving us another side effect of Arnav and Khushi's shaadi! And what a sweet side effect that was, your ability to bring forth the most realistic of situations suited to our Arnav and Khushi so wonderfully astounds me each time.

The way you set the scene in the beginning with Khushi getting ready to attend a business party, pondering about the subtle changes she has embraced with her married life and then to have her husband completely distracted by her beauty was so beautifully vivid and wonderful. Loved this explosive equation of our bold Arnav and shy Khushi.

What transpired in the party had me feeling for Khushi because even I assumed ASR was trying to somehow please Tanya so she could convince her dad for the deal, I even contemplated on the fact that ASR could be planning something here just to tease his wife but what you came up with blew me away and had me cracking up. Khushi's emotional outburst was portrayed brilliantly too, it was so Khushi. You definitely took us back to that bachelor party where Khushi searches for the girl who is supposed to be in Arnav's room. As much as I felt for her and her underlying insecurities the tender way Arnav comforted her had me smiling and *sighing. Arnav ji is most certainly a changed man all thanks to his Khushi. Loved the way he approached the whole situation, we would have expected the old ASR to get angry and scream at his poor dear wife a little for misunderstanding the whole situation and acting foolishly but this ASR understood her sentiments, comforted her and gave her a night of love and passion! Do I love the guy or do I love the guy?!

Bravo Mintsie for your impeccable character portrayal of both Arnav and Khushi and for a wonderfully entertaining chapter, absolutely loved it and am already looking forward to more from you! ❤️

PS. A very Happy Birthday to the lovely Sami once again! ;-)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Just read the 2 stories and love the Shaadi ke Side effects... very well written! Like the way you set context for every OS and brought out a new nuance of their relationship. & definitley like the frisky Mr. & Mrs Raizada 😉😆

Look forward to more...

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aww this one is sooo sweet. Arnav and Khushi both were adorable. I loved how Arnav was flirting with Khushi after he came back home. Though Arnav never wanted her to change for himself or for anyone, she did change her clothing style so that no one can say anything bad about Arnav. She wanted to be perfect for her dear husband. But she should have known that she is perfect for Arnav just the way she is. She is the only one for him. I loved the caring side of Arnav. He made sure that she was comfortable in the party and wanted to leave early cause he knew she didn't like such parties. I knew Arnav was talking about his models as Khushi's Arnavji can never think of any other woman taking Khushi's place in his life. No deal is more important to him than his Khushi. Had Taniya dared to say anything bad about his wife to him, he himself would've pulled the hair of that chudail on Khushi's behalf 😆 Khushi was insecure and that's why she reacted like this. Arnav is too precious for her to lose. Like a loving and understanding husband Arnav understood Khushi this time too and also made her realize her mistake. That's how Arnav is. Instead of getting angry he was enjoying Khushi's possessiveness. I loved how patiently and lovingly Arnav comforted her and made her understand. Her understanding is more important to him than anyone and anything else. He's the sweetest husband ever. Loved the punishment he has decided for her. What is Arnav without his naughtiness? 😃

Loved the OS very much. Thanks for the PM. Write more soon 😳

Wish you a very happy birthday once again Sami

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Bavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Cute one. Khushi all sankiness personified avatar. Loved Arnav's punishment to Khushi 's sankiness.thx 4 d PM.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Khushi ne saach mein business ka big-mess kar diya...but we dont care at all...kyun ki Arnav has his biggest deal with him...and Khushi ne uss "imaginary" chudail ka baal almost noch liya tha...Uffo, how I wanted these thing to happen in the show Mints...tumne toh meri wish fulfill kar diya...thanks a lot for that...loved this OS...waiting for another one already...