Mohabbat Zindagi Hai(A Kabhi FF) part 1-40 T1 link to T2 in index - Page 31

Created

Last reply

Replies

878

Views

111.6k

Users

35

Likes

1.5k

Frequent Posters

Gulaabo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anura7281



Thank for liking this story, hope I am satisfying all the kabhi fans here
Glad you find asya bickering real and entertaining

You asked me bench romance and that too back bench romance, i gave you a fullon swing romance
How was it Happy now?


yes i am happy...
u always give such wonderful scenes ...
i love that
thank you 😃
anura7281 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Glad you liked it
Continue reading
anura7281 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

loved the update
accidental kiss yay
asad is really EC and CC will he ever get it right
so humera wants to drive nice ayan to teach her
zoya loves to play cupid who is her cupid
loved how he put the ring back on her finger and teased her
sorry dilshad and zeenat r asya cupid
but these 2 will never stop fighting
new asya game to come
continue soon


Glad you liked it
Continue reading
anura7281 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice story
Read all parts in a go
Beautifully written updates & expressed emotions
Hope asad will confess soon to zoya that he loves her
Continue soon
Plz pm me for next update
Thanks


Glad you liked it
Continue reading
Pls buddy me for pms
anura7281 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: B3ll3...

Finally got time to read this, was a great update. Enjoyed Asad and Zoya's bickering, wish their ego would stop getting in the way, that's has always been the main problem. Poor Asad, must be hard not being able to express oneself and always makes a mess of things by blurting the wrong things out. I'm glad with how Rashid handled shireen, a parent should never force a child to settle down until said children are ready..


Thank you
Glad you liked it
Asya main prob is their ego only Let us see
Poor Asad is EC and CC u know
Yes I gave that Rashid Shirin purposely, becoz the way they showed saying yes to Hasinas disgusting demand and degrading nilkhat was not a good thing done by any father and mother. No parents will do that what they made Rashid and Shirin do in the show. bullshit. And also Shirin shud understand that Rashid what he did 17 yrs ago was forced upon him and forced marriges never succeed. I will give Rashids redemption but in a different way not ike what they did in the show
WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
this is such a great story do pm me the later parts :))
anura7281 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

this is such a great story do pm me the later parts :))


Glad you liked it
Continue reading

Pls fo buddy me as its really difficult to select and send pms.
anura7281 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Since Arjun entered QH on Asya sangeet, I like RD very much and found KSG RD cute too and hence Arjun will enter in the next update to help Asad , He will do a cameo role only.

Precap: Ayan agrees to give Humera driving classes. Zoyas new game released and is much in demand in market now. Humera goes on her first day of driving and Ayra spend some time together. Ayan starts to feel something for Humera now. Zoya tells Asad that she saw Raghu as driver at Ayans house. Ayan and Badi bi discuss about the photo and how the photo in their house and with zoya is same. Razia overhears the convo and concludes that Zoya is Gaffurs daughter. Asad gets a packet in his office with a letter in it. He opens to find photos of Rashid setting fire to the Doll factory. Asad decides to open the Gudiya Factory case but not in an open way since Dilshad is now ill.

PART 23

Asads Residence

Zoya was sitting outside on the bench and chilly wind was blowing. After some time she felt something warm around her and and saw that Asad had wrapped her in shawl from behind. Asad sat beside her with a cup of steaming coffee and he pointed towards the other cup. She took it and held it near her mouth and looked at Asad. She wanted to say sorry but it wasn't happening since Asad didn't say it. She was expecting that from him. He again put his hands into the pocket of his white kurta and took out the music ball and gave it to Zoya. Zoya knew that he was feeling guilty for his behaviour but still no sorry from his side was pissing her. She took it from him and asked "Aur iske peeche ki story?" Asad pointed to the black coffee in his hands and said "Meine story jaisa apne kahan vaisa karke apni black coffee dal ke pee raha hoon." Zoya laughed a little. And then she hear something which she didn't expect but had expected "Sorry" Asad said sorry to her. She was looking at him with her eyes wide open like did he really say that or my ears are ringing. Zoya "mere kaan tho nahi baj rahe hain, Mr. Jahapana six packs ne sorry kaha vo bhi apni kaneez se, 8th wonder of the world." Asad rubbed his fingers on his temple to show that he was irritated with this antics but Zoya was not going to stop at all. Zoya said "Vo I am too sorry" Asad said Ok it happens sometimes." Zoya and Asad were then silent for sometime and then Zoya asked Asad "Apko yaad hai last time jab hum yahan baite the tho kya hua tha,phoppi ko hospital vapis laye the right, and then we had a sorry talk too and this time also sorry talk. I guess this bench is made for sorry talks only haina." Asad smiled a little bit becoz he found it funny. Saying this she remembers about the Dilshads shooter and immediately turned to Asad "Main apse ek important baat karna chahti thi par apne mouka hi nahi diya." Asad was surprised that what important talk Zoya had . Zoya told him that day when she was returning from Nikhats mehndi function she was dropped at house by none other than Raghu Singh and he was a permanent driver at SM. Asad on hearing that asked whether he recognised Zoya and Zoya told I never gave him any opportunity to recognise me. Asad told "Hmm good" Zoya "ab age kya," Asad "vo case ki sare sabot sab mita diye gaye honge and Janab Rashid Ahmed khan ne sabko khareed bhi liya, ab hum kar kya sakte hai, chup chap sab dekhne alawa." Zoya said " Na ummeedi guna hoti hai Mr. Khan, aap himmat mat hariye, kuch na kuch raastha tho nikal hi jayega aap dekhiye," Asad "raat bahut hogayi hai, andhar chaliye" And they both went inside.

Ayans residence, Next morning

Humera was waiting for Zoya and was happy to see Zoya. Zoya asked, "Gadi kahan hai, and Humera showed their "SUV" Zoya "Kya yeh gadi nahi yeh bohot bada hai" "Choti Gadi nahi hai, Humera showed the other one, that was a benz. Zoya said "yeh sab nahi chalega," Humera "Kyun" Zoya "vo issliye kyunki seekhne ke liye choti gadi acchi hoti hai, wait, main kuch karthi hoon." She took out her phone and dialled a number. Humera "aap kisko bula rahi hain" Zoya "tumhare Ayan miyan ko" Humera "Kya ayaan , lekin ayaan ko kyun" Zoya "tum sawal bohot pooch thi ho, chup chap mera saath do," Humera said "ok, par karna kya hai," Zoya "wait and watch". After sometime Ayan came . Zoya started her drama " Vo Ayan Humera gadi chalana seekhna chahti hai, to yeh sab badi gadiyan hain, tho mein use lekar driving school gayi thi, lekin wahan sab ladke instructors the, aur vo Humera ro aise ghoor rahe the , jaise pehle koi ladki ko kabhi nahi dekha, mein isse sikha deti, lekin you know, mera Indian license nahi hai na, issliye Mr. Khan naraz hojayenge, to kya mein isse driving school mein admit kardon, yah phir tum Humera ko sikhado? Humera understood Zoyas plan now and she was smiling by now. Ayan said "Nahi driving class nahi, vahan sab ladke hain, mein hi sikhaunga, kal se lekin muje tab tak abbu se kehke ek gadi ka intezaam karta hoon." Ayan said "hum kal se start karenge, mein office jane se pehle I will coach you and then you can go to college and I can go to my office" Zoya asked "Kya kehti aap Humera Begum Ayan se seekhenge yah phir driving school jaogi? " Humera mischeviously said "Mein to driving school jana choongi kyunki, vahan bohot sare ladke honge, to at least vo meri tareef karenge etc you know muje attention denge etc." Ayan said "Aap driving school nahi jayengi aur kal se aapko mein sikhaunga, samji." Ayan walked away in anger. Zoya said "Dekh liya, yeh banda kehta ki tumse pyar nahi karta par jal bunke kabab bangaya. Ab aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya" They both hi fied.

Zoyas Guesthouse

Zoya had already given the software for testing and it was completed successfully and released in the market also. Zoya in between had taken an office space for rent and thought to ask Mr. Khan to do the interiors of her office. She thought she will officially go with this proposal to him today. This time her game was named as "THE OCD HOUSE", in this game, there is a house, it has a master who had already programmed it in a way that all the things are perfectly placed in the house, if there is any error in placing the things you lose. And it was a time bound game and the time set was 8 mins. When you open the game you get a picture of how the things are placed in the house for some seconds and you have to memorise it. And then the picture disappears and you have to arrange everything in place. Zoya purposely made this game to irritate Asad. And she kept a copy of this game in Asads room while coming back from his house.

Asads Office

Asad gets a courier from some anonymous person and found it lying on his table when he came to his office today. He opened it and saw a letter. He read it, the letter said

"Agar app Gudiyon ka kharkane ki bare mein janta chahte hain, uske peeche ki sachai pata lagana chahte hain tho aap mere agle khat ka intezaar kariye aur iss khat mein ek jagah ka pata hai, vahan pein 2 lakhs rupaiye jama kardijiye. Agar apko lagtha hai mein jhoot bol raha hoon, tho nazarana pesh hai, iske saath kuch tasveere bej raha hoon, dekh lijiye, agar apka jawab haan hai to, 2 lakh rupaiye jama kardijie aur mein samaj jaunga, Khuda Hafiz"

Asad was confused that who has sent these pictures to him and he opened to see the pictures. He saw Rashid setting the doll factory to fire with this own hands. He was super angry on seeing this and he was now some what convinced that Rashid was involved in Dilshads shooting and also Zoya yesternight talk of seeing Raghu Singh at SM as permanent driver. He thought he will bring out the truth behind the Doll factory incident. At that time Zoya entered his cabin and he was surprised to see her here. Zoya had come for discussing her office interiors but she what she saw was something else. Asad was standing with some photos in his hand and his eyes were bloody red and his vein was protruding in his forehead. Zoya kept her hands on Asads shoulders and he calmed down. She took the photos from him and the letter too. She too read it and looked at Asad. She said "Ab aap kya karenge, 2 lakh denge, kuch bhi karne se pehle yeh soch lijiye ki phoppi bimar hai aur unhe stress se door rakhna hai." Asad saw that Zoya was talking sense and he had to find some way to search the truth. Asad said "Ms farookhi aap yeh baat kissi se nahi kehengi specially ammi se, mein tab tak kuch sochta hoon." Zoya also closed her eyes in support. She told that she had come with a business proposal for him. And she said how she wanted him to design her office. Asad was happy internally that Zoya was first time asking him something and that too on a mature level and he agreed. He said he will make a visit to her office and then proceed to do the designing. She nodded in approval.

Ayans Residence

Ayan was sitting in his room seeing some office papers , Badi bi entered. Ayan on seeing her got up and held her hand and made her sit on the bed and he sat down on the floor with his head on her lap. She was pressing Ayans head. Badi bi "Tumne aur Humera ne bilkul teek kiya yeh umar nikhan karne ka nahi hai, waqt se pehle kiya hua faisla askar galat hota hai. Haar cheez ke liye ek sahi waqt hota hai aur uss waqt pe bina hamare kuch kiye vo apne aap ho bhi jata hai." Ayan nodded. He said "Babi bi vo uss din apne kahan than a use photo ke barein mein, vohi bilkul vohi photo Zoya ke pass bhi hai aur vo kehti hai ki yeh photo mein Zoya ke abbu hain. Kya mamujaan ko apta hoga ki Zoya ke abbu kou hai? Kyunki apne kaha tha ki uss photo mein mamujaan kuch rishtedaar aur kuch dost hai." Razia was passing by their room at that time and she stopped to eavesdrop the conversation. Badi bi "Pata nahi Ayan agar Zoya ke paas yahi tasveer hai jo Razia ke kamre mein thi, tho phir ho sakta hai ki Siddique Saab ko kuch pata ho Zoya ke abbu ke barein mein. Mein ek kaam karti hoon, mein Siddique Saab se mouke dekhe pooch lungi, tum fikr mat karo." Badi bi saying this got up to go and Razia hid herself behind the door outside.

Asads Office

Asad had instructed Prasad and told him get a phone appointment with Arjun Kirolskar, DK Constructions Mumbai. He was waiting for his call. Zoya asked "Will he call" Asad said "Of course hes a good friend of mine." Asad had decided that in order to find the truth behind his mother shooting and the secret revolving around gudiya factory, he had acquire it and make his own. So he decided to take help of his friend Arjun Kirloskar. He had planned to make Arjun a dummy buyer and make a buy out deal with Rashid Ahmed Khan and later transfer the property to him, so that he can easily access the property whenever in need and he also planned to claim the insurance which was pending for long time thereby involving the insurance company also. Insurance companies make a thorough investigation before passing any claim and he wanted a hassle free investigation and that can happen only when he has the ownership of the factory. As expected Arjun called him. He detailed his plan and Arjun agreed to help him and arrive in Bhopal in a couple of days time. Asad was now happy that without hurting Dilshad he can find the truth. After it was Zoyas idea of involving the insurance company and later Asad planned everything.

Asads Residence

Asad came to his house very much happy becoz of many things. Firstly his equation with Zoya was now little comfortable as they had told sorry to each other and the tension was no more there. But Asad still had not confessed. Secondly Zoya had requested him to design her office. Thirdly, Zoya again helped him out to find a way to search the truth behind doll factory without hurting Dilshad. And now that he was a little bit confident in his mind now that he can surely talk to Zoya. Asad checked on Dilshad who was sleeping and he went to his room and found the vol 2 asya game on his couch table. He took the CD and smiled. He went to washroom to freshen and came back within no time. He loaded the CD and was waiting for the game to load. This was a different game. He actually liked it, since it involved memorising, but as he played he realised that Zoya had made his OCD trait as a base for her game and was teasing him too. Asad felt irritated but still was happy that Zoya wanted him to play the game. He brushed aside the negative thoughts and went to sleep.

Ayans Residence

Razia was walking up and down in her room. Gaffur was on out of station and was to expect to arrive in a week only. Razia needed to put her plans into action as soon as possible. Her biggest obstacle was Badi bi who already knows that she had killed Gaffurs first wife in the doll factory. Now that she knew another secret that Zoya had the same photo as that was in her room and she was probably going to ask Gaffur about that photos similarity thus opening the secret that Zoya was is long lost daughter for whom he still pines. Razia knew that Gaffur had a soft corner for his first daughter and he always asked Razia about her whereabouts to which she always says that she doesn't know and now its had been 17 long years. She needed to fix Badi bi before she meets Gaffur. She called Tanveer. Razia talked animatedly to her for sometime and said "Billo rani agar tumne yeh kaam kardiya tho mein mooh mange keemat doongi tumko, samji." Billo agreed.

Next day morning

Ayan was waiting with a Maruti 800 car for Humera. Humera came and said "Chale". Ayan asked her to take the driving seat. Humera looked at the car and said "Iss Gadi mein sikhhoongi," Ayan said "yes, kyunki yeh meri gadi hai, maine company se loan liya hai aur kyunki meri yeh pehli naukri hai tho yehi manage kar paya, lekin seekhne ke liye yeh kaafi hai, chota bhi hai aur purana bhi hai, kahin tok diya tho bhi problem nahi hogi." Humera "lekin Ayan aapko loan lene ki kya zaroorat thi, aap vaise hi apne abbu se kehdete tho, vo aise 10 gadiyaan khadi kardete apke samne." Ayan said "Mein chahta tha ki mein apni khud ki liye hui gadi se apko sekhaun, kuch problem hai apko , to mein jaa raha hoon." Humera said "nahin, mein seekhloongi. Chaliye" Ayan asked her on the ignition and removed her chappals. He gave her instructions how to fasten the seat belt and in that process they shared a very close moment, although nothing happened, both were affected by each others intimacy. Ayan took her hand on kept it on the gear and Humera was enjoying Ayans touch. Ayan asked her to concentrate on the road and gave her some coaching classes about the main controls and switches of the vehicle. Humera was intently listening to everything. He told Humera to put the gear to 1st and slowy release the clutch and then press accelerator and told her to maintain slow speed. Humera pressed the accelerator with much pressure that the car went out of her control and Ayan bend himself over her to take control of the steer ring and stop the car. He said "Aisa nahi Humera begum, dheere se, aage dyan rakhiyega" Humera said "Okay". And they slowly went ahead.

Precap: Badi bi goes missing. Asad being Asad did not choose to give 2 lakhs but found his own way to find the truth. Arjun arrives at Bhopal to help Asad. As per Asads plan Arjun meets Rashid and Rashid agrees to it since the case is already closed. The deal is made. Ayan comes to Zoyas office to tell that he is feeling something for Humera. Zoya too gives a lecture on how Humera loves him so much. Zoya asks Ayan to propose Humera and later can get married when they are ready. Ayan is confused and nervous but Zoya convinces him. Zoya asks Ayan to imagine that she is Humera and propose to her right now. Asad comes to her office to make a pre visit before he starting his designing. He witnesses the proposing part between Zoya and Ayan. Asad goes back thinking that Ayan and Zoya love each other.

AngreziKudi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Oh yay a new update 😊
I'm loving the pace at which the story is going, Bari B missing 😲, that's Tanveer work for sure, and she is now in the picture bleh, my least fav character. Oh sad, always assuming the worst.. Tut tut. Great update.
Gulaabo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic!!!
story is going great...tanveer n zoyaan much dreaded entries in next update...!??!
i m loving ayra too!!
poor badi bi...
continue soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

Inspired by the timeless Bollywood tale "Raja Hindustani", this story unfolds in the snowy embrace of Manali, a free-spirited taxi driver and a...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: themasked · a month ago

Prerna watched her sister take her pheras with Ronit, her heart filled with joy.The two of them had been through hell and back before their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: themasked · 1 months ago

"Anupam, how dare you call me a pinecone?" Moloy winced as his daughter tore into her husband.He did agree with Anupam though.Nivedita had...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Mysticaldivine · 10 years ago

Dreams feel real while we're in them. It's only when we wake up that we realize something was actually strange. ~Inception MY STORIES ARE NOW...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 3 years ago

[NOCOPY] [MEMBERSONLY] Tags Credits to Quantum-Dot Hello people! This is Adv. Aditi Jain aka Adi or AJ. I am a writer and here is the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".