ArHi: His Inglorious Deeds#3|| Link to thread four, page 144

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Chapter 12 and 13 were awesome!!!

I really liked how Khushi is making Arnav open up to her!

I wonder what will happen next!

Great job and thank you for the pms!

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

AWESOME UPDATE 👏👏

LOVED IT 😛

CANT WAIT TO READ MORE ⭐️

EAGERLY WAITING FOR D NEXT PART 😊

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Waah cheese waah wat a chp cheeni..mazza aa gaya..
Mera ASR itna emotional hai yaaar meko aaj pata chla..he is d most emotional person..bt woh kisi ko bolta ni hai wat he feels..uska pain..uska tears evry thn is emotional..
N d truth actually shaken me so much..freak ..next chp jaldi se update puleeezzz!!
😊 😭

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Lovely update
Especiallt the flashback
Sch a lovely bonding they both share
Naughty plus emotional both asr were fab

Asr's mother was killed in front of his eyes
Gosh
I guess the murderer must b arnav's father

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Regarding your note thanks for explaining why you need to finish this story before your exams and it's much appreciated that you will complete it.

OMG you will be leaving IF for 4 months, how will we survive without your stories.

I hope when you will be active just on the weekends you will write, please please please.

Coming to the update it was amazing and simply superb,

Love the way Arnav kept on getting his speech wrong for the TV coverage, it was funny (I had to read it twice to notice the mistake, I know duh me).

Khushi is so funny she tried teasing Arnav but he is not one too hold back and ended up teasing and embarrassing her.

The flashback with Arnav and his dad was quite cute with him wanting the batman comic but Arnav's dad was right about stealing,

Awww Arnav past with his dad is quite sad, especially when Arnav was telling Khushi to hate him as well.

Poor Arnav witnessed his mum being murdered that is so devastating and sad, can't wait to read further and see him disclosing his past with Khushi.

The update was a brilliant read, written exceptionally well.

Thanks for the PM,

Look forward to reading the one shot tomorrow xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

This is my 2000th post
Awesome update cheesy
loved the chappy :)

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

That was wonderful update...

So Kushi find out the truth about Arnav as he is not bad but pretend to be bad and jerk...

Loved the way Kushi stands strong on her decession to know about Arnav's past and wanted to help him...

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mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

I really love d story.. splly how each chapter shows a new face to arnavs personality...
awesome story

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Beautiful update
haha . .khushi teasing arnav. . .bechari
Now look who's gone red 😳
lol. . .i loved wat arnv sd. . .
The kiss was a peck bt what u gv ws a bonus. . . 😆
It was awesm. . .