Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24)

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IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

I have a feeling that they won't end up *ahem ahem*

maybe there will be some ...errm... unavoidable situation? Like RIshabh coming to meet Sumer?

I just feel that probably this is not that point in the story yet.. because there are quite a few chapters remaining yet.. I am right? Will I get a special mention if I correct? 😉😆

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naina_raina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Congrats on the new thread... This story is moving along at a nice pace..

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

This story is being unraveled in a beautiful way!!!
Congratzz on the new thread!!!

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Riddhi Singhal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Congratulations on the new thread. We will keep that in mind, for sure. Please, update soon.

Thanks,
Love,
Riddhi <3

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Waiting for chapter 39...it's going to be a huge turning point in the lives of Arnav and Khushi.

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Jenngee93

@Jenngee93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

I love your pieces, Gives me butterflies in my stomach every time :D

Can't wait for the new installment <3

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christmas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Oh goodness...does she or doesn't she...more importantly will this vulnerability make him more open and have him confess his feeling...continue soon

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Sona Rajasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

congrats on new thread yar...wow...dis is so awesome...love the way u r crafting d story...superb...

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

i hav started reading this story again...

and i was thinking how arnav reached from this sentence i.e.

'Okay. Khushi. Just stay out of my way' he chewed out his words.

He hauled her wet body to his drenched one and secured her to himself tightly. 'I... I... want you today Khushi. Not... not kisses... I.. more..' he seemed at loss of words.

this is just a mindblowing story... of such beautiful emotions...

hats off to writer..just reached 5th chapter again... and its so superb...

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

after MKM 1 i started reading this from t start n one go...it was way diff and complicated compared to the 1st part...i should definitely appreciate the way u had described arnav s mood swings and his taught process his outbursts...his fears...his love..obsession...his want to become normal ad yet holding on to t past for fear of loosing ur loved one again! was just freaking awesome.

i have never read so many emotions beautifully written in this depth in any other arhi story...as in i could guess wat was going on in his mind just wit t way u had drafted his characterisation n tho story. hats off to u...reallly tats a big job and wonderfully done :)

and khushi s character is no less...her loving nature and her easy go lucky ways of life and yet her complexes how she positively tries to come out of it willingly, her care n concern and her warmth will definitely make any one fall for her, so wat if she limps. tat just is a damn thing to think about..i loved t way er character was also drafted by u! i should say i loved t story all together and other charac were also lovely! u left us in a cliffhanger and after reading t story in one go i was just siting bitting my nails to know about wat will happen next. t turning point of their lives!

please please update asap...i m just too eager to read about it. if possible can u please give me ur blog link?