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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: katheriene
Read all parts in one ago😊
Beautiful writing & good story👏
Waiting for next part😊

thank you kats..

no i wont continue this story hence i named it completed..

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: moonkmh
this was amazing...i so loved the story.. a reasonable sanyu..sweet parth n a changed randhir..how well u put them together...i love that dialogue "u spoiled me sanyukta" thats sounds awsome.

thanks moon...

aww.. that dialogue is from my upcoming FF.. i used it here and i think is should patent it.

glad u loved this attempt of mine. feels good. *muahhh*

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: p.vibha
Awesome update! Loved it:D

thanks vibha for reading and commenting...😊😊

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

interesting Concept...
ur version of village track is actually quite plausible and realistic,something I would have loved to see in the show!!
the "silent" therapy was a sweet revenge!!
I specially loved liquid electricity...
the emotions and inner turmoil beautifully described!!
I loved it over all Tich!!
great job!!

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: ..Serendipity..
interesting Concept...
ur version of village track is actually quite plausible and realistic,something I would have loved to see in the show!!
the "silent" therapy was a sweet revenge!!
I specially loved liquid electricity...
the emotions and inner turmoil beautifully described!!
I loved it over all Tich!!
great job!!

Thank you Radsy for your beautiful and encouraging comment..

Well it's the beauty of one shots and short stories that we can give a realistic touch. For long stories it's not possible since we have to continue it further.

Liquid electricity is kind of difficult part to write, glad u loved it.

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Look who is here with the ideal ending for the captivating and optimistic story... The ultimate writer of this forum and one of the most promising writer, the one who inspire me to write...

Where do I begin from, capturing the expressions and character of each character and maintains the same throughout is the most challenging task for a writer, and to get the readers hooked to the story even after a month is the toughest. But you manage to do that with so much passionate and integrity among the characters. Well what do I say? Each time you write I feel a new desire of reading and writing being born in me! Your words create an ambience which is so filled with emotions and seem realistic. As I always say your post justify the show the most as you manage to reveal the essence to the audience making circumstances just and realistic!

I hope to write as good as you do soon. I guess you will Bless me, wo t you?!

Edited by Iptisha - 11 years ago

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Iptisha
Look who is here with the ideal ending for the captivating and optimistic story... The ultimate writer of this forum and one of the most promising writer, the one who inspire me to write...
Where do I begin from, capturing the expressions and character of each character and maintains the same throughout is the most challenging task for a writer, and to get the readers hooked to the story even after a month is the toughest. But you manage to do that with so much passionate and integrity among the characters. Well what do I say? Each time you write I feel a new desire of reading and writing being born in me! Your words create an ambience which is so filled with emotions and seem realistic. As I always say your post justify the show the most as you manage to reveal the essence to the audience making circumstances just and realistic!
I hope to write as good as you do soon. I guess you will Bless me, wo t you?!

Ipti.. i'm fasting tomorrow.. U filled my tummy with your loaded appreciations na..

You say you get inspired by me but infact i get inspired by your wonderful comments, you know motivation of readers is the only driving factor for writers.

Aww... yes darling.. every writer has a forte. Like some are good in romance, thriller, supernatural stuff and i guess mine is realistic touch.

Friends dont bless, they wish luck and mera luck tere saath hai darling.. always.

A treat for you from my side for such lovely appreciations.. soon in the form of ff.❤️❤️

Edited by TheDreamCatcher - 11 years ago

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Well how do I react now... My face is gonna have a permanent smile pasted tonight... I am trying to study but the show the forum the members Are so not letting me concentrate... Thank you for your wishes...

Waiting for exams to get over...then party in forum all day!

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Iptisha
Well how do I react now... My face is gonna have a permanent smile pasted tonight... I am trying to study but the show the forum the members Are so not letting me concentrate... Thank you for your wishes...
Waiting for exams to get over...then party in forum all day!

Aww.. best of luck darling.. Exams are important u see. If you are really addicted to the show then extract positivity. Take Randhir as example and follow him. Strive to be like him and you are there.

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Silence can always work miracles you know.That is why someone said Silence is Golden.There is no point in wasting your breath for long if that doesn't produce a morsel of reaction in the person we are speaking. Especially if the person is someone like Mr. Men and Only Men deserve to be an Engineer Randhir.

San yuk ta got the result she desired and perhaps more maybe unknown to her. A part of Randhir's brain realises the place Sanyu ta has in it I guess.

Jaan tumhaari thareef ke liye ab shabd nahin bache mere paas. You always amaze me.

Love

Nidha