An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant updates dear... eagerly waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part...Aman didnt knw abt khushi married life??..who s sheetal..last part s khushi want to knw abt her desires..bold ASR
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love this story to bits...aman is such a mean guy..firing an employee coz words of her resignation are out,how underconfident,if there's a word like that..dat makes me think who owns biosys ,arnav! ,nk!!..n who's sheetal here dat arnav gets so pestered about..khushi a selfless self sacrificing person,someone who vouches for others interest before..how hurting it must be for not being asked about of her opinion though she is force behind her family... I love arnav here who reads her like open book ,,every expression,every line on her face,,efforts he takes to involve her in his life,simplest activity being very subtle,,how sweet,,they are more like partners,equals...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can i get the link of the blog?
i love this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am a new reader of your story...
i must say u r an amazing writer...i love the way u write khushi's character...she is slefless but strong,and m not sure bout arnavs character yet...lets see how it goes in the story

i just read u will not update this ff on IF anymore...sad
but i sent u a buddy req...plz accept n plz send me PM if possible
Tc.x
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Posted: 11 years ago
your story is really awesome one... in the end khushi finally gonna live 4 herself... she will explore new thing in her life with the help of arnav... I really love dis part... P.m me your blog link too... m eagerly waiting 4 the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello dear!!!!!😊 amazing update😛 loved it😊 the way khushi expressed her desire to kiss made me laugh at her😊 the update is very romantic😊 very eagerly waiting for ur next update😃 and we don't have any problem with u transferring ur works to a blog😊 whatever decision u take, we are happy as long as u continue with ur works and we would love to support u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi
am just in love with ur story - pls pm the blog address
Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved the update.
it was brilliant and smoking hot.

Part 1
Arnav and his apology and his reasons for him being rude to Khushi.
i am in love with this Arnav who though is arrogant sometimes but tend to clear himself why he was so at the moment. Also i loved Khushi her urge to help out Arnav but refraing herself in the last moment . then as sweetness dissolves each and every bitter feeling, so the Belgian Chocolate did the trick and finally the awkwardness dissipated and also the reason came out which helped Khushi understand Arnav better as "pieces of puzzle fell into their place"

Now as Payal's alliance is fixed with Akash, the things back at home is getting excited for her family but she isn't as happy as she should feel. may be she would have had if this was a real marriage and not a contract one. but she is trying to be, even in this situation.
And the next scene that happens with Khushi helping Arnav to undress, well, it was HOT, made me sweat!!!😆
And now NK and Khushi, both are there, will there be some scenes of their rapport as well?
Manorama, not feeling happy with Khushi going to work, well, she isn't aware of their arrangements that they live in separate rooms?

"I just have one more question. How can you look so beautiful even when you've had a sleepless night?"

i loved the above dialogue.

why is Lavanya such a mystery? is there more to her character apart form being Khushi's bodyguard?

And then there is that Aman!!! i don't wanna waste my effort in commenting about him. he is not worth it. TOTALLY A JERK! Huff!!!

Part-2
Loved Arnav and his thoughtfulness and his methods of distraction.
I am glad Khushi noticed it and felt good for the gesture.
Alos she gave into her desires and then that KISS as to take and then give was sensual and steamy and sexy. Arnav the tutor and Khushi the faithful student. and after that is done, hunger for the knowledge to know more and a leap in her desires also increases. now what? will the next update entail some more of tutorial classes?

Or shall we look forward to the house warming party?

Waiting for the next update.

Now about the note,
well, i am disappointed with the DT, but as we know, nothing will be done by them, so i welcome your decision. though i would have preferred IF over a blog but still ,that is no problem unless and until you are with us and continue writing and giving us wonderful stories to read and cherish.
will look forward to your stories in the blog then.
Thank you for continuing.
Love
Celina.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update, Juhi! Love all the dialogues between Arnav and Khushi! He never leaves a chance to flirt with her. Did I already mentioned I love this Arnav? 😆 Wow, the scene where Khushi was helping him undress was sizzling! ☺️ How much longer will they last? Khushi is getting more and more curious! Thank you so much for all your efforts! 🤗
I'm so sorry for all your troubles. You are a brilliant writer and I think it is really their loss. I respect and support your decision to move your story to a blog. Thank goodness you'll continue to write!!

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