An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi, I hope you understand that I have some legitimate doubts about this story.
I feel that as a well-fed author, you will be able to answer them, and not lose your cool. Otherwise, let me serve you some more pages.

a) When will Khushi examine his...shaatir dimaag?
b) Are Aman and Lavanya respectively in lau with Khushi and Arnav-- and therefore have trouble dealing with them?
c) Are horses the only thing that Arnav can ride well?
d) Who is Sheetal? And why can't Anjali Di check up on her HERSELF?
e) Is Khushi going to get regular kissing lessons?
f) Why did Arnav drop out in his last year? Why not finish school?

I'll be back with more later. Whattey awesome you are.
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a beautiful update Juhiji! Simply awesome! Your language, your imagery, your control over the storyline...superb!
As for your note, I will read your work anywhere and anyhow. I deeply respect the fact that you are very considerate towards readers like us, who don't comment all the time, although my track record seems to be improving. Thank you for creating a blog and for promising to keep its entry free for all. Love you for that!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was reading this in bus, actually returning from college. This chap get me so excited that literally I was going to jump. Like inner goddess was shouting n dancing 😆 This SS is still now your best work Juhi. And yes, can I get one ASR? 😳 If someone get a husband like this in the deal of contract marriage then yes nowdays I'm having weird fantasy about contract marriage 😛
And the note! I can't understand one thing. I know you do pm a lot of people. So if you expect two comments from them, like one for their views about the update and the other where they are asking when you are going to update, so I think easily it would take 50-60 pages? Even that means spamming? When someone get 500+ likes for each update then one comment from those 500+ people will take many pages? Closing the thread for this is nothing but insane.
And yes thank you that you'll make one open blog. Because frankly if readers can't read what they want to and have to beg authors for blog link, then many people like me will lose their interest. But still I feel IF is a big public forum and here when I read stories about ArHi, its an awesome feeling. We did voted your stories previous time and you got award for that also. I know these are little things but still in this way we can appreciate someone 's work also. So if you don't post updates here, can we vote for your stories this year? I hope they will include blog updates also. This restrictions are making me a little sad. :-(
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi,
this was a wonderful update. Khushi has realized already that he is the only one for her. loved it and love you for writing this simply irresistible story.
and a blog will be wonderful. i would love it. just keep us poste..
love
ak
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful updt 😊
And about d note... usme kya hai.. jahan bologi wahan aa jayenge padhne ke liye 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's okay if you've decided to start a blog of your own.
I'm happy.

I do hope that you'll be sending PMs even if you update in your blog.

And the story is AMAZING. I can't get enough.
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Posted: 11 years ago
firstly chapter 3 was really good...liked that arnav sensed that she was upset, and tried indirectly to change her mood...i liked that when she asked for one kiss, he asked her to take it, and didnt participate until she asked, and i liked that he stopped at the right time too...his phone call with di was interesting and even the way he said that he kept his promise and didnt interfere with her professional life was good...chapter 3 was well worth the wait
As for your personal note, there seems to be so many rules around fan fiction that many people find it overwhelming and not worth the hassle. If people didnt ask you why you had not updated we would not have know that you had jet lag and needed more time, likewise you may have not known how many people were so desperate for your update, i do not see how this so called spamming affects anyone in a bad way etc. I admire that you have chosen not to report your followers and like your idea, sad that you were pushed into this decision. i look forward to reading your blog:)


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Posted: 11 years ago
The story is amazing and gets better with each chapter . I will follow this story whether in IF or blog whichever works better for you .. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really really liked it
I can't believe khushi just did that ... Omg!!... Did she really walk up to him and had ask for an kiss ?? Wow kudos to her
Can't wait for more

And I totally support your decision to open a blog .. That way you can also protect all your work :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz do give me access of ur blog as I'm very fond of ur stories,they r always different n nicely written.

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