Sandhir-'Hero'(updated), last part-pg 39 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey... read all parts in one go...
Awesomee girl...!!!
I just loved all...
plz cont soonish...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg sanyu kissed randhir...even also about to faint...lol

awesome update...but feeling sad when truth will out how sanyu will react

do update soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
sooo sweet yaar
update soon😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh dear .. You love ending an update on a cliff hanger right!!
Nice update...
Waiting for next...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow! i just read all parts in a go.. wah! kyah naam rakhe hain mcp's k, Chomo, dhakkan.. osum
i think mr agarwal ko b hitler papa bulana chahiye . huh

aur phirse latka k rakh dia tmne hmmm..
kamaal kar ditta tussi yara.. keep up the good work.. n update very soon

btw thnx for the pm .. agr pm nai karti toh mai itni achi story shayd miss kar deti..

Good luck , update ASAP
love, naira
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Posted: 11 years ago
OH MY! hats off! this is amazing! pls update soon! [ and make randhir fall for her}😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
WAISE BOL NA HI PAREGA YAR!!!!!

HATS OFF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

IT'S REALLY REALLY GR8


NEXT UPDATE KAB KAROGE

I AM REALLY DYING FOR IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
**Sorry for commenting so late**
Although I was reading all your parts regularly but still I read them again to compliment you😊😊
Even I am fan of Enrique Iglesis...I loved his this song...
Part 1 was Chhotu but a biggg bang...
This is how a story should start...
Sanyukta got scared and Randhir so concerned...**so sweet**😳😳😳
Part 2 was very late update but I understand😊😊😊...
It reopened many things...
When Randhir asked him about her boyfriend...Mujhey pta chal gaya ki kuch toh honewala hai😉
So clever of me...
Randhir's idea was awesome which I had gussed very early...
I am glad that he is helping Sanyukta...

3rd update was so early😊😊😊...
But it was so chottu...but gave a clearer idea of Randhir's plan😊..

4th update was nyc...
Randhir's detergent dialogue was so guddd...
And last ka shock bahut bada tha...
Humanity ke liye nahi tho kyu???

5th update...interesting...very interesting...
3 months pehle kya kiya Randhir ne jo usse itna guilty feel karwa raha hai...
A big shock is waiting for Sanyukta as far as I guess...
Sandhir's message convo was damn cuteee...

6th update was fabulous...
His shayaris were too good...
Although it was his plan, but still imagining Randhir sending such messages to Sanyukta😳😳...
Randhir's idea of deleting those messages was so clever of him...

7th update was also nyc...
That chomo got a good lesson just because of Randhir's plan and off course because of his zero IQ... 😆
Randhir reached Sanyukta's house😃very happy...
And the way Sanyukta said tumhare izzat ko kuch nahi hoga...I was really grinning...😆😆😆

8th update was too good...
Randhir ne sambal liya situation ko nahi toh Ankit toh...
Awww...Randhir saved Sanyukta so many times😳😳😳...
Randhir ne iss update mein kuch jyada hi compliment kar diya Sanyukta ko...
I was happy for his this attitude...
Even Sanyu's mom was elated😊...
The way she said"yeh ladka thik hai mere Sanyukta ke liye"...
Randhir ne toh unka dil bhi jeet liya😳😳😳...
Kya yaar yeh chomo ko kyun har waqt aa jata hai😡😡😡...
Paln B damn excited😃😃😃...
Sanyukta toh kafi aage badh gayi hai...
She gave a peck on his cheek...**so cutee and romantic**

One thing which I noticed in all your parts was that you are a devil...you always leaves the reader in very tight position...you know how to handle readers😉😉😉...keep goiing like this...thanks for the pm...
Loved the updates❤️...
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Posted: 11 years ago
So I know I've done a work for which I deserve the chappals and the tomatoes but I'm really sorry!!
This update is dedicated to
Kriti di(Miss P.K Tunn)- Di tussi great ho! Your works are perfectly penned down!
Naira di(Nafees5)-Di !!Sorry I posted this wayyy too late
Tanya(Tashaforever)-And I know I'm gonna be beaten up by you on 2nd!!
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Randhir opened the door and saw Sanyukta's mother at the door weeping , "Anju aunty! Aap yahan? Kuch hua kya? Kuch chaiye ? Koi problem? Koi kaam reh gaya kya? " Randhir questioned as she entered the door and he made her sit on the bed and sat on the chair near by the bed. He saw a tear drop that fell from her eyes "Aunty! Kya hua ?" He asked as he comforted her. "Beta! Save her!" came a reply from Sanyu's mother , a puzzled Randhir asked "Save who? Aunty" "Sanyukta! Save her from these devils! She doesn't deserves to live with such devils.

Her life will be destroyed if she marries Sameer! Take her away from here, let her achieve her dreams." Sanyukta's mother , Randhir calmly responded "Aunty kuch hua hai na ? Bataiye, kya hua hai?" Sanyukta's mother smiled a little and replied "Tumhe kaise pata ?" "Pata chal jata hai! Ab bataiye kya hua hai?" Randhir responded with a calm smile on his face , "Beta kal shaam ko dinner se pehle main Sameer ke kamre se guzar rahi thhi tab bhi maine uski awaaz suni kisi se baat karte hue, woh apne kisi friend se baat kar raha tha"

Flash back:

"Haan yaar! Ek baar yeh shaadi hone do.. uss sanyukta ki saari akad ko khatam kar doonga. Bada banti hai apne aapko, ek baar yeh shaadi ho gayi na phir yeh mere ghar ki bahu nahi naukar hogi! Badi aayi mujhe akad dikhane wali! Woh kya samjhti hai ki Mechanical engineering kar rahi hai toh use complete kar ke hi rahegi, theek hai topper hai apne branch ki toh kya badi baat hai? Ek baar yeh shaadi hone do iski saari akad main khatam karta hoon phir.. Isko main apne pair(feet) ke neeche daba ke rakhunga.. Waise bhi ladkiyon ka kitchen mein rehna , ghar ke kaam karna aur baccho ki dekh bhal karna hi hai.. Faltu mein inko kyun college bhejo and paise barwaad karo?" Sameer gave the lecture with full of arrogance. "Yeh main kya sunn rahi hoon! Agar sanyu ki isse shaadi ho gayi toh main apne aap ko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paungi" Said Sanyu's mother worriedly

End of flashback

"Shit!! Yeh ladka hai kaisa !" Raandhir sighed , "Beta usko bacha lo! Akhir kar tum usse pyaar jo karte ho" Sanyu's mother said "Pyaar?" Randhir asked with his one eyebrow up "Haan! Pyaar" Sanyu's mother said "Aunty, main aapki madad karunga waise aap mistaken ho! Main usse pyaar nahi karta" Randhir said , Sanyu's mother curved a smile and stood up and said "Randhir! Maine tumhari aakhon mein uske liye pyaar dekha hai! Apne dil se pucho , jawab mil jaayega, kabhi kabhi hume apne dimag se nahi dil se sochna padta hai" she smiled and left. Whereas Randhir was stunned "Am I in love with Sanyukta ?" popped a thought before his heart could answer

His brain interrupted "Randhir ! Remember love is something which isn't made for you! Even you know and even she knows your past, you're just helping her just to rectify your mistake get this thing clear" but was heart giving up? NO? His heart responded "Randhir this is the love you've been searching , begging for throughout your life! And when you're getting the love , you're rejecting it! Don't be an ass and just listen to me ! Your heart ! Just for once , I promise you won't regret it", his brain interrupted again "What if she rejects you? Once again you'll be lonely, don't take a chance Randhir! You're just helping her to rectify your mistake" but his heart responded "What's wrong with taking a chance? Randhir just trust me! Aur rahi mistake rectify karne ki baat! Well kar le mana thodi na kiya hai! Randhir trust me!". Randhir's heart and mind were having a battle against each other, finally Randhir decided to listen to his heart. He lay on the soft bed and took out his phone and logged into his facebook account and then started checking out Sanyukta's timeline. This girl was totally unpredictable, first she says that she hates him and then sends friend request, arrgghh how he wished he could read her mind. Randhir was seeing Sanyukta's pics , how beautiful can this girl look ?.

God knows how but a sudden urge to see her emerged! "Beta Randhir! Tu jaayega kaise ?" a thought popped , suddenly a gentle breeze blew and the flap of the window made noise "Ahaan! Khidki hai na!" another thought popped and he went out from the window took help from the pipe and climbed up , Thank god! Her room was just above his and thankfully the window was open, he entered her room. He looked at her , the moonlight which fell on her enhanced her beauty even more. He went closer to her and looked at her , he removed the flick which was touching her face , she suddenly had a smile on her face. How he wish he could see her like this forever.

He admired her beauty for another 5-10 minutes and then clicked a pic of her and gave her a peck on her forehead and then left her room. He came back and lied on his bed and soon drifted off to sleep.

Dream

Here he is, standing at a place which is covered with leaves , these leaves seem to be made up of gold, as he looks straight he sees these golden trees with a sun setting down, gosh! This sun set just adds beauty to whole place. Wait! He isn't standing anymore he isn't admiring the beauty, he running, searching for someone, it seems as if his legs aren't in his control, he is running here and there as if searching for someone without whom he can't live, wait a sec, what is he doing here that too in a tuxedo? For whom is he searching? And why? Suddenly pair of thin, milky hands hug him from back. He turns around and it's her ! Damn! she looked hot in that red gown with black train with a heart melting smile on her face.

His hands moved on their own and brought her closer and the next moment he was hugging her with a great passion while she too hugged him back with the smile still on , suddenly he blurted out some words "Sanyukta ! Kaha chali gayi thhi tum , huh? Batao, main kitna darr gaya tha! Main tumhare bina jee nahi sakta hoon" oh god!! Why the hell was he saying this ? Why was his mouth speaking on his own? Why wasn't he able to control his body ? She broke the hug and touched his nose with hers and said "Am sorry! Main Mazak kar rahi thhi, I am sorry"

He responded "Aise koi Mazak karta hai kya ? Tum meri jaan ho!" She said"I'm sor" but before she could complete her sentence his lips touched hers, oh god why wasn't he able to control his body? He suddenly deepened the kiss with his hand touching her neck and her hand touching his silky hair. She deepened the kiss even more and slowly they fell down with sanyukta on Randhir's hard chest , they were kissing with equal hunger, passion, love , it seemed as if the wild animal in both of them had woken up. She slowly unbuttoned the first 3 buttons of his shirt *REST UP TO YOUR IMAGINATION*

Dream ends

The sunlight fell on him as he woke up with a smile on his face, oh god! Did he just smile due to that dream! Man this girl has already started driving him crazy. "Randhir! Yaad rakh aaj tu apni bali chadhane wala hai, to rectify your mistake" a thought popped. Oh shit! How could he forget , today is her wedding and today is the day when he has sacrifice himself , for her happiness. He quickly finished his morning chores and soon started to help everyone with wedding stuffs. Everyone went by 6 pm to the great hall near the aggarwal mansion. Sanyukta went to the dressing room by 8:30 and started to get ready, the marriage was to take place in another half an hour, she had lost all hopes.

She started to wear the jewellery, when the window flap made a noise , she turned back. Only to see Randhir admiring her, God! When the heck will he stop looking so handsome? He looked so damn hot in the dark blue sherwani with black designs , she saw him and suddenly her eyes got numb, she stood up. "Are you checking me out ?" Sanyukta asked "Umm... Yeah" said an embarrassed Randhir, but he couldn't deny on the fact that he was checking her out, Man! She looked beautiful in that red lehenga with white work , her blouse and her petticoat where way apart and her perfectly shaped belly was something his eyes first fell on, her hairs where curled up, damn! Whatever she wears she looks hot

. "Randhir! Kaha kho gaye ho?" She asked with eyes still numb , "Sanyukta tum ro.." and before he could complete his sentence , she hugged him and tears burst out from her eyes. She hugged him tight and so did he , "Randhir mujhe yahaan se le chalo" she said "Ssshh Sanyukta calm down! Mujh par bharosa hai na ?" he responded as he broke the hug & wiped out the tears from her eyes and she nodded. "Randhir mujhe kuch kehena hai" Sanyukta said, she just wanted to confess her feelings at any condition, "Sssh Sanyukta isse ki pehle tum mujhse kuch kaho mujhe tumse kuch confess karna hai" He responded , but before he could say anything another voice came "Aur isse ki pehle tum log kuch kaho mujhe kuch kehena hai" Sandhir turned their head towards the door and saw ...

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So this ff is gonna end in just 2-3 updates! Depends on how long I write

Btw the dream credit goes to the book Facebook Phantom ... It gave me the idea of the dream thing

Plus for the whole gown wala thing... if it's wrong then I'm sorry! You see I'm not so good in these girly stuff as I hate to wear gowns

I love to wear jeans and shirt(hehehe I think it should be declared as the national teenage dress)


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Posted: 11 years ago
RES!
unresing!!!!!!!!!!
Really loved the update!!!
The dream...Sanyus moms convo to Randhir...
The way u described Sanyu!!!!!!!
It was great!! Update balance Soon!!!!!
Edited by Rekha85 - 11 years ago

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