SanDhir FF : Memphis ~ Abode of the Good [Till Part 19] - Page 43

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Lovely update!!!!!

Hahahahhha... Love how he corrected himself upon saying, my tigress & just tigress!!!!

Love how the FF is progressing!!!!!

Ooohhh, Birthday Party... Can we have a romantic dance??? Prettty please... On 'Mast Magan' from 2 states?? Or 'Yun hi re' from David😳😳
Just a request! 😃

anyhu! continue really really soon!!!!! aka: a daily update 😃

Pari

Originally posted by: shwetasaddahaq

Hey.. thnx for d pm... nyways it ws awesum... luv ur writing style..

Originally posted by: nafees5

very well done, amazing update..
really loved the way he made her work with so much determination again..gosh! he's smart n he definitely knows it .
those sandhir moments were really nice where they were taunting each other .their typical masale wali nok jhok *sighs*.
mgr ye ituuu sa update kyu tha, mje aisa laga ?
anyways , will be waiting for sanyu's mission Maa-Beta patchup 😆
update asap

best wishes,
naira 😊:)

Originally posted by: Asapom

awesome update

continue soon

Originally posted by: tanda

wats res guys?? i dont get it! (m not very familir wid fanfic stuff so do tell me)..nd d update as usual was ossum !!

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Awesome update..!!
POV's were brilliantly described..
Lovely..!!
Update next part ASAP..
Will be waiting eagerly..!!

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Kreeeti! Yeah, I know that isn't how your name is spelled, but I added all those e's for effect! :D

I was away for a a day and a half and you updated twice? Waah! :D

Coming to the updates, part 12 was a.m.a.z.i.n.g! The words spilling out of her mouth! The rectification she made! Then Randhir's and Parth's conversation! Finally, the return of Randhir's MCPness albeit for good, this time! Mast tha! :D

Then in this one, each line was making my heart flutter! Thank you for this, Kriti! :D

Originally posted by: shanaya_shanu

its lovely😊

short one but cute one😊

Originally posted by: -DamnedDrooler-

another fab one

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

<font color="#0099ff">awesome update..kriti..
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<font color="#0099ff">i loved it a lot!..😳</font>

<font color="#0099ff">randhir will celebrate her b'day.superb</font>

<font color="#0099ff">waiting for next p[art😛</font>

<font color="#0099ff">tfpm</font>