SanDhir FF : Memphis ~ Abode of the Good [Till Part 19] - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hey Kriti...😊</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Fab update as always... beautifully written...👏👏</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">just loved it...❤️</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">my fav lines...❤️❤️</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Do you have multiple personality disorder?"She shot at me. I laughed.❤️</font>

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<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">"I missed our fights, Farzi" I explained the cause of rudeness, hoping she won't doubt.❤️</font>

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<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">"You need a doctor Randhir" she said, shaking her head. I laughed, again.❤️</font>

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<strong><font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">really amazing... cont soonish..</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">love,❤️</font>

<font color="#660099" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Ashka...</font>



Thanks so much for this comment, Ashka.. Means a lot!!
Glad you're liking it xD

I'll update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

well done kriti babes... super cute part... aww randhirrr's yeh wala side kitna cute hoga naa???



Thanks Gunseerat di xD

Haan, it will be x)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Awesome-blossom

Awesome update 👍🏼

Randhir's idea was awesome 😊

My tigeress... the tigeress mann kyu nai leta my tigeress 😆

"Do you have multiple personality disorder?. 🤣

Sandhir's convo was damn gud 👍🏼

Paran scene b mst tha 😆 😊

So sanyukta's bday?
Randhir ka plan kya hoga? *xcitd to knw*

Celebrate her bday like no one ever can *awesome* 😳

Sanyukta's pov the whole para was awesome 👍🏼

Sanyukta was thinkin abt solving prblms betwen his mom and him 😲. *hopin fr bst*

Ps: i knw m damn late 😔
Sry kriti.

W8in fr stry to move on...
Update asap ⭐️



Thanks so much for this detailed review Chotu

Means a lot!!

I'll update soon xD
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rabia297

superbb ...uh r goin amazingg...cud uh plzz pm mee...fo nxt part...



Thanks! And sure :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TashaForever


res

----unres----
Omg. I commented third today. Am still in shock! Pehli baar jaldi comment kiya xP
Update. Ws fab as usual..waiting for mom nd randhir problem solving mission to b accomplished by sanyu.
Do you have multiple personality disorder?"She shot at me. I laughed.
"I missed our fights, Farzi" I explained the cause of rudeness, hoping she won't doubt.
"You need a doctor Randhir" she said, shaking her head. I laughed, again.
^^Those are my fav lines..it Ws hilarious and so cute! Hats of di!
Love,
Tanu




Ayiooo.. Sorry for replying so late..

Finally you replied early (well, in a way) to my update!! :P

Thank you so much Tanu.. I'll try updating soon !

Loads of Love!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know I m bit late ...ummm..ohk ..VERY late...all thanks to my stupid net connection...
I read it d day you sent me the pm but on dat day my net connection was too slow so I thot of commenting sum othr day. Nd I FORGOT...hawww...how can I forget commenting on my fav. ff????
No wonder my frnds call me bhulakad nowadays.
Anyways apart from my explanation of not commenting I have more to say..so don't sleep while reading it...lol
Update was FAB.
"Celebrating her bday" nd "fixing his problems with his mom"awww...dono kitna sochte hai ek doosre ke baare mein...I wonder yeh din kab aayega jab SH mein bhi yeh dekhne ko milega...
anyways.. yaar my vocab. Is really weak so I don't know gr8 words for describing it...so please khud hi samaj lena...lol
But itnu chhotu sa update??? Sabko chhota laga ya sirf mujhe hi??
When I finished reading it I was like "bas itna hi?? Abhi toh start hua tha aur khata, bhi ho gya ...hayeee"
Next time thoda lamba update mangta hai apun ko!!! Varna...anjam bura hoga (imagine me in place of those tapori villians...apne aap update lamba ho jayega...lol)
Update next part ASAP
Love u
Samaira
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

<font color="#CC0000">I know I m bit late ...ummm..ohk ..VERY late...all thanks to my stupid net connection...</font>

<font color="#CC0000">I read it d day you sent me the pm but on dat day my net connection was too slow so I thot of commenting sum othr day. Nd I FORGOT...hawww...how can I forget commenting on my fav. ff????</font>
<font color="#CC0000">No wonder my frnds call me bhulakad nowadays.</font>
<font color="#CC0000">Anyways apart from my explanation of not commenting I have more to say..so don't sleep while reading it...lol</font>
<font color="#CC0000">Update was FAB.</font>
<font color="#CC0000">"Celebrating her bday" nd "fixing his problems with his mom"awww...dono kitna sochte hai ek doosre ke baare mein...I wonder yeh din kab aayega jab SH mein bhi yeh dekhne ko milega...</font>
<font color="#CC0000">anyways.. yaar my vocab. Is really weak so I don't know gr8 words for describing it...so please khud hi samaj lena...lol</font>
<font color="#CC0000">But itnu chhotu sa update??? Sabko chhota laga ya sirf mujhe hi??</font>
<font color="#CC0000">When I finished reading it I was like "bas itna hi?? Abhi toh start hua tha aur khata, bhi ho gya ...hayeee"</font>
<font color="#CC0000">Next time thoda lamba update mangta hai apun ko!!! Varna...anjam bura hoga (imagine me in place of those tapori villians...apne aap update lamba ho jayega...lol)</font>
<font color="#CC0000">Update next part ASAP</font>
<font color="#CC0000">Love u</font>
<font color="#CC0000">Samaira</font>

Samaira!!! First of all idk if I shout at you for making me giggle in the middle of the market !! XD Mae badla le k rahungi >:( lol jk And your fav ff?? Aww thank you so very much!! You made my day, I swear !! And thats no problem.. I'm the biggest bhullakad alive.. Every year, on some date in november (see, I forgot again) I get beaten up, because Im supposed to wish my bestie bday, which I dont... All thanks to my marvelous memory.. So, well, you can imagine xD Late hui to kya, Im so happy you reviewed.. Means a lot!!! Loads of Love !! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn

Samaira!!! First of all idk if I shout at you for making me giggle in the middle of the market !! XD Mae badla le k rahungi >:( lol jk And your fav ff?? Aww thank you so very much!! You made my day, I swear !! And thats no problem.. I'm the biggest bhullakad alive.. Every year, on some date in november (see, I forgot again) I get beaten up, because Im supposed to wish my bestie bday, which I dont... All thanks to my marvelous memory.. So, well, you can imagine xD Late hui to kya, Im so happy you reviewed.. Means a lot!!! Loads of Love !! :*


Areyyy behna hasna sehat ke liye accha hota hai...itni si baat ke liye BADLAA????...hmmm but I UNDERSTAND if u r in giggling in d middle of market den dat too akele akele den definitely people will think koi bewdi hai...so my apologies for dat. HAHAHA!!!!!! oh u too r Bhulakadd...wot a relief!!! chalo koi toh hai mere jaisa...lol...u happy?? den mee too happy...chalo meri cmmnt type krne ki mehnat safal rahi...but sirf happy happy hi mat rehna...jaldi jaldi update bhi krna..(Pta chale tu khushi mein update krna hi bhool gyi as I just got to noe dat u too a "bhulakadd") hahaha!!!!! muahhh.. love u too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hahahaha this comment 🤣 ^
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Posted: 11 years ago
Author's Note: I request you all not to kill me for not updating! I have Jee coming, lots of application forms to be filled, "padhai" to be done and a hell lot more bad things at hand right now. So I may not update for a while...

Don't throw your chappals and rotten tomatoes at me, I'm sure you must have gone through all this too (or will, someday)

Plus, I got shortlisted for NIFT..Yayyy!!

No, I'm still not selected, I have a situation test to pass, damn!

Well Thats All For Now...

Thanks for your Love.. Please dont turn your backs on my story, I wont take too long, promise.. A week at max


Loads of Love
Kriti ❤️

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