SanDhir FF : Memphis ~ Abode of the Good [Till Part 19] - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all..very sorry for replying so late on ur story..
i loved the title its very different...😃

and would u mind if i will give reviews late as i have to read it from beginning and it might take time😆..i readout ur first 2 updates n no doubt!!!u r fab writer👏..i loved ur both updates a lot...😳
randhi n sanyu both possessive fr eachother bt tashan dikhana nhi chodte..😆
tfpm dear..happy holi n may i know ur name?..😊
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

<font size="3" color="#0000cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">first of all..very sorry for replying so late on ur story..</font>

<font size="3" color="#0000cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">i loved the title its very different...😃</font>

<font size="3" color="#0000cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">and would u mind if i will give reviews late as i have to read it from beginning and it might take time😆..i readout ur first 2 updates n no doubt!!!u r fab writer👏..i loved ur both updates a lot...😳</font>
<font size="3" color="#0000cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">randhi n sanyu both possessive fr eachother bt tashan dikhana nhi chodte..😆</font>
<font size="3" color="#0000cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">tfpm dear..happy holi n may i know ur name?..😊</font>



I know I'm being too traditional.. But aap bade ho.. And elders dont apologize.. Rather I'm more than glad to know that YOU want to read MY story 😃 and my name is Kriti and take as much time as you want.. Will be waiting for your reviews ❤️

Oh and Happy holi to you, too 😊
Edited by Ms.P.K.Tunn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3😆

wow!! loved it ..sanyu POV...n that line
"Was I really in love with Randhir Singh Shekhawat?"...😳aww atleast she thought once..and randhir"kis janam ka badla hjai ye"...full of attitude yr...awesome!😎😆

part 4

randhir to parth ko punching bag ki tarah na punch kare ab.😆.those lines are so nice!...😳
sandhir's fight..and she faints..😲hope she will be fine..

one thing is good vardhan sir witnessing all this..😊
very nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

<font color="#993300">part 3😆
</font>


<font color="#993300">wow!! loved it ..sanyu POV...n that line</font>
<font color="#993300">"Was I really in love with Randhir Singh Shekhawat?"...😳aww atleast she thought once..and randhir"kis janam ka badla hjai ye"...full of attitude yr...awesome!😎😆</font>

<font color="#993300">part 4</font>

<font color="#993300">randhir to parth ko punching bag ki tarah na punch kare ab.😆.those lines are so nice!...😳</font>
<font color="#993300">sandhir's fight..and she faints..😲hope she will be fine..</font>

<font color="#993300">one thing is good vardhan sir witnessing all this..😊</font>
<font color="#993300">very nice update</font>



Thank you so much, suchita di!! I'm glad you liked them ❤️ 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 5

oh sanyu is in"depression"...randhir was so puzzled why doc was interogating him about sanyu...and last line.
.aila!!!!...randhir wants help from parth to make friendship with sanyu!!!!😲😆

part 6
meri bhi halat parth jaise hi hai😲..two biggest shocks ever...from randhir🤣
bt parth is so nice guy he is ready to help him.😃..yaya!! vardhu sir back to mentor team..

i enjoyed both updates a lot!!
mindblowing work!😛

tfpm..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

<font color="#cc0033">part 5
</font>


<font color="#cc0033">oh sanyu is in"depression"...randhir was so puzzled why doc was interogating him about sanyu...and last line.</font>
<font color="#cc0033">.aila!!!!...randhir wants help from parth to make friendship with sanyu!!!!😲😆</font>

<font color="#cc0033">part 6</font>
<font color="#cc0033">meri bhi halat parth jaise hi hai😲..two biggest shocks ever...from randhir🤣</font>
<font color="#cc0033">bt parth is so nice guy he is ready to help him.😃..yaya!! vardhu sir back to mentor team..</font>

<font color="#cc0033">i enjoyed both updates a lot!!</font>
<font color="#cc0033">mindblowing work!😛</font>

<font color="#cc0033">tfpm..</font>




Yayy!! You are enjoying my updates? Believe me, I'm enjoying your comments more!! 😃

Tysm ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing. The way u have described the rapport between randhir and Parth is so sweet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 7

oops!! randhir ko love 'sanjog se ab tak nhi hua"..🤣
and randhir as her well wisher...😳
khel khel main bhut kuch hote hote reh gaya...😆

part 8

woww!! such a long nd lovely update yr...😳
randhir's two levels completed..😉
parth n randhir too friends...😃
so so so good update yr..😛
sandhir r friends..!...
loved their convo in room
tfpm dear..😃

kriti...i am loving this story a lot...😛
keep writing it..luv u..🤗.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angel.thomas

Amazing. The way u have described the rapport between randhir and Parth is so sweet.



Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it ❤️ 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

<font color="#cc0099">part 7
</font>


<font color="#cc0099">oops!! randhir ko love 'sanjog se ab tak nhi hua"..🤣</font>
<font color="#cc0099">and randhir as her well wisher...😳</font>
<font color="#cc0099">khel khel main bhut kuch hote hote reh gaya...😆</font>

<font color="#cc0099">part 8</font>

<font color="#cc0099">woww!! such a long nd lovely update yr...😳</font>
<font color="#cc0099">randhir's two levels completed..😉</font>
<font color="#cc0099">parth n randhir too friends...😃</font>
<font color="#cc0099">so so so good update yr..😛</font>
<font color="#cc0099">sandhir r friends..!...</font>
<font color="#cc0099">loved their convo in room</font>
<font color="#cc0099">tfpm dear..😃</font>

<font color="#cc0099">kriti...i am loving this story a lot...😛</font>
<font color="#cc0099">keep writing it..luv u..🤗.</font>



Love you too, Suchita di! ❤️

I'm glad you love it, I hope I wont disappoint you with my updates in future.. 😊

Looking forward to your comments on them 😳

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