ArShi FF #2 ~ || The Fault In Our Stars ||CHAPTER 7 UP! 9/3

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Awesome update ...Loved d Arshi moments sooo muchhh...plzzz continue soon...

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

fabulous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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popstar

@popstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Fab update!
Thanks 4 the pm

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

First of all thank you so so so much for including me in your thank you note, I really appreciate it and it's a lovely gesture.

Thank you so much for the quick update, I was honestly expecting to wait till the 10th of March.

The update was absolutely amazing and simply superb,

Love the fact Khushi has seen the changed behaviour in Arnav and knows he is feeling guilty,

Wow the bedroom part was very emotional yet passionate,

I'm glad Arnav finally apologised and told Khushi the truth behind why he married her but khushi is right not to completely forgive or answer his question about not leaving him as she can't trust him anymore.

Wow the kiss indeed was very unexpected as I thought Khushi won't let Arnav go ahead with it but I'm happy she gave her permission and the kiss was so sweet, gentle, tender and simply beautiful and written perfectly.

So happy they are going away to New York I think it's the perfect idea for them to spend time alone and hopefully with time Arnav can win back khushi's trust and hopefully prove to her that he will not break her heart.

Loved the update, brilliant writing.

Loving your author note about partying and throwing your books away, lol.

Awww I always love the pictures you provide at the end they be so funny.

Thanks for the PM and don't forget to invite me to your party, lol xx

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Loved it

I'm glad they're off to NY it'll give them some change and aww the inner wear scene was cute

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Awesome update Loved it Thanks for the pm

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Brilliant update...thanks for the PM

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

I see an unsure hesitation on her part because she still loves him irrevocably but cannot bring herself to trust him again. She's well aware that she desires him and in a way she never thought she could but cannot give into the passion for she fears to be hurt again. The conflict between her emotions has been beautifully written.

Arnav on the other hand is in a better control of his emotions except for that one weak moment where he kisses her. I am glad to see him physically and emotionally restraining his feelings because otherwise they may scare Khushi and she might not be able to understand his deep rooted love for her. Now that she already knows how guilty he feels, it is only a matter of time she understands his love for her and the US trip will be a major breakthrough.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

superb update..liked it when arnav was repenting his mistakes n telling her the fact for which he was misunderstood..liked kushi's understanding on his mistake n allowed him to kiss her..but the pain wud never heal not so easily after it get satisfied with the love n care which only arnav have to give..with that her turmoil wud be over..arnav took this testimony n was going to woo her in whatever way to remove her hurt n pain..waiting for the next..omg u r just 9th standard..wow its great to see to writing such matured concept..and all the best for ur exams..