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SaRun.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Congratz paakhee on thread 2!!! XD

Cant wait for the next update...fri is still too far!!!

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tanu45

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

congrats for new thread.

thanks for character summery... i dont remember whether u have given this before.

This story is getting complicated...update soon... (I am starting to forget the plot :P )

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Res :D

Edited:
what do you do to me Paks? I can barely read it from a Neutral point of you. Everytime you go in details of Arnav's looks, my minds goes AWOL. Sacchi, all i can see him is from a phangirl's mind and dude, the GQ material he is, makes him all the more droolworthy. ;)

he expected a slap or a slam? But they are beyond that point, so well in any case his face is safe:D

an open minded discussion, isn't that what i wanted. Truth is, none of them has a clean chit,so both of them are bound to have secrets.

What all Khushi shared, for beginning is sufficient, rest can come along the way. Arnav has to be patient, from what all he could have guessed, Khushi has been through quite a trauma earlier and even now, she is holding up, well naturely the bigger the secret, the harder it is to unearth it. :)

although i loved how maturely Arnav expected it and even with all the black dots looming around them, he is confident to give all this a chance.

BUT.. MInd it! Although i Loved and entirely enjoyed this little flirty and lot understanding Arnav, why can't i help but smell something fishy here? Arnav is smart, smarter than Khushi realises, infact she knows nothing about hows she liked to him, but he Does! I don't take Arnav to be the one who would agree to play Dart in dark.. He is the who plans, who is sure. I know things change.. But still, with Paks, as writer, i won't let go of any possibility. ;)

Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago

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MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Big mistake Khushi, revealing your identity to practically a stranger.

I am confused. If Shyam knows the girl he wants to avenge is called Khushi Muriel, why doesn't Arnav know that?

Edited by MsDroolKanthan - 11 years ago

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henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow wow and wow

man ... he is fast

but is this a ruse to get closer to khushi to get to know her

dunno

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esamoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful update.

Ohh Arnav wants a proper relationship with Khushi I hope she agree's but what will happen when he finds out who she really is oh boy will he understand ha or blame her???

Dinner at 8 I can barely wait!

Can't wait for Khushi to initiate a kiss!

Arnavs descriptions left me drooling.

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

wow!!! wonderful chapter..
am so glad arnav didnt jump into conclusions and decided to give her and give them a chance..
khushi must be definitely thrilled with the way he ws with her...but surely she has no clue to where she is headed...
so happy to see them move ahead...but wondering what will happen when he knows the truth!