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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

Wow awsm update

Loved it
Rey also wanted a kiss aww
Shyam is back oh no
Feel sorry for taani all dat pain she must of suffered
Finally she agreed to go
Update soon

Thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanju...

nice update..

all set for a new bgining..
taarey sweet moments on d way ..
update soon..

Thank you so much


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: babydolll


Maine chk kiya mera to itnusa comment hai 😎

next time i want lambu comment


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dasv

After so long u finally updated.
Awesome update.
Rey too wished for a kiss from taani was aweee.

Poor taani suffered so much even from her own family.Now rey will b her protector.

Finally rey made taani agree to move to mansion lets see wat happens now.

I can sense More fun romance and nok jhok

waiting for next part

update soon

Thank you so much

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -SunShine

next time i want lambu comment


first three comments me mera hua to pakka karungi
toot gaya mera goggle
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: babydolll

first three comments me mera hua to pakka karungi

toot gaya mera goggle

okay

wese am updating

right now need to go isliye thank you ceremony baad mein karungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER SIX

Anjali Opened the door, She was pleasantly surprised seeing her brother with his family, but what caught her attention most was two cutie pies, aaryan was in taani's arms and aarushi in Rey's arms

She gave them way to enter inside, Taani put her right foot first, all the memories were running like a movie in her mind, Her marriage then her husbands cruel acts, then in last how he throw her out of the house, her vision get blur because of tears. She never wanted to come back here but for her kids she has to, her kids need their father also.

"Rey am very happy today, thank you so much taani for coming back" Anjali said smiling through her tears, hearing anjali's voice all other family members too come there in hall.

"Taani bitiya" dadi exclaim pleasantly surprise, Taani put aaryan down and goes to dadi to take her blessings.

"Hum aapki bua hai" Anjali introduce herself to aaryan, aarushi was fast asleep in reys arms

"hii" aaryan said in cute tone, aaryan is just like rey, cool friendly, easily jelled up with people and Aarushi is just like her mother, shy and take little time to jell up with new people.

Khushi come forward and gave a tight to taani, aryan and anjali become very friendly in few minutes, both were talking to each other as if they knows each other from ages.

Whole family gathered around aryan, introducing themselves and what should he call them, poor soul was having hard time in remembering their name and relation with him.

All the while taani was standing quietly anjali notice this.

"Rey aap taani aur bacho ko lekar room mein jaiye, raat bahut ho gayi hai" anjali said, she pointed toward taani who was lost in her thoughts, rey assured her he will look after her.

He took them in his room, taani was lifelessly walking, and horrible memories of that room were still fresh in her heart.

Rey make aarushi sleep on his bed comfortably.

"Papa, Your house is so big and beautiful" Aryan said, Rey smiled at him and picked him up in his arms

"Not mine, It's your house too" Rey said, rey kissed his forehead, he was feeling luckiest man on earth today.

Then he eyes fall on taani who was standing quietly, he knows what she was going through right now, He put Aryan down and walk toward her.

Both were standing in front of each other, looking into each other's eyes, he wanted to talk to her, comfort her but nothing come out from his mouth that time, their intense eyes lock broken by aryan's voice.

"Mumma am sleepy" Aryan said in sleepy tone, taani pick him up her arms and made him sleep, Rey was looking at her, lost in her pure angelic beauty.

"Mumma ab hum yahi rahenge?" Ask little Aryan, he open his one eye and look at her.

"Ha baba, now sleep" Taani said, she made him sleep properly on bed beside aarushi.

"Taani tum baccho ke saath bed par so jaao mein guest room mein hu" Rey said, he don't don't her to feel uncomfortable in his presense, Taani don't know what to say

"No papa, you also sleep with us" Aryan again open his eyes, rey smiled at him then look at taani to see her reaction. She just smile weakily at him showing that she don't have any problem with him sleeping here.

Aryan held his hand and made him laid beside him.

"mumma aap us side so jaaiye" Aryan said pointing toward place beside aarushi, taani laid beside aarushi, she was feeling happy seeing aryan's smile and his happiness being with his dad.

Kids were in middle and Taani & Rey sleeping on each side of bed, Taani put her hand around kids at the same time rey too put his arms around them, their hands touch both feel something different. They look into each other's eyes. They themselves don't know when they drifted into sleep, In sleep he hold her hand in his.

In Morning

Taani was helping khushi in kitchen. Rey was playing with kids in his room. Aarav, aaryan aarushi jelled up with each other very well.

"I never saw him this happy in these 4 years" khushi said

"Hmm" Taani replied

"Par kya tum khush ho?" Khushi askher

"Meri khushi mere baccho mein, if they are happy then am happy, They are the reason that am still alive or else I would've killed myself long ago when there was no one for me, with me" Taani said in low tone but unaware to them Someone listened their convo, rey had come their to take water but stopped on kitchen door when he hear their conversation.

"I know I Commit a sin in past but I promise I'll keep you and kids happy, I'll prove myself a good husband and father" rey thought, his heart was bleeding remembering his cruel behavior and those hurtful nights he gave her 4 year back. But now he'll mend her broken heart.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Be ready guys much awaited repentance track is coming, from now you'll get TaaRey scenes.

And those who don't Comment or like on my stories and are in my buddy list, I will not send PM to those anymore because i don't want to waste my time in sending PMs to those who don't even Open the msg.
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Edited by -SunShine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pls pls pls pls update soon soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
res for commet chap 6
UNRES
amazing chappy yaar...
loved it to the core...
feeling bad for taani... but now rey ll make her happy...
thnk god rey listened to taaniz talk...
bed scene with family was too cute...
i like aryan when he was havn hard time remembering the name and relations...
i still have a problm wd tht...
thoda aarushi ko bhi footage dede yaar...
update soon
see i commented longer on appreciate it
m gng to buy goggles it ll b updated in a while
Edited by babydolll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
again res for new goggles
UNRES

new goggles yeaahhh
i bought two...
if anyone feels ur sunshine then 😆😆

Edited by babydolll - 11 years ago

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