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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER THREE

Their journey was silent one...no one talk to each other...one side rey was feeling excited and nervous to meet his kids...his mind was filled with question like..how will they react ??...what they will call him papa..dad..daddy many questions were roaming in his head

On the other side taanis feeling were unknown to herself..one part of her heart was feeling happy now her children also get fatherly warmth which they missed the most but one part of her heart was still scared of what future hold for her

They reached taanis house...taani step down from car rey did te same

Rey notice that its a very small house...taani open the door of her house with spare keys...both entered

Taani look at rey from corner of her eyes...rey was making face after looking at house...she knows that he didnt like this place

"u live here??" he questioned her making wierd faces...he was looking all around it was very small house with one bedroom..hall...kitchen...offcourse he disnt like this place how can he..his bedroom is bigger than this house

"ha" saying this he move inside the bedroom where her babies are playing with baby sitter...he too follow her

Kids look at their mumma who entered in room with someone unknown to them...they run toward her and hug her legs...taani bend down and place kiss on their forehead

"you can go now"taani says to baby sitter...she left from there

Just then both the kids notice the presence of rey..they turned toward taani

"yeh kon hai mumma" both look confuse...rey look at them with tearful eyes he bend down on his knees to their hights

"m ur father "he hug both of them...tears fall from his eyes...rey broke the hug and kiss their foreheads

Kids look at taani in question in their innocent eyes...taani nodded in yes...both the babies look at each other for a second then both jumped in reys arms hugging him tightly.. rey never felt this happy

"papa...papa"both kids were jumping in happiness...tears were falling from taareys eyes seeing their kids happiness after meeting there father

"hum aapko papa bulaye" ask little aryan
"jo aap chaho"rey smile through his tears...taani was shock to see this side of rey

"bhaiyu ab hume rahul tang nahi karega na" arushi questioned aaryan in her childish tone

"princess yeh rahul kaun hai aur woh aapko tung kyun karta hai" rey was confuse with his daughters statement

"papa woh jab park amin khelne jaate hai toh woh hume chidata tha ki humare papa nahi hai" she explained him...reys heart feel the pain

"ab aap hume chodkar toh nahi jaaoge na??" aaryan ask him
"nahi champ kabhi bhi nahi jaunga" rey assured them embracing them once again...all the while taani was standing there adoring them with tears of happiness in her eyes

"papa aaiye na hum khelte hai" kids are back to happy mode
Rey and starts playing with each other...taani left for kitchen to prepare food and coffee for rey

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Taani was working in kitchen when rey came there.
"aapko kuch chahiye" taani look at him

"pack ur bags we all are going singhania mansion" he stated

"m not coming anywhere" taani replied in low tone

"do as i say or else" he walk closer to her

"aapko jo karna hai woh kijiye par main kahin nahi jaa rahi hu" she said surprising herself and rey also this is the first she answered him back

"Listen taani dont make me do something which i regret later" he pinned her to the nearest wall...his face was inches away from her

"di wants you back in house...so pack ur and kids things...and you are coming with me" he whispered in dengerous voice

"still he dont want me...he just want me back because dii told him...m i that bad that to deserve anyones love and care" she thought

"dekho taani agar main chahoo toh main apne bachho ko yha se le ja sakta hu but main esa nahi karna chahta...main apne bacho ko unki maa se alag nahi karna chahta kyunki main jannta hu ki bina maa ke rahena kesa lagta hai aur mein nahi chahta mere bache apni maa ke bina rahe so come with me" he want her to come with him...he himself want that but didnt find courage to tell her by himself thats why he is using his diis name

"par main nahi aana chahti...pls mujhe force mat kijiye" she cried...she joined her hands infront of him beg him not to force her for coming in that house where she got nothing but pain

Rey look at her condition decided not to force her...he left from there to bedroom to see his kids last time before going home.

IN ROOM

"papa aap jaa rahe ho" aarushi was sad with him going
"ha princess but main kal aapse milbe jarur aaunga..." rey caressed her hair lovingly

"promise " both kids said
" pakka wala promise" rey smiled at them...once again hug then n kiss their foreheads

Rey left from there feeling extremly happy after meeting them but still he wants them to come to their real house

" i know why you dont want to come taani but main tumhe uss ghar main vapas lakar hi rahunga" rey thought to himself

SINGHANIA MANSION

Arhis Room

"You know what arnavji hume kuch karna chahiye rey aur taani ko karib laane ke liye" khushi said
"i knkw but usse pahle we have to make rey realise his mistakes " arnav tell her "but uska ego sabse badi problem hai...he will never accept his mistake" he continue
Arnav knows that first rey have to realise what he had done to that poor soul with no fault of her but he also knows that his brothers ego will never let him go to taani and ask for her forgiveness directly

"ab hume hi kuch karna hoga" khushi says
"right..so first step realisation " they vows to make rey realise his mistake.
"but kaise" khushi asked him
"i have a plan" arnav smirk thinking about his plan
he tell her about his plan to make rey realise

"wah arnavji kya plan hai..i love yo arnavji" khushi kissed his cheek in excitement
"thank u khushi and i love more" arnav pulled her close to him by her waist and kissed her passationately



pls ignore mistakes...for PMs buddy me 😊
Edited by -SunShine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sunshine it was awesome really loved it so so much specially loved the kitchen sequence and their last conversation

"par main nahi aana chahti...pls mujhe force mat kijiye" she cried...she joined her hands infront of him beg him not to force her for coming in that house where she got nothing but pain

Rey look at her condition decided not to force her...he left from there to bedroom to see his kids last time before going home.

also loved rey's pov


" i know why you dont want to come taani but main tumhe uss ghar main vapas lakar hi rahunga" rey thought to himself


loved the role of cupid played by arnav and khusi
loved the way u potrayed that rey took name of his diii for bringing taani back instead directly sayind that he wants her back and taani hurt coz rey came to take them coz his diii
both unaware of each other's feelings

Edited by taani.priya1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm update
Loved it
Hope rey realises his mistake quickly
The kids r so cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...loved rey and kids scene...

rey want taani back.in his home but himmat nahi bolne ki...

i hope he realise soon and say sorry to taani.
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Posted: 11 years ago
super update
rey saw his kids
taani living in a small house
eager to know arnav's plan
contiune soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
arshi playing cupids!!!...
bold taani...
good bonding !!
rey shud realise his mistakes .. to hell with his ego!
good work keep goin 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is sweetest update
Rey meet his children... Awww cute
Arushi and aryan I love them this children
Rey want them his home... Taani ni gae good... Love it taani reply back
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
arshi wl nw make rey realise his mistake
wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum update..
taani is right on her place..
she should forgive rey easily..
but give him chance to manofy..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai hai kiya baat hain. So ARHI's plan on 'Mission Rey Realisation' - Wow dats so gr8. It's going to be more interesting. Waiting fort it. Plz continue soon.

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