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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...




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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved all the updates dear and sorry for the late comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago

well i am really sorry that i didn't read the chapters..
i was busy with my exams. 😳
i read all the 5 chapters at once and i am really excited by the way the story is proceeding.
well done. your a nice writer.
waiting for the coming updates.

do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 6

"I'm a vampire...So why shouldn't I" I snapped.
"Kriya"
I froze, suddenly a torrent of emotion rushed through me. Horror, angry, guilt & regret. What the hell I was doing? What had come over me? I looked at T****. A few more sec & I would have killed her. I turned back & saw Rey standing a few feet away from me in shock. I turned back to T**** looked in her eyes & erases her memory & tells her to go home. After T**** left I turned towards Rey. We stared each other in silence.
"I'll explain you everything...Let's go to fire exit" said Kriya.
Rey noded. They went to fire exit & sat on the stairs.
"How did you become a vampire...What made you want to" said Rey.
"Become undead? Drink blood of the living?"
"What happened? Plzzz tell me" said Rey
"After I left with my mother on our to Dehradud our car got hit by a truck...Mom died on the spot...I was dying when a vampire found me & gave me a choice to become one of them...Somewhere I knew what I'll become but I also knew that I didn't wanted to die...So I choose this." said Kriya
"Does anyone know about this?" asked Rey
"Only Swayam know" replied Kriya.
"Taani"
"She won't remember anything...I've erase it from her memory" said Kriya.
"You can do that" said Rey "What else can you do?"
"Yes...I can see the future" said Kriya.
Both of them sat there in silence.
"Whatever happened till now just forget it & move on...I know you love T**** & its completely fine" said Kriya.
"I don't love her...I love you" said Rey.
Kriya looked at him in shock. She don't know how to react.
"No this is wrong...We can't be together" said Kriya.
"It doesn't matter to me" said Rey.
"It doesn't matter to you if I'm a monster...I'm not human" asked Kriya.
"No"
"I'm sorry Rey but I can't do this" said Kriya & left.
At night...
Swayam came to meet Kriya. She told him everything that happened.
"I'm sorry Swayam...I didn't know what happened to me...I should've known that something like this would've happen...I should've been more careful...I shouldn't have lose my control like this...Maybe I shouldn't have come back" said Kriya.
"Its not your fault...Anyone would've reacted the same way" said Swayam.
"But"
"Forget whatever happened" said Swayam "Tell me what have you thought about Rey."
"There's nothing to think about it...We can't be together...He's mortal & I'm immortal" said Kriya.
"But Kriya"
"Leave it...I'll make some coffee for you" said Kriya & left.
Swayam's POV...
Kriya came back & I didn't heard when cup slipped from her hand. I looked at her. My illogical thought was that she was playing a prank on me. Because there was no way Kriya could drop the cup by accident. How can a vampire drop something by accident? And then Kriya looked at me, twisting in a move so fast that it didn't exist. Her eyes were half way here & half way looked on the future, wide, staring filling her thin face till they seemed to overflow it. Looking into her eyes was like looking out of a grave from inside. I was buried in the terror & despair & agony of her gaze.
"What...what happened?" I growled, leaping in her side. I grabbed her shoulder & shock her.
"What is it?"
"Sharon & Rey got hit by a truck" said Kriya.
POV ends...
Kriya took out her phone & dialed Sharon's number.
"Where are you? asked Kriya
Kriya saw Swayam's head snapped up. She signed in relief.
"I'm in college" said Sharon.
"Is Rey with you?" asked Kriya
"Yes"
Before Kriya could say anything phone got disconnected. She dialed again but it was switched off. She tried Rey number but it was out of reach.
"Lets go"
KriYam came outside. Kriya mounded on the bike & waited untill Swayam slid behind her. Both sped off towards college. When they reached ShaRey was coming outside. They called ShaRey but they didn't heard. Suddenly they saw that a truck is coming towards ShaRey, they called them by listening ShaRey saw that the truck is coming towards them & they just froze, Kriya ran towards them & pushed them at the right of the road & she herself got hit by the truck & the blood started coming out from her forehead. She fell beside a tree & its branch broke & went inside her stomach. ShaReYam saw this and shouted
Kriya!!!!!!!
Kriya's POV...
I felt someone knelt beside me & pulled me into their lap.
"Oh God...Kriya, can you hear me? Wake up" said Rey.
He shifted me in his arm & I heard hiss of pain, as hot scent of blood filled in the air. Warm liquid tricked past my lips.
POV ends...
Sharon looked at Rey in horror as he cut & then pressed his arm in Kriya's mouth.
"What the hell are you going Rey?...Have you lost it...We need to take her to the hospital" said Sharon.
Swayam took Sharon away from KriYaansh & told her everything. After a while Sharon clam down. SwaRon came back & saw Kriya awake. They left from there. Kriya hugged Rey tightly.
"I love you Rey"
"I love you too"
The End

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Posted: 11 years ago
what it ended..??

so soon..ahh i will miss it..

anyways awsum update loved it..

kriya rubbed away taani's memory nice nd rey got to knw what she is..

finally rey confeesed nd kriya..ahh..

kriyam convo was awsum loved it..

sharey acciedent..kriya saw it..

haye loved he full update loved it..

i will miss this ss for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear.. Ended so soon?? Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb ending
Thank for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...!
can't believed that you ended it so soon...! why..?
anyways amazing storyline and concept...!
beautifully written..!
thanks for sending me the PM ...!
can't wait to read more of your work ...!

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