Arshi: Burdened #2 | Chapter 15 Page 27 | July 29th - Page 8

they are getting comfortable with each other

"Here, let me try,"

Ohh..!! i can very well imagine Arnv trying to take the ring off.. so deligently busy ☺️

"Arna Mama and Kashu Mama"
"Your necklace is so gojush,"

i love this child.. so cute..!! loved the way u wrote about rhea..


Arnav getting the railings..!!

"This is my... I mean it will be our room,"
he immediately corrected it, we hardly find guyz so sensible..

i loved the end.
and plz update the next soon.

thanq for d mail.. 🤗
(and i may edit this and add on it later 😛 😃)

you are going so well, plz carry on with it as you have thought, and dont worry about the story being slow, its beautiful..!!

Originally posted by: dewdropsoflove

M srry for not being able to comment earlier, I cannot comment thru phn (thru whch i read)

it was an awesome update. Thanq for d update nd d mail.
I had hoped for a bit more in that confined area of dressing room from our Arnav. But I feel proud at the gentle man hes in your story. I feel as though I am falling for him all over again coz of this ff.

khushi as per potrayed epitomizes elegance. Simplicity nd beauty.
I love the way u make her address him arnav.. so direct yet coated with a sense of belonging nd ownness.

it definite has to b a perfect fit khushi.. ;)
will love to know hw u take the story forward.




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Originally posted by: siva2901

hi i am new reader of your ff

Read in one go

title attracted me so only start reading

Its indeed a cute beautiful story

Love to read more😊

Originally posted by: angeldream14

loved it

all d chpt r awesome

whn u love someone u love them for who they r with all their short comings

true love is beyond superficial things

he is so sweet

he is head over heels for her

he cares n mostly respects her

khushi is just scared to get hurt

rejection does that to u

she likes him

n love will follow soom

hw can she nt love this sweet man

can u pm me

Originally posted by: singhni_

hehe no problem :) and thanks for reading. I'm trying to keep the story very realistic, so that is adding to the slowness of it

Ohh..!!
its entirely my pleasure reading your story, so dont be so formal with me. 😛

u knw if u can increase the frequency of the updates, sooner, i meant it wont seem to b going slow.

hahaha lol, m sounding like crazy, 🤪 🤣 😳

but that's not just a ruse , to get u updating the next part sooner, but also a small truth. 😛 😆

U may try it.

Nice update
Lovd d way Arnav trying 2 make her comfortabl around him
Beautifully writtn
Sory 4 d late commnt
Was busy with othr works

Very cute teaser.. Arnav is certainly smitten with Khushi 😊

lovely teaser