ASYA(KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Chapter 41 to Chapter 46 - Page 84

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Posted: 11 years ago
Your updates r treat to read
realy they r awesme
keep writing
update asap
thanks for pm
love
niyati
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Posted: 11 years ago
so sorry or commenting late
lovely
i m so happy that u made the girl zoya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno


Dear I forgot your name...Fawzia or something I guess. Oh I am really sorry I should have mention that..what is subcontinental. Wow that's great. Your mom is from Pakistan. One of my Aunt from Pakistan. She now lives in Canada.
I also watch a lot of Tv but hindi serial NO!! and Qubool Hai was my first. (and last too).
Wow !! It seems she is really loved it...a bit too much😆


I live in Canada, Toronto to be more precise.
My real name is not fawzia or anything close to it. You don't need to know my name. SARBRATHAN is also my youtube name. S-A-R were the initials of a boy a liked, and brathan (brooke and nathan) is my favourite AU ship. Sarbrathan just stuck with me and even though, now I don't even know where the guy is.
It is lame to say but I LOVE spending time with my mom. We watch things that are my taste and we also watch stuff her taste... my mom is the only reason I sit through Haseena. My mom was more upset about Karan leaving than me, which I found highly amusing. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update sadia
loved how their both surprised each other
loved how asad planned all the things for zoya to see the orphanage.
Zoya's insecurities r been now demolished fully by new info that asad loved the girl was her only.
Sadia it was a shocker to know abt this info.
Loved the orphanage scen coz it was like asad was playing kike a kid with them n zoy was staring him at awe.
Asad surprised zoya again by gifting her n she nodded like a child haha. Love that part
their relationship has reached to a new level now. Zoya can now feel that her insecurities r been burned by asad.
I love reading this FF.
Update soon n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
totally totally loved this update
this is the update I was waiting like forever for
they finally turn one asad couldnt believed it was real
he thought it was a dream bcuz all week he was dreaming that
but then he found out how rough he really was with her
she missed him all day and him her loved the gifts
only he must hear the anklets wow
zoya loved her surprised and she realizes he pass up his dream to make hers reality
but he told her not his or hers anymore it is us or we
he brought her to the orphanage and then he get to know her surprise
still cant realizes that she is the girl and then he automatically talks about the girl and she gets upset
loved her happiness after she found her earring she lost and that she is the mystery girl asad mystery girl and then to find her diary too and realizes that asad was her savior
wow their lives were intertwined even before marriage
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Sadia...🤗
finally i read this long beautiful update...!!!!!!
loved this full of Asyalious update...secrets r revealed...
Asad's surprise for Zoya...was the best moment...her dream come true...not hers but its their dream now...!!!!
like the scene at orphanage...Asad was shocked to know that zoya is also connected to that orphanage...that was the beautiful moments they spend there...& loved the song...so perfect...their life's song...
the last part of this update...surprise for both...both r shocked by this revelation...i just loved the way u plot this whole scene...loved it...!!!!
Superb as always...👏
hope u r much better now...take care...
Thankew so much for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: akaswan

So here i'm and sorry for the late comment


LOL i love Asad reaction he hoped that it was not a dream i don't know if i must laugh orfeel bad for him 😆

Now he will think about that all day long 😆

I really like how Amreen and Dilshad tease Zoya, if i was in Zoya's place i would be thismuch embarassed 😳

Awww i want an husband like Asad 😭

I just love Asya in the orphenage ❤️

The last part define very well the word DESTINY this is my favorite world 😳

So awesome update bubby i just loved it but really this is one of my favorite part 😃

They finally knew that Asad dream girl was Zoya 😃

And Zoya's dream finally come true

PS: Congratulation you are an IF-Rockerz now 🤗


Awww...buddy...I got my colorful comments...yes...
You can feel anything...he had to feel that...😆
Yeah he thought that...😉
Taht was really embarrassing...oh really you want a husband like Asad😉
Don't worry your husband will be better than him...in his own way...😃
Well orphanage part is my favorite too...
Oh!! haww!! you are a dreamy girl then...DESTINY indeed plays a role in our life...
Thank you so much for your wonderful,colorful comment.
They are unique in their way...
Aww...thanks buddy...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

Your updates r treat to read
realy they r awesme
keep writing
update asap
thanks for pm
love
niyati


Niyati
Thank you so much dear🤗
Glad that you liked it😃
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian

so sorry or commenting late

lovely
i m so happy that u made the girl zoya



Thank you so much 🤗
Glad that you loved it😃

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