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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

So that was Arnav she met...amazing chapter...thanks for the PM

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Pyewest

@Pyewest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Lovely update. Enjoyed reading it

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arshi_lover1

@arshi_lover1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

loved it plz continue soon! loved the arshi conversations!

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mansin129

@mansin129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Lovely update... At least the have stared a "hi" conversation!!!! So I guess both are boarding the same flight to Srinagar??? Very interesting!

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Jenny,

Read chaps 1 and 2 together. My first reaction was to pack my bags and take off to, India. Despite the long flights, taxing queues, annoying as well as nice co passengers, impatient wait during change of flights, not so comfortable seats, I LOVE trips to back home.

Khushi is pulled towards Arnav from their first not so momentous meeting. There is something cosmic about him that she gets drawn to him more and more and cannot ignore him. This seems like a sign that her destiny is tied to him.

Arnav's character seems very intriguing. He is troubled and restless and wants to keep to himself and doesn't want anybody to invade his space. These are the probably the reasons why Arnav came across as rude to Khushi, don't think it was intentional.

Loving the way this story is progressing, this is very promising.

PS: This has to be the first story where Khushi is diabetic.

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 11 years ago

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Atyay

@Atyay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Loved the update! 👏

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Well written and interesting. Looking forward to this story unfolding.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#598

hmm.. so Khushi has Diabetes here.. good update..

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#599

It's so wonderfully written. From starting till end I feel as if I am traveling with them.

Khushi is so sweet in this story, easy to go, friendly, make you feel happy. But arnav is really very tough in this, did he even notice her?

Khushi is clearly attracted to him but what is he thinking?

Khushi is simple and he is so complicated.

I am imagining that this time they might sit together while going to Kashmir or he got his own means of transport.

I was thinking that when arnav is like this how they are going to have an affair, he is not giving any clue to us.

I can't wait to know what arnav is thinking and how they are going to meet this time.

In this you made khushi diabetic, this is really new.

Totally loved this update,

Thanks for updating and pm.

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#600

Nice update.

So Khushi is smitten by Arnav. kind of love at first sight. But Arnav is oblivious of Khushi's existence. Or is he??

Loved the way you made Arnav forget his book and Khushi picking it up later and finding his name in the book.

When Khushi returned the book he hardly acknowledged her. Is he plain rude or disturbed about something?

Also for a change Khushi has diabetes. Since Arnav travels first class I am assuming he is rich. Bechari Khushi trying to find him in New Delhi airport too. Where did he disappear???

Reading about Khushi's feelings one song comes to my mind. I have shared the link below. Hope you agree with me.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1v1eNMuu-nk

(I dont know how to upload the song here directly.)