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kinjalcp87

@kinjalcp87

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

OH MY GOD.

Hope every one comes to know about lavanya.

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Thats amazing.. Beautifully portrayed, buddy.. I agree its one heck of an emotional rider, but as you said, you must have planned it well.. And being a writer myself, I can understand what it is like to stick to the original story.. Congos to you for that! I dont find why the FF is losing its readers, but personally, I feel its an intense and strong one.. I'm greatly pleased with how the work is going on.. Do continue soon.. Hope you are fine and free from flu and your mids as well.. Thank you for the PM.. Shall be waiting for the next..

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risha8

@risha8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

awesome update

felt sorry for khushi and anjali

felt like killing rahul and lavanya 😡

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katy185

@katy185

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

poor arnav n khushi..😲

dey had to face so much in life, yet happiness is still not their way...

n that too wen dey havent done even a seed of bad to others..💔

thats really so bad...😭

hey pls continue the story as u want.. 👏

it is YOUR Story after all.. n u need not worry abt TRP's... lol...😆

will be looking forward for the next update..😊

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

so many eviil eyes on my arshi

seriously life is not a bed of roses...

yes there exists people like rahul...

and ther exists people like arshi tooo who is love to them but still all the hurdles to them...

feeling bad for arshi for loosing their baby,,,,

i was blocked seeing khushi ocndition full soaked in blood,,,

u know what u have to hel me ...u have given this emotional update next should be the one where arnav tear the layers of rahul part by part inch by inch,,,

his rage and remorse should be like ripping rahul in parts,,,that should be a crime wala update...

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Sad updt poor kushi lose her baby becoz of revenge game only she suferd most hate lav n rahul both go to hel always enjoy ur al storis but this story is close to my heart wil mis it glad to know that u wil start new story wait for it want to see lav n rahul sufer thanx for pm hope u r fine nw tk cr urself

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Emotional update
simply brilliant and beautifully written
feeling 💔 😭 for Khushi as she has suffered so much.
What does't kill you will make you stronger and I hope Khushi will be one of them people.
All the best laid plan have away of going wrong so they can plan as much as they want.
Hope you are feeling better
thanks for the pm ⭐️

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Raki

@raki

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Very emotional update Feeling really bad for Arshi

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esamoe

@esamoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Its so sad to see the baby killed..it was a very heart wrenching scenes but I'm sure it was needed for the story and I trust your writing skills!

I'm so happy the end is near for Rahul hope Anjali will be okay!

I want the whole family to know about La's deeds and she should get the worst punishment!

Poor khushi how will she deal with this.

Update soon awesome work!

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AnnieMalik

@AnnieMalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Amazing updte
Loved it
Please don't be disappointed, you are an amazing writer please write only what you have planned and you will get the best result
I am sad for khushi and arnav
Please let them be with each other at this time
Thanks for pm
Get well soon
Best of luck for midterms
Please continue soon

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