The Grease Story (Completed) - A SanDhir FF *A/N - Page 103*

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Himani Aggarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Hey Arushi,,Its the end,*I just gave out a whine*...This fiction of yours is full of vagaries with a bonaza of brilliant execution by you...Its not about sanyukta/randhir,,its a tale of unconditional,,undemanding and unfathomable love between two lost souls,,each searching their way into this beautiful feeling...If i start pointing out the intricacies of your every chapter,,i will fall frugal of adjectives...The best part about these is the resilience,,the flexibility with which you have taken every human emotion into account...You ,,my dear,,acquired pedestal of sagacity with this fiction...No words cn b enough to exalt you...This has surely been a wonderful journeyy...
Himani..

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Arushi Kotecha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: rinku95
Superb ending
Thanks for pm

Hey Rinku! Thank you for being a part of my maiden journey! Any words spoken or heard now will just be empty capsules of nothingness bouncing off the wall! So I shall not even try to put my feelings into words! Lots of love! And THANK YOU again for reading and commenting! :D

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Arushi Kotecha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti
Awesome..
Such a lovely ending... Aww..
Loved the kids names..!!
It was a bliss to read this FF..!!
Keep writing more pls..
I would love to read them...!!:D
Love
Shalini

Hey Shalini! Thank you, thank you, thank you! :D I shall most definitely write more! :D

Thank you for being a part of my maiden journey! Any words spoken or heard now will just be empty capsules of nothingness bouncing off the wall! So I shall not even try to put my feelings into words! Lots of love! And THANK YOU again for reading and commenting! :D

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Arushi Kotecha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

Khatam ho gayi? 🤔😵

Call Sanyukta back. Right now!

🤣🤣🤣

But I'm glad you gave Vardhaan a happy ending as well :) AND WHAT DO THEY MEAN 'ENTIRE' KIDS 🤣🤣 Aadha baccha payda karega kya woh 🤣😆 But I guess anyone would be dumbstruck in a situation like that 😲 Vardhaan having two 'entire' kids and all :P

AW <3 The end is so super-duper cute <3 Loved it! 🤗

Hey! Haan, khatam! "Two ENTIRE kids" was a result of their shocked minds! xP

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Unknown

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

I have read up to part 11 just last night... I will comment on all of it tomorrow...

So far, I am loving it!!!!! I hope Arohi doesn't create trouble😕

Thanks for the PM!

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Poulami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Hey Ami! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Yes, I never made them say it to each other because for a weird reason, I believe a relationship is stronger without the utterance of those words.

Thank you SO much for being a part of my maiden journey! Any words spoken or heard now will just be empty capsules of nothingness bouncing off the wall! So I shall not even try to put my feelings into words! Lots of love! And THANK YOU again for reading and commenting! :D

Thanks to you that you gifted us such an amazing story & yes i absolutely do agree with you... You don't need to say I LOVE YOU to prove your love for your PARTNER... It's not needed when the relation is true!! Without saying these words you can spend your whole life just like the story!! 😊 😳

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samairaa gupta

@iraa_parsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

You didn't pm the 22nd part of your ff to me(the part in which you had my name on d first position of dedication list)lol ...dats why I didn't know about it...ahh...anyways so I received 23rd part nd read both the parts now..:)

So I'll give my reviews for both the parts.

22nd part: beautifully penned the mother-son scene and cutest convo. b/w SanDhir especially baccho wala part. Lol

23rd part: I was ROFL after imagining Vardhan nd Randhir scene (when he ordered to call sanyu BACK).

Amazing back story of vardhan. His daughter's name SAMAIRA?? Mera bhi..hihi :p

"Randhir and Sanyukta never said "I Love You" to

each other. They never felt the need to. They

always knew that the other was there to catch them

lest they slip." These lines were perfect for the ending...touched me. I luv u for dis..(Galat mat samajhna...behn wala pyaar hai :p)

And what a HAPPY ENDING!!!!! Cutest ff ever!!

THANKYOU so much for an awesome ff.

You know when I find something really incredible I don't get enough words to describe and appreciate it...nd your ff is one of dem. I didn't use enough adjectives to describe your work 'cause it deserves more dan dat . So "bhavnao ko samjho." Lol .I hope you understood what I want to say. Nd I hope m making some sense.

Loads nd Loads of best wishes for your next ff. Jaldi jaldi start kr dena.. Will b w8ing for dat.

Love

Samaira

P.s kuchh zyaada lamba toh nei likh diya maine??? ;) :p

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Arushi Kotecha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: Prarthana7
khatam hogaya...😭😭
n cumin to da update awesome wil b an undrstatemnt...
i luvd da way Vardhaan told his histry...
da funniest part ws "2 entire kids"...😆😆i mean no one hv seen a half kid ryt...😉
da stry wch is aftr 15 yrs it ws lovely...
da way u described each n evry person's daily life is impressive...
last but not da least da concpt dat Sandhir nevr told "i luv u" to each othr ws tooo gud...
how cn anyone undrstnd each othr so prfctly...
u hv pennd it in a beautiful way...
thnx for sharing a beautiful stry wid us...
v r glad u wrote dis...

thnx a lot for da gud news dat u r ready wid anothr ff to rock dis forum...😊

Hey Prarthana! :D

Hahaha! They thought "two entire kids" because they were SO shocked xP

Yes, but that story after another month :/

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Arushi Kotecha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: Rekha85
Arushi di !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oops it ended!!!!!!!!!
I wanted to read more frm u..anyways happy that u r doing another ff!!!!!!!!!!
Really loved wat vaardhaan said to Sandhir!!!!!!!
I really loved the whole story!!!!!
I love ur style of writing!!!!!!!!

Hey Rekha! Yeah, it did! :/

Thanks SO much! :D