ArHi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| #4, Last Part-pg.16 *Complete!*

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Congrats on the new thread!

Glad to see that Anjali appeared out to be strong at the time as it needed so..

Khushi blaming herself.. sigh.. the assurance from Arnav and Anjali is still not able to calm her down..

Shyam Manohar Jha... you can rot in the cell all your life.. :/

But loved the update..!

:)

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

love the way u weave words to form a fabric of feeling; her grip on his hand, his silent acknowledgement - silent but pervasive :)

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow! That's one long awesome update. Finally Anjali got guts to report against Shyam. Poor Shyam babuva what will u do now. Ur game ends. Khushi Will be Khushi no matter what. Now she is blaming herself for everything. Arnav is hurt becoz his di hid so much from him.

Can't believe it's going to end. Will certainly miss this ff. eager for the last update.

Thanks for the pm.

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

please please update the next chapter soon. Loved this story . cant wait to read a befitting ending.

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Congrats for the new thread...
Will be back at commenting after reading the chap.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Amazing post and so utterly satisfying that Shyam got what he deserved from the hands of his own Rani Sahiba...👏

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awesome update!

Way to go Anjali! Finally, shyaam is gone...

Can't wait for the next update!

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Long and emotional update. Finally Shyam is caught and hope he gets what he deserved. Arnav is hurt as why Anjali didn't share this with him and probably Anjali wants to at least stand up once and fix all the wrong things that happened because of one man in her life. Kushi is torn with all this news. I hope next chapter will put everybody to peace. Really loved the way you wrote how each and every person felt.

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Wow! What? The next will be the last? Nooo! Already?

Honestly, I'm too overwhelmed right now. I don't know what to say! It might all seem gibberish! :P

I loved how each of your characters reacted. Very natural and believable. Khushi and her misplace guilt; Arnav's dejection about the fact that Anjali kept all this away from him; Anjali's almost mechanical behaviour as opposed to her lively nature, at coming to terms with all that has happened and is happening with her...all of it was depicted flawlessly!

For Shyam...I was hoping he would die of starvation. But whatever. As long as he is out of the picture...it's good!

One particularly difficult situations to write about I think, but you did rather well. Keep it up! :D

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Congratulations are in order!! For a number of things actually!! First of all, ur os...it deserved all the accolades sweetheart😃

Next, congo for the new thread, cnt believe v came so far with this ff...

N third of all, congo for this brilliant update...everyones emotions, be it khushi or anjali, be it arnav or even that psycho shyam...beautifully penned...u nailed it, gal!! Hoping for an amazing brother sister confrontation, hopes r high as i know u will do justice to that too😃