ArHi OS : Falling For Mr. Raizada! Concluding Part Page 17 --Removed--

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Wow...such a lovely and romantic conclusion...loved it 😃

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: NidhiNev
There couldnt have been a better ending to this ! Its awesome ! You've out done yourself again JJ !

Khushi was getting ready to kill in the night and got killed herself as soon as the light was switched on ! There sat Arnav in all his glory waiting for her ! Arnav shocked to see her ! The way she was dressed ! The gown she wore didnt leave anything to imagine as it fitted her like a second skin ! Arnav was speechless seeing her like that, and so was Khushi seeing Arnav in a suit looking sexier with the top buttons of his shirt open !

I love the song... Hoshwalon ko khabar kya.. Jagjit singh.. Sarfarosh, Aamir Khan, Sonali Bendre, Naseerudin Shah ! Wow !

So juliet came back to her romeo ? ... Arnav and Khushi started talking catching up on lost time... Couples Only... Arnav Khushi... Hawww.. !! She said Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada.. Thank god noone heard...!

Lets dance... Arnav i dont know how too dance... They went on the dance floor and dancing came naturally to her, by just movin along with her hands on Arnav's shoulder and his around her waist !

Haaye re ! The drive back... *dreamy eyes* fingers entwined... Soft lips touch his lips... You'll need more than two minutes said Lavanya while getting down from the car !

Exchange of gifts and the wonderful wordings... Will be your Romeo always... Can i be your Juliet, forever ! So sweet ! Love filled eyes, well they had already said ' i love you ' to each other while doing their sensual dance at the pub !

Mosquitoes ! Again ! Well she got to know it was Arnav who was pinching her just to make her realize this is for real, sitting on the bench near the lake when in school and now in the car ! No time wasted captured each others lips nipping, kissing, outling the lips and playing with their tongues... *sigh*

So Lavanya was right 2 mins wouldnt be enough for them to catch up ! *wink*

OMG..you too have out done yourself with this OS type comment Nidhi...😊

Thank you so much loving, liking and appreciating the story and my effort...

Love you!!

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

~Red font for the occasion~

Oh! Valentine's around the corner! ❤️

You've done a great job for the OS, beyond justice 👏

The thing is that I wanted to read something for ArShi on V Day and you've given us what we want and more with all the details about their years in school back together. Arnav and Khushi's relationship is so strong as their feelings only grew with the 3 years separation. The bond they used to have back at school is adorable. Two moths of silence, just staring, well checking out! Is not it too much? No wonder that the first time they became alone (Though not completely, but they couldn't notice LA and NK, right? ;) ) they kept quiet for some time to believe that they are togther before talking their heart out with no backing and looking away this time. They both believe that there is a limit fr everything and hence they aproached each other in the best way they could! And that was not too fast as Arnav thought.

God! The gifts' exchange, and choosing the similar words. They were planning for the same thing unknowingy...

2 minutes reminds me of 'Vivah' But when were two minutes enough?

He asked' what do you think?' and she replied 'kiss me'. The lady knows how to reply.

I liked the progress of events here a lot. And I love Khushi- La and Arnav-NK friendship.

NK was actually paying attention to the lecture more than anyone else!

'The Hotspot' What a perfect name!

Laila and Majnu 😆 VS. Romeo and Juliet 😳

Mindblowing OS, Ji 😃

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Meera Beladiya

@meera_beladiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

it was amazing keep writing this type of stories

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munchkinland

@munchkinland

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

I LUVED IT VERY MUCH...
IT WAS AN AMZING PIECE OF WORK...
JUST WOWWW...

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@whiterose29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Maza aa gaya ye padh ke SF Ji! ❤️ Just too good! 😳 <3 First stalking Mr. Raizada and then falling for him..

Khushi luckily got admission in the same college and then the love story blooms ❤️ Arnav expressing his love and their notes exchange was so cutee! <3 Perfect usage of songs ji.. 😳 And how can we forget Miss La and our Nanheji, both were cute as well! 😳

And what to say about the ending part, it was as usual wonderfulwa! ☺️ And mushy mushy too 😛 😳

Love you and your works SF Ji 🤗

Your nautanki WR Ji 😎 :D

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Very cool ending
I'm glad they found each other

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stg1

@stg1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

awww, beautiful conclusion! i loved the romance and the sweetness of their love, a perfect valentine's night for a perfect couple ❤️

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

What a beautiful tale you spun...a fairy tale and so perfectly. The happiness, actually the euphoria of the fulfilment of first love ...the anticipation, the anxiety, being totally captured and full of love that it feels like it is bursting from the seams...beautifully captured.

Just the way you described their feelings an all encompassing love, which makes everything around them beautiful, the appreciation and desire that they get and feel for each other the depth of their feelings for each other, that has not reduced with time and distance, but actually become deeper and more pronounced after all this time...

I loved how they make each other feel, I so identified with the feelings taking me back to similar times...the way they just were with each other, no barriers or pretence no ego and pride but bonded so beautifully with each other reminiscing about the old days and their feelings. The exchanging of the gifts,the thought behind it and loved how she fixes his name to hers while entering the club...very natural and a nice touch...

First love and all the promises and the thrill and excitement it brings...,Love the choices of the songs and the way you used them here...

So happy with the way it ended...it's just their beginning...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

I love this gazal a lot... 😃

Beautiful part...

Loved their silent and sweet love...

Their confession was lovely...

And the kiss was breathtaking...