Slumber Party || A Kriyaansh TS Updated Part 3 (page 10) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!!
kriya sharon friends??
rey senior??
i loved the concept :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
continue soon...like supet soon

I loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing start
Aww kria likes Rey
What a stupid rule is that
I love krishashi bond
Love to read more
Update soon n do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princess_Devil

Amazing start

Aww kria likes Rey
What a stupid rule is that
I love krishashi bond
Love to read more
Update soon n do pm me

I know it's stupid and now when I'm writing the next part I'm like why did I write that...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start
N do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Really nice start!!!!!!
You should totally continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow, for a first time writer, this was surprisingly good...i loved it...and i hope you continue into it soon... and i loved the chracter sketches as well...i could very well imagine the scene going on in front of me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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seriously loved it...
do continue soon...
n pliessh pm me sweetie...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start 👏
Continue soon and do pm me next tym 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much to all of you guys.
The response I got was huge and I'm grateful you guys took the pain to read my story when tere are so much better things to do.

I did not proofread will do it after today's episode of D3. 😊
Here you go:

-- Kriya --

I knocked on Sharon's front door , and Neha opened it . " Hey Kriya come in " I walked inside admiring the living room. I haven't really been at Sharon's house since i started liking Rey. She's always been at my house and boy, her house has changed. I walked upstairs stopping when I heard music blasting from the door across from Sharon's room. I opened the door to take a peek. As usual "Dil Se Re" was playing and he was dancing. I closed the door and screamed when i saw Neha standing right behind me, she took my hand and pulled me into Sharon's room .
There was Sharon, Simmi, Aashi and Neha sitting right there, I kindly smiled at them and sat down on the floor in between Sharon and Neha. " Okay guys , how about we play some truth or dare." I heard Aashi say and I groaned, where does this girl get her ideas from, I really hated truth or dare they gave the worst things to do or say.
"Kriya, I dare you to - " Sharon started but I interrupted, "W..wait maybe I wanted to say the trut- ". "Kri don't be such a scaredy Cat, Anyways i dare you to .. " She paused Thinking of something , then Simmi popped out of no where.
"How about this , i dare you to go to Rey's room, seduce him and then leave". She said with a mischievous glint in her eyes. My eyes widen at this"N-no I can't do that. " I said quickly this was way embarssing. " Well its either that or you admit to Rey that you're in love with him." Rinni pitched a smirk at me. I rolled my eyes,"Fine i will" I stood up and walked outside the room nervous as hell .
I started shivering a bit as I knocked on his door, hearing the music being turned off, I was about to run but then he opened the door by then. "Oh Hey Kriya" he said smiling a little, opening the door wider.
I gulped , touching his hand slowly trying to be all flirty like all other girls in my college. Im not so smooth in this , "A-Are you gonna let me in? " I said smiling trying to hide my nervousness as much as I can .
"Yeah, sure" he moved aside a little and I walked in, admiring his room , it was not as normal as any other guy's room. Not a single poster on the wall, and the bed was made up properly, but some magazines and CDs were thrown on the floor. "Sorry about the Mess " He said standing next to the couch placed right in the middle of the room."So um .. what brings you here, isn't my sister having a 'Slumber party'?" He said putting the airquotes around it . I blushed a bit, "Well um i think its kinda childish" I said, walking further inside the room. But to my bad luck I tripped over a magazine and fell straight over him.
We fell over the couch, with me on top of him. "Oh really?" he said studying my face, I gulped, confused, then I understood he was talking about the statement I made earlier "Um...yeah , I rather hang with a much cuter older guy instead." I replied, blushing because of the position were in. I was about to get up, when he placed his hands around my waist and pulled me into him. A smirk grew across his face," You think I'm cute huh?" he asked as leaned a little closer to my face.
" U-uhm yeah i do " My heart felt like it was about to explode right out of my chest, everything's just going SO fast. He started to lean in more, I felt his grip loosening, so I took the advantage and got up and started to run, but he moved too fast and cornered me to the wall, I moved back a bit hitting the wall and he put his arms on the wall keeping me from moving anywhere, "Well , i think your cute too." He said in that deep hot voice, But before I knew it I felt myself moving from under his arms and running out the room.

Please comment and like, the next part will be uploaded soon :)

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