Slumber Party || A Kriyaansh TS Updated Part 3 (page 10)

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I was asked to write a mildly romantic scene for the school play but I made a total one shot which I couldn't submit so here it is.
my first attempt at writing. :)

--- Kria ---

I walked into the college building and headed straight to the locker room (The boys and girls share locker rooms). When I reached my locker I saw Reyaansh talking to his friends not even acknowledging me. I sighed and started taking some books out for my first class.
Just then someone sneaked up on me and started tickling me hard. I giggled loudly and instantly covered my mouth with my hand. Rey looked at me, smiled a little and turned back to his friend. I so knew who this idiot was.
"Sharon" I turned back and whined. Whereas she was busy laughing her head off. I glared at her and asked "Embarrassing much??"
"Hahaha Sorry kri! I know how much you like my brother but, he is our senior and they have this idiotic rule of not dating juniors, plus, I think he is still dating that Taani"she replied. I sighed, my love story had so many obstacles "yeah... I was trying to forget that."
Sharon looked at me, guilty" I am so sorry Kriya". I faked a smile and said" Hey it's fine, no problem"
We were about to leave but "What's up??" Aashi shouted and smiled big. Before I could speak Sharon said "What are you so smiley about?" Aashi bit her lips with nervousness and replied" Um... Actually Reyaansh asked me out"
I looked at her horrified and soon after Sharon and Aashi's laughter rang in my ears and were hi fiving each other." Huh? What's going on?" I asked clueless.
"God Kriya, your face,Hillarious" she said. Now I understand, this was all a joke. I hate the two of these. I was about to leave when Sharon caught my arm and said "Okay Okay Sorry", still trying to suppress her laughter." But well we wanted to inform you that we are having a sleepover at my house. Interested?"
Sleepover. Sharon's house. Rey would be there. No." No I'll pass" I replied."Kriya my brother won't eat you up, that you don't come because of him and he'll probably be dancing off the night in his private rehearsal hall. So chill." Sharon's right "Okay, I'm in" I replied and smiled. Sharon got hyped up, screamed a yay, and started pulling on my arm.
Ouch! That hurts, I tried to pull my arm with force but ended up loosing my balance, I shrieked and closed my eyes, waiting for the fall but instead I felt a muscular pair of arms around me. I opened my eyes and saw Rey smirking down at me. I composed myself and muttered "Thanks" and literally ran towards Sharon and Aashi, who were again too busy laughing.
"So not cool guys" I said to them sternly. But Aashi said"Hehe , your face was priceless. Cmon lets push her again". I faked a smile and looked behind them and saw the Boys Washroom written on the door. I smirked at them and pushes them inside. I walked away hearing two girls screaming mixed with the guys in the bathroom - Mess with me , ill mess with you right back .

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Okay this is the first time I'm writing something. Do comment and tell me how it was.
Pasand na aaye to bhi comment karna plz...

Ps- I think this is going to be a three-shot or possibly more.



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Soooper
Especially the lastt part
Mess with me i'll mess with you right back
This kriya is sooo good
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Its lovely..
Frnds kitni kameeni hoti hai na.. ;)
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Soooper
Especially the lastt part
Mess with me i'll mess with you right back
This kriya is sooo good

thanks... I hope you will like the next part
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Its lovely..
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Haha.. Do rite d nxt part soon.. :)

unhi se to inspiration mili hai.

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