Dil Ka Rishta ❤️ ❤️

Kriyansh-love thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#1
Chapter - 1

REY !!!

She shouted at the top of her voice ...
He turned to see WHO was it ? he was shocked ... , shocked to see HER !!! The time froze for him , he just couldn't believe his OWN eyes . IT was HER ? Really , was it her or was he dreaming again ? Like everyday ?
No ! IT IS HER ! But HOW?

KRIYA ... uttered he .

but soon he was out of his wondering when he saw her running towards him , her eyes filled with fear ... fear o loosing something , something which meant EVERYTHING to her !!!
Before he could realize or understand anything she pushed him hard off the road and making him fall the other side ... he fell with a THUD and it did hurt him but all that he could do was look @ her getting hit by a car & rolling off to the other end of the road ... he eyes went wide ... he wanted 2 turn back the time ... he scremnt her name as loud as he could . he ran .. ran with a wounded leg and head to her .

She was there lying on the road with blood all over her ... He cursed himself to let her be in that state ... he could do anything but not see her in such a state !!!
She put her trembling hand which bleeded badly in front of him ... It made him cry ! he held her hand gently yet so tight not letting it go not wanting to leave it ever ... he took her into his lap and yelled looking at her KYUN ????

She smiled and said ,

Kyun ki aap mere acche dost se kuch zayyada ho ... !

Tears rolled down his cheeks ... he cursed himself more and more ... he shut his eyes tight no wanting to see her like that anymore ... he looked up @ universe ji asking for help & looked back at her and said Tumhe kuch anhi hoga , MAI TUMHE KUCH NAHI HONE DUNGA BAATHCUTTER !!!!

guyz plz check the post below and do let me know how you felt about the update ... appreciations & criticism both are most welcome

Tej ...🤗
luv Kriyansh ❤️


Edited by Kriyansh-love - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

6

Views

1.2k

Users

5

Likes

32

Frequent Posters

Kriyansh-love thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Hey guyz its me back on IF !!!!
i knw , i knw ki mere already do ya teen FFz pending hai well ill b updating them also par yeh update karna zaroori tha specially after seeing d recent track or KRIYANSH !!!

and mai aap sabko bata doon ki this is an SS basically on KRIYANSH ill try adding SWARON but cant promise ...

well do let me know ki yeh update kaisa laga & do u people want me to continue this or not !!!
for PMz add me to ur buddy list :)

Next post is the INBOX 😊

Tej ... 🤗
luv Kriyansh <3 ❤️



Edited by Kriyansh-love - 11 years ago
Kriyansh-love thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
INBOX

CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 1 -

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3905084&PID=100554744&#p100554744

CHAPTER 2 - PAGE


Tej ... 🤗
luv Kriyansh <3 ❤️
Edited by Kriyansh-love - 11 years ago
Dead_Nightmare thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Awesome start
Kriya ka accident
Why
But nyc start
Update soon next
kreya204 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Superb start!!!

Rey broken...dreaming of kriya cmng back to him n taking him in her arms!!! So romantic n sensitive!! 👏

Kriya aayi!!! 😲 bt use hug karne ki jagah push kar diya!! 😡
Par uska accident na ho isliye use push kara!! 😭 😭 😭

Rey ne pu6a aisa kyun kiya??!! To apna best most emotional confession dialogue bola!!! 😕 😊 👏

"Aap mere a6e dost se ku6 zyada ho!!"

Ye mera favourite dialogue hai!!!

Bahot thrilling n enotional start hai!!!

Thnx for d pm!! N nxt update bhi jaldi se de do!!plz!! 🥱 😊
sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
the concept is different but great start... do continue soon and pm me
D3ianNitaGaine thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
OMG tears went rolling down my eyes while reading 😭 baatcutter n aache dost se zyada lines made me blush ☺️ plzz update the next part soonnn n its awsummm👏

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 years ago

The plot of this story is inspired from the Hollywood movies Beastly 2011 movie (which in itself is an adaptation of Beauty and the Beast) and...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 2 months ago

Churake dil mera...Stealing my heart... I dedicate this OS to parthz who requested me to write on AviSha. Hima went to a park and looked around....

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".