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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww i just wish they both stay like this without covering their true self with this some arrogant egotistic mask
I totally loved this update
Update soon wanna read whats gonna happen in future
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update :)
I'm happy that Rey took her to the beach
I loved how they both enjoyed themselves
WOW she kissed him

This has got nothing to do with anything...yeah I know that doesn't make any sense
Ok so while I was reading this my whole attention was on the words...chaupati and stalls and pav bhaaji and Khala khatta and gola.
It's been two years since I've gone to India and has road food...and this chapter literally made my mouth drool so thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful updt
Loved it
Arre yaar ye rey ka brain hate it
Dil accha toh dimag kharab kyu gadha kahi ka
Any ways loved kriyaansh any how
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesomeee

Ahmazinggg

Superbb

Fab

Splendid

Loved last 2 updates

specially date n all was super sweet

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

So guys , I am currently having a writer's block for secret du Coeur , but I promise you I'll be updating it soon. Sorry about the inconvenience. :D

Guys kria can understand whether rey is lying or acting genuinely through his body language and because she loves him 😛. They are no bachpan ke dost.

Part 14

Finally the day for our performance came. I was tensed for the first time , and the lehenga wasn't helping me , I could sense guys staring at me . When suddenly I felt someone wrap a jacket around me. I looked there and saw rey.

"Jacket ko nikalna mat , ladke mar jaayenge."

He laughed. I giggled. And saw that he was shirtless. I gulped. He looked hot. I saw the kurta , I took it and turned to him , handing it to him.

"Wear it."

"Kyun? You can't control seeing me shirtless?"

I rolled my eyes.

"No , I can very well control. But you know those girls can't."

He turned and saw few girls ogling at him and not doing their work. He laughed and took the kurta and wore it. He turned to me. Sharon and swayam came there. Sharon came to me.

"Girl , why that jacket?"

"She was uncomfortable."

Rey replied on my behalf.

"You know rey she can speak."

Swayam said giggling. We both hit him on his shoulders , sharon laughed and smiled.

"Haye kria by god , agar meri girlfriend nahi hoti maine toh tujhe aaj hi propose karna tha."

Swayam said. I laughed.

"Thanks."

"Tu apni girlfriend par concentrate kar na swayam."

Rey said , he looked a bit annoyed. Was he jealous? I smiled thinking that.

"Jealousy ki kuch zyaada hi smell nahi aa rahi swayam?"

Sharon said giggling. Swayam laughed.

"Anyways kria you seriously are looking beautiful."

I smiled at her. She hugged me , I stiffened.

"Best of luck sweetie."

"Same to you sharon."

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Rey's Pov

I noticed that kria was feeling very uncomfortable in her lehenga. But for the first give minutes I was just staring at her, she looked out of this world , if no one was there na , I would have kissed her there and then. I noticed few boys ogling at her and felt anger rush in my veins.

These were the side effects of liking her. Being jealous! Sigh , I had a very good mind of dropping the revenge plan and confess it to kria. But for the first time I was very scared to do something. Ignoring that I took a jacket and wrapped it around kria.

She looked at me with her wide eyes . Gosh! How can this girl manage to be a devil and angel at the same time. Kria smiled at me. We spoke and she gave me my kurta to wear. I smirked knowing she was feeling restless.

I felt highly jealous when swayam said the girlfriend thingy to kria. How dare he!

We were speaking when gautam uncle came. I saw kria stiffening again. I held her hand , she looked at me and gave me a smile , and blinking her eyes told me that she is fine. I smiled back.

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Kria's Pov

In the past few days , me and rey had definitely forgotten about the bet and I had actually started falling for the sweet rey which he had been hiding from everyone. Mr.rai prakash came , I stiffened. When I felt rey hold my hand , as if assuring me that he was there. I looked at him and smiled.

"Best of luck you four."

"Thanks!"

We all told him. He was speaking to sharon , I looked away. Swaron were called for their performance , they did an amazing dance , it was on alvida. I smiled seeing sharon dance , she was always a dancing princess. Sigh! Anyways Mr.rai prakash had gone away after sharon's performance. It didn't matter.

Me and rey were called now.

"Don't worry kria we will rock it."

"I know we will."

We smiled at each other and went . We danced on Ang Laga De Re (Same dance). Our song was coming to an end we were sitting staring at each other lost , the lights dimming when I felt the back of my blouse tearing , and it tore. I looked at rey shocked. Tears forming immediately.

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Rey's Pov

The danced was ending , when kria suddenly had tears in her eyes. I saw sharon , she was standing facing me and had a horrifying expression. I sensed that kria's blouse was getting lose and immediately put my hand on her back. But I was late the damage was done , a guy had seen her dress torn and had shouted it loud. I threw the dia from her hand and pulled her close to me . The curtains drew , she was crying.

Sharon ran to the stage and covered kria in a jacket.

"Kria , ssh stop crying. Nothing's wrong."

Sharon was trying to console her but she ran away to the changing room closing the door with a bang. We went behind her , knocking the door.

"Kria please open the door please!"

Kria came out , her clothes changed. She had washed her face , and was not crying. She gave us a smile as if saying that she was alright. No kria! You can't hide your pain from me . But I was wrong she couldn't hide it from swaron as well.

Sharon hugged her.

"Everything is fine kria. Ssh."

Me and swayam joined her. We pulled back. I looked at her , she looked at me , swaron went away , I took her inside , and closed the door.

"Kria."

Kria hugged me , I hugged her back. She didn't cry , but I knew it made her feel better. So I hugged her more tight. We stayed in that position for god knows how long. She needed me right now , and I was going to be with her . That is my promise.

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Hope you like it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow what a update u gave
its really nice and amazing
do try to update it soon
im eagerly waiting for it.
Edited by nature-beauty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res. Gonna read the whole thing from the start and then comment
Unres. Finally.
Loved it.
It seemed like a fairy tale in the beginning, but that was just a dream
I absolutely love rey in this book. How can you not? Hes so typical rey.
I love the constant back and forth between rey and kriya and how they just wont admit to the way they feel.
I think it's best of rey forfeits his plan for revenge cuz it's not going anywhere except the dustbin unless he doesn't get a grip on his heart and a hold on his lips.
Id been hoping krisha were sisters, its been so long since I read something like that.
Gautam rai prakash freaks me out really. Can't seem to figure out his character. Its like he hates her but then he's trying to protect her from rey.
I adored the date . It was so cute and the best part is that it was spontaneous. There couldn't have been a better place for it than the beach.
I can't believe you did AGL. I loved the jealous rey, but not as much as the concerned rey after the accident.
All in all its been amazing so far, and I like how payed special attention to detail. Its makes the story so much more comprehensive. This book is definitely on my must reads and im positive its gonna get even more gripping as the story progresses.
Keep writing
Edited by NutellaIsLife - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
tune to kr fans ke liye ALD horror dream bana diya...
kya krti h yar...
bt i loved bith jealous nd possessive kriyaansh...jacket nd kurta...
kriya is very much uncomfortable with sharon...hogi bi...
blouse fat gaya...nd kisine dekh bi liya...ye nai hona chaiye tha...
i loved the way they consoled her...
amazing one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update !!
Kriyaansh seem to completely be in love with each other now !!
And the best part is that both of them have alreadt realized it !!
This is always my fav phase in any story...when realization has occured but not the confession !!
You amazingly described each situation !! Rey's jealously was a treat to read about !! ;)
Eager to know what is in store for Krisha in the future !!
Really want to know how you take the story forward !!
But fab job up until now !!
Update soon !! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!!!
Ishu baby its awesome!!!
Kriyansh looking killer as ever!!!
Lolzzz!!! Rey jealous!!!
Rey ne jacket diya to kriya ne kurta!!!
Swayam ne to khali compliment kiya tha...aur rey ka mercury level high ho gaya!!! 😆 😆
So dey did cm close in a few days!!!
N both wanted to forget d revenge thingie!!! But sigh...dey wont do so!!!
It will b out sooner or later!!!!
Kriya stiffens on sharon's hug!!! Obvio ku6 to reaction aayega na!!!
Also Mr. Rai Prakash ki presence se bhi she stiffened!!!
Bt rey reassured her!!!! Just a small gesture conveyed a lot!!!!
I m happy dat dey both admitted to atleast demselves dat dey lyk d other one!!!
N d mishap on stage!!! OMG!!!!
Ye kisine plan kiya tha kya??!!! U knw wardrobe malfunction n ol!!!
Bt rey did support kriya!!! Provided her a shoulder...nt to cry...bt to just b der...together!!!!
I loved it!!! Seriously!!!!
Nxt update soon!!!

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