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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing story..
kria slapped him,he deserve it...
spoil brat kahi kaa...
omg reyaansh singhania can do anything for revenge...
this time i want kria to beat that jerk...
update soon..
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was superb update
really amazing
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
freaking awesome...😃😃

now i'm addicted to ur story...😳😳

thnk u soo much for d pm.. plz cont soon.. d stry is going amazing..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
tht is going so much intrsting
kriya know all the rey plan
cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 5

I entered the college the next day. Every one stared at me. Urgh! I hated this attention , and I hate you Reyaansh. I saw him with his friends. He saw me , and came to me.

"Kria , listen."

"I forgive you reyaansh."

I can bet on my dance , that he had passed a smirk of victory , and then immediately covered it up with a smile. I wanted to laugh out loud. Poor lad , thought that I was trapped in his game , only if he knew that the game was mine now!

"How do you it was me?"

"I know your hand writing Reyaansh."

"Oh! So , miss.ghai. Can we be friends?"

Quite fast I must say. I raised my eye at him.

"Why?"

"Look , you are way too different then other girls here , they are ready to fall on me , if I give them a smile. But you didn't . You stood up for yourself , and I like this quality about you. And I really want to be your friend."

I am way to different then other girls right? Then you should know that I am so not going to fall in your trap. I somehow controlled myself from taking his neck in my hands and pressing it till that guy begs for mercy. I forwarded my hand and almost imagine myself slapping him , and punching him. We shook hands. I said with a curt smile.

"Friends!"

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His gang came to me , and I actually gelled along with them quite well. I knew one thing , he hadn't included his friends in this plan. Wanted to keep it as realistic as possible huh?

We were in the canteen , I saw him look at me , and raised an eye. He looked away. Jerk! So he wants me to think that he is interested in me. How can you fall so low rey? I never thought you were this low minded guy!

Each and every passing second from yesterday , I am regretting the fact that I loved you even more and more.

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Rey's Pov

It had been very easy for me , to be friend her. She was so innocent , and somewhere I knew I was doing wrong by hurting her. Cause she had actually done the right thing by slapping me. And when I had said that she was different from other girls , I had meant it. But my Ego was too big to accept that in front of anyone. And my Ego was too big than my heart , so I was going to hurt her , no matter how innocent or how different , or how correct she was.

We all were in the canteen . She mixed up with my gang quite well. I was speaking to swayam , when I heard her laugh. I looked at her . She looked so beautiful , and I was lost in her. When she looked at me , I turned away.

Reyaansh Singhaania , get a grip on your thoughts. You need to make her fall in love with you , not fall for her!

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Hope you all liked the update.

Okay , so I have made this new PM ID , for the works - TBPpms

It's not exactly new . I had made this for a kisha story , but I didn't continue it. Please add me if you haven't yet and want the pms. Will be sending pms through this as soon as it turns into a groupbie.

Guys , I won't force you all to review my work. But please at least just give me a reason why you don't review even after I send you a pm. It would be appreciated. For some people I know why they don't. And for others who don't please tell me whether my writing is so bad , that you all don't even want to review.

And yes guys , can anyone send pms about this story? I really want to share this work of mine with others.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ress!!
YAy!! Me first!

Hey ishana! Its ishana right?
Hmm i jus luv this drabble! But :'( coz its a drabble n not a normal big length story!!
Hmm so now..
I luvd the pretending friendship frm both sides..
Though i think at the end rey wid actually fall fr her n kria wud start hating him!
But i luvd tht look which rey gave to kria in canteen..
Tht was real.. He s actually intrested in her...
Well i jus m in luv with the twist the story is takin!!
N i luvd the update!! :)
So thanks.. :)
N update sooonn!! :)
Edited by Lovelylavender - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww me 2nd
no probsie😉
btw amazinggg part👏
m lovingg this story❤️
kriyaansh friends😳
rey lost n kriya
and m lost n KR
i guess rey wil fall for her😳
or maybe both wil fall for each other😳
waiting eagerly for d upcoming parts😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update ishaaa
very nicee
kria kitne intelligent hai rey ke plan usse pata chal gaya
and rey huh wo kria ke saath game khelna chahtha hai huh
ab kria usse sabak sikhayege
awesome
jaldi next part update karooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. the game is on...

interesting..

loved the way u have penned down rey's pov..

loved it..



with love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
Misunderstandings...this is what going to come soon...Right?
Rey will fall for her and she will not know and still think that it was a plan of his...quite predictable.
Yet a great concept.
I will love to read it till the end...

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