Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23) - Page 80

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi I have added you to my buddy list.
This ch was fab.
The journey of Arshi in the whole mnth ws amazing.
Khushi is doin so much jus to make Arnav feel loved wanted and cared for.
She hs instead of sitting around waiting for Arnav to open up to her. She herself doin thngs provin to Arnav abt tht she'll always b by her side irrespective of how long he takes to love her back.


Bt Arnav does love her want her n care for her its jus he hs nt given name of love to these feelings bt is nt marriage a bigger commitment nt for everyone love n trust very imp n Arnav is havin difficulty with these two factors.
Khushi is mother hen n she shud nt jus coz Arnav is her husband bt also he is BP's son.

Why is Khushi bein so hung up on Rishabh obviously she's nt liking tht her friend is hurt and she hd to keep away frm him coz of how Arnav feels.

Bt Khushi's priority has to b Arnav n she's right it ws everyone goes thru friends take a back seat after marriage n here tht guy loves khushi so she better keep a distance for her marriage.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg!
I dnt knw hw m i going to wait for nxt update..
Plz update soon..
Its amazing nd i cnt wait for nxt part..
Thnks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aawwwsssuummm update yaar! When I started reading, I never thought this part is going to end this electrifyingly!!!!
Arnav's need for his innocent seductress can be felt as he utters the words"'I... I... want you today Khushi. Not... not kisses... I.. more..." and "'Don't say no' he commanded".
Even more intersting is to see Khushi's reaction to his command "No? Of all things, THAT word was no where even near her mind !!"
And THIS is exactly where you have decided to stop! Sarasar na-insafi...ramanchi...
Please do not tadpao us for long and again p-l-e-a-s-e give us THE next part ASAP!
Edited by babli0204 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! What an update for Valentine's day :-)
Hope the next part comes soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Anonymos ... I am so sorry to say this but I am mosty a Silent reader on IF ( I used to be more active on IF when the show was running , but after the show ended I became more of a silent member 😳☺️ 😳 ) .. Now I browse IF thru my phone .. and do most of my IF browsing and reading in the morning on my way to work ... and posting a comment on IF with your phone is ... frankly a nightmare ..😡 , so most of times selfishly I just click like and just move on and don't bother commenting ... its really not because I don't appreciate your work ... it is more because of my time constraints 😳 😳 😳 ... So I am really Sorry for not commenting till now 😳 😳 😳 ... You are really a brilliant writer ... 👏 👏 👏 I've loved and enjoyed all your work immensely ... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 ... so I am breaking my silence today about your stories 😳 its part of my being more active on IF program 😃 so from today onwards I will try commenting regularly ...😳

Okay now coming to this story I really love how Khushi and Arnav's relationship is progressing after the initial hiccups ... I am in love with your Khushi ... She has accepted Arnav with all her heart ❤️ and she has evolved into this mature , patient and understanding woman here from the bubbly , talkative, effervescent girl despite her young age ...🤗and she is trying to fill his life with love , stability and trust ...
I really Loved Arnav trying to take a step forward in the relationship ... 👍🏼 his " don't say no " made my pulse race ☺️ ☺️ I am hoping they get to take step forward in the intimacy department 😉... may help him in trusting and accepting Khushi more and opening his heart to girl who has seeped into heart and soul ... it may be easier said than done with his trust issues 😔 😔 ... so keeping my fingers crossed here...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi being always the pampered one is coping really well
from understanding to pampering to loving him...she is doing it superbly
their relationship is growing...physically and emotionally
cant wait to read the next chapter
please dont make us wait long

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Posted: 11 years ago
what the...just where did u end...omgod...cant wait for next chapter

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my there seem to be a lot of kisses going around, I love that!
I'm glad you added the POV of Buaji because finally she's seeing her child married off and running her house, I'd love to read Sumer's POV regarding both of his children...

So after knowing his past and what's made me what he is and how and why he's so doubtful she's ensuring that her loved one is getting every bit of love she can give him which he didn't get earlier and that's such a cute thing she's doing

And oh my Arnav just said his desires outloud :O OMG I so excited!!!

Please give us a detailed one and ooo I want the morning after scene in detail too please!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update. It's good to see them moving ahead with their relationship. I hope it's a smooth sail from here on since it took them soo much just to
Get here. Good chapter. Loved it and thank u for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg! Why did u stop there?? Naaahhhiii!! Now I have to wait for the next update! This was easily the best chapter in this series...yet!! I was dying of anticipation! I LOVED buaji's analysis...she's very smart...and the way Khushi understands Arnav is beautiful! This chapter made me so happy!! :-) please belt out the next chapter SOON! PLEASE!

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