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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Thank you to all those who have liked so far!

Originally posted by: Chandu2000
Nice TS !! Waiting for second part eagerly !!

Originally posted by: massu91
Nyc

Originally posted by: farheen75
Loved it.

Originally posted by: Rohinid
Amazing .cont soon

Originally posted by: pari_goyal
liked it...

Originally posted by: bs1224
Loved it
Do continue
Would love to read more...

Originally posted by: nilu_sarunholic
ooh la this was indeed amazing
looking forward for the next part
update soon 😳

Thank you so much, guys!! Next part is up tomorrow!

Originally posted by: ranogill
want to see arnav persevere her...hold to her

I'll try to add some desperation on Arnav's part, but I am not very sure how to fit it in 😕

Originally posted by: sathyaish
wish ths was d real story in channel as wel
tat was amazing

Ah! Thanks for saying that!!

Originally posted by: jyothim78
That's very very interesting turn of events...strong Khushi...physically as we'll ...great...PLS update next part soon...

Yep. Stronger Khushi, weaker Arnav. 😆

I'll be updating the next part tomorrow! Thanks for reading and appreciating!

Edited by chibisuke - 11 years ago

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome Start
Loved It
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part
Continue Soon

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Welcome back Di🥳

WOW this is awesome start 👏

You twisted and gave one of the important scene of IPK a new direction.

Khushi is living alone from everyone, she is surviving perfectly and full of confidence. Khushi was always capable to taking care of herself and people around her 👍🏼

The way you describe khushi's departure from RM brought tears in my eyes, nobody notice her leaving the home except prakash brother and lakshmi ji, not even Arnav.😒 That's so sad because she took care and loved those who didn't deserve it.

I like Veer, he recognize khushi's real talent and urged her to use it. He polished her skills and give confidence and support as a mentor.

Now that Arnav has realize that he was solely responsible for wronging khushi, i am looking forward to read how he make amends to his mistakes.

khushi isn't going to give in easily.

thanks for the pm.

update soon

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

he kept pushing her and yet he expects her to forgive him
she isnt that forgiving mate
and you broke her too much to let her believe in your love
was it really love
well weird love for sure
that believed in hurting her more than anything
so he found her
but she doesnt want to go with him
why should she

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Edited my comment on page 2:D

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

@ArShiDelena: Thank you so much for the comment!! I've accepted your buddy request.. Am glad you liked Part 1!

@Javeria3991: Thank you so much love!! I hope I can do justice to the genre of Angst and your expectations and write Part 2 well!!

@chavvi16: Thank you so much for the comment, girl! I love the fact that you get the angst that I was trying to portray!!

@cheesemad (Komal): THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I missed you too!! I hope I can write Part 2 up to your expectations, you know.. The story will be given an open end, more than a closure.. readers will be allowed to interpret the end the way they want to.. So, I dunno. New writing style, too!

Edited by chibisuke - 11 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: chibisuke
@ArShiDelena: Thank you so much for the comment!! I've accepted your buddy request.. Am glad you liked Part 1!

@Javeria3991: Thank you so much love!! I hope I can do justice to the genre of Angst and your expectations and write Part 2 well!!

@chavvi16: Thank you so much for the comment, girl! I love the fact that you get the angst that I was trying to portray!!

@cheesemad (Komal): THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I missed you too!! I hope I can write Part 2 up to your expectations, you know.. The story will be given an open end, more than a closure.. readers will be allowed to interpret the end the way they want to.. So, I dunno. New writing style, too!

I have complete faith on you and your writing!

Waiting for the second part eagerly😳

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Another brilliant piece or work...Welcome back dear..i missed u and ur stories so much...Such an outstanding start...looking forward for the second part..thanks for pm..🤗

Edited by Chandni.. - 11 years ago