TS| Because I love you... - Page 5

Thanks for the PM.
Mind blowing !!!!!!!!
Whatever I wished to say has been said by Meera30.
Am a Nicolas spark fan.
The very First one I read was A walk to remember .
Then there was no turning back.Collected all his stories.
This story made me feel like Am reading another walk to remember.
Excellent work.

brilliant..very well written...😊

Wow! This was a wonderful start!

fabulous part one.. loved it..

It was just so well written..
The start seemed so poetic and beautiful. The words describing the scene made it a visual. The autumn , the leaves , the surrounding made a beautiful picture.
When she couldn't play the piano for the first time and then her dedication and adamant belief to fulfill her dreams , filled me with a dread inside. Questions flooded , ' what's wrong with her ?' 'Why isn't she able to play the piano ?' etc... The relation between Vijay and Khushi released a very warm vibe and the connection seemed equivalent to a father-daughter relationship.

Arnav and Khushi's relationship , just like a flow of a river - easy and dodging through all the problems hand in hand and always together. Their first meeting and first glance was adorable and cute . Their conversation and confession was heartwarming. I truly feel for them..And my heart unknowingly , in a stride wishes a wish for Khushi's well-being for the sake of their love...
The kitchen scene just gives my heart skip a beat and the desperation of Arnav just tears me up..

Khushi ... She's an independent girl and her facing movement related problems as the symptoms irks her. And still she wants to be ignorant to it and beliefs that she will be fine .And yet she fears if one day she will nor be able to walk or not.. She knows it and she doesn't want to state it due to fear and belief that she will be fine...and I truly hope so too..The fighter that she is , I am sure she will be good.

I think I rambled too much ! Time to zip up ! :p
The first part of the TS is heartbreakingly beautiful and I can hardly wait to read the next part...
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story..😊
Lastly I pray for a happy ending..😊

It's beautifully written, I must say it's a lot disturbing. There is a lot of pain indirectly portrayed! Amazing, thanks for the pm.

Beautiful story! looking forward to part 2.

Another feather on your cap...you writing...and this ..Makes me speechless!

beautiful start hope she's ok